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TARGET
Written by
Vaagn Avakyan
First draft
May 21, 2005
Vaagn Avakyan
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E-mail: vaga05@mail.ru
vaga2004@hotmail.com
BLACK SCREEN
We hear a sound of heart beating in total blackness. Boom-boom, boom-
boom, boom-boom… and so many times.
Then we hear noise of the crowd. Somewhere in the middle of a big city.
And after appearing and dissolving of the head title of the film, we…
FADE IN:
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
At first sight whole image is fuzzy and totally out of focus. Only
bright unclear spots cover the screen. As image becomes clearer and
clearer, we can see the crowd. Lots of people on the street, walking up
and down, moving fast and low.
The sound of heart beating is still heard.
Through the sniper's optical tube, from high angle, we see a face of
the man in a black suit and with tinted glasses, smiling, enters the
frame. He's the Boss. We follow him moving, his head is in the straight
middle of two red crossing lines.
Heart beating rises. Rumble in the crowd rises.
Finally, we hear:
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
What is the life?..
(Pause. Deep rumble
in the crowd).
A nonsense…
(Pause).
Misunderstanding…
(Pause).
A chance…
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Boss, in a black suit, but without tinted glasses, sits behind a huge
luxurious desk and talks slowly and peacefully.
BOSS
A good chance for one person… A bad
chance for another one…
He puts out a Cuban cigar from his pocket.
BOSS
And what's the fair?
(Laughs).
Nothing.
(Pause).
How can we talk about the fair, when
one person judges another person in
this world. A person, who has a real
power, can judge. A person, who has no
any power, can be judged.
Now we see a face of another Man. He sits against Boss, looks at him,
listens carefully. He's absolutely calm. Emotionless.
BOSS
And one thing else.
Small scissors in Boss' hand cut the tip of the cigar.
BOSS
The betrayal.
A big elegant matchbox shakes in Boss' hand. He lights the cigar.
BOSS
Treason…
The cigar's tip goes dark red.
BOSS
Faithlessness…
Man watches him.
Boss is silent.
Then:
BOSS
Whore!
(Pause).
A slut…
Man's eyes turn down.
Boss' eyes shake. He's confused for a moment.
Then:
BOSS
(sharply)
Stop her…
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Two human bodies, male and female, are moving, touching to each other
in the bed. We see only fragments of these bodies twisting in
passionate love agony.
Then Woman's face suddenly fills the frame. Holds.
MAN'S VOICE-OVER
Who is she?
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Same dark and gloomy atmosphere. Both Boss and Man sit against each
other.
BOSS
She is my wife.
A cigar is hold tight between Boss' fingers.
MAN
Do you want to liquidate her?
Boss is silent. His silhouette covers with thick shroud of smoke.
MAN
Do you want me to liquidate her?
BOSS
Yes, I do.
He shakes off the ashes from the tip of the cigar right on the
expensive desk.
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
On TV screen we see a football match. Football player runs through the
field. There is no sound, the sound is almost turned off.
The woman, half-naked, sits on the bed, looks towards TV and talks
slowly to someone off screen.
WOMAN
Why are you asking about my
husband?
(Pause).
Do you know him?
SOMEONE (OS)
No.
WOMAN
He's… quite strong…
(Pause).
What? Is it bothering you?
We hear now:
MAN'S VOICE-OVER
(to Boss)
Is it so bothering you?
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
Yes, it is.
MAN'S VOICE-OVER
Are you sure there is no other way?
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
Yes, I am.
Football game on TV screen in it's progress.
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
I have already decided I want her
to be dead.
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
MAN
I do it with women quite rarely.
Never with children.
BOSS
I know. But I'm going to pay you as
I never pay.
Man looks into Boss' eyes.
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
WOMAN
…he never pay me. He knew I
wouldn't allow him to pay, just because
I was not like these girls…
(Laughs).
I didn't want him to buy my love, I
just loved him. Are you surprised?
Didn't you expect that from me?
She lights a cigarette. Smokes.
WOMAN
But it has gone. All feelings have
gone… disappeared…
She's nervous. Tears almost appear on her eyes.
WOMAN
I loved him. I really loved him. I
do love him still… But he always
saw me as a doll. Just as an expensive
toy.
(Pause).
I can't stand that anymore. I came
here with you, I've betrayed him… And
I still have this terrible pain in my
heart.
She sobs.
A male hand appears and touches to her face carefully.
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
MAN
So, and what about him?
BOSS
About who?
MAN
About your wife's lover?
Man is silent. Still.
Cigar shakes in his hand.
BOSS
I haven't any idea who he is.
(Pause).
Besides… I don't want to deal with
him, whoever he is… This is HER fault.
Not HIS. This was HER choice. Not HIS.
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Woman is sobbing.
WOMAN
I don't want to live… I love him…
I love him so much, you even can't
imagine… He's everything to me, he's
all my life, you know, and I don't know
what I'm going to do now…
(Pause).
This betrayal… Oh God, it was just my…
I didn't know what to do… I did this
only because of his coldness… and my
stubbornness…
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Both men are surrounded with thick shroud of smoke.
BOSS
That's all. Never marry a woman.
(Grins).
A pause. Silence.
MAN
Didn't you think she loves you?
BOSS
What?
MAN
Maybe she loves you? Why do you
want to kill her?
BOSS
What in the goddamn hell do you know
about the love!
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
On TV - a culmination moment in the football game. Goal!!!
WOMAN
I'm a silly idiot…
A male hand moves again towards her face. Slowly and nicely caresses
her forehead, her chin, her neck.
SOMEONE (OS)
(in a low voice)
Don't worry… Don't be worry…
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Boss is furious.
BOSS
…so what are you going to teach me?
What are you going to say me after
all that, huh? "She's innocent, let her
go, forgive her…" or some other
sentimental crap like that? No! Never!
No way! And do you know why? Because
you are going to kill her!!!
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Woman's embarrassed face. Tears on her cheeks.
SOMEONE (OS)
I love you, Kathryn… I love you,
too…
WOMAN
(confused)
What do you mean?
A male hand dries tears from her face.
SOMEONE (OS)
(whispers)
I love you…
And his face, finally, enters the frame. He's the Man!
He gives a sad smile. It seems like it is the first-time smile in his
life.
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
MAN
(in lower metal voice)
When?
BOSS
The day after tomorrow. In the fashion
ceremony show. We'll be together there.
It's the best alibi for me.
MAN
Where?..
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
From above - the street is full of crowd.
Red carpet. Solemn atmosphere. Photographer's flashes.
Luxurious cars and limousines arrive to the entrance.
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Boss' hands push the photo of Woman on table…
…towards Man.
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man's hands open a long violin case. There is a non-assembled
telescopic rifle.
Dark and beautiful sunset illuminates dusty loft through a small
window.
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Boss looks at Man with his cool-headed gaze.
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Man looks at Woman.
Her tearful face is still beautiful. Still attractive and nice.
WOMAN
Don't be ridiculous…
She grins. She almost finishes her dressing.
WOMAN
…it's all over…
MAN
What are you doing? Where are you
going?
WOMAN
I have a meeting… and it's almost
5 pm…
MAN
Where?
WOMAN
At a fashion party… with my husband…
On TV - the match ends. We see happy players from the winning team.
Man wants to say her something, something very important, but he can't.
Finally:
MAN
Don't go… Please…
WOMAN
(grins)
Don't be silly…
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Close on Boss' lips.
BOSS
(whispers)
Kill her…
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Man watches her leaving the room. Door shuts after her.
Man gives a start suddenly. For the first time in his life!
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Cuban cigar between Boss' fingers. It's almost completed.
The last ashes fall down…
Flash! A photo of Woman…
Flash again!
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man's hands get the parts of telescopic rifle from the case.
He assembles the rifle.
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
From above - a huge black Mercedes stops at the entrance.
Photographers and journalists take pictures with flashes. Crowd buzzes.
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Click! The barrel is already connected…
Click-click! The optical tube is ready…
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Boss and Woman goes out from the Mercedes. Flashes… buzz… noise…
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man, the sniper, is ready with his rifle.
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Through sniper's sight we follow Boss, like in the beginning of our
story. He's extremely elegant in his expensive black suit and with
tinted glasses. He smiles.
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man's face.
His eye beyond the optical tube. He watches.
We hear Boss' low voice, like in the beginning of the story.
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
What is the life?..
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Sniper's view pans from the Boss' smiling gaze towards… Woman, who is
next to him. She's thoughtful, her face is rather sad than happy.
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
A nonsense… Misunderstanding…
Sniper's view follows Woman.
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
A chance…
Flash!
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man's wide-open eye beyond the optical tube.
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
A good chance for one person…
Flash! Back to:
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Boss at his desk.
BOSS
A bad chance for another one…
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Woman is sitting on the bed, half-naked. She's stopped her weeping, her
tears are dried on her face.
BOSS' VOICE-OVER
And the fair?
(Pause).
Nothing.
Man moves closer to Woman.
MAN
(in a low voice)
So, what are you going to do now?
INT - BACK ROOM - NIGHT
Man is sitting against Boss.
BOSS (OS)
…when one person judges another one…
A person, who has a real power…
INT - HOTEL ROOM - DAY
Woman looks straight into Man's eyes.
WOMAN
(answering his question)
Nothing.
MAN
But… I told you the truth!
(Pause).
He's going to kill you. I… I am
going to kill you… for him… don't you
understand that?!
WOMAN
I understand everything.
(Pause).
But I told you I love him.
(Pause).
And if he has made this decision… I…
I can only agree with him…
Man is shocked. He looks at her strong and beautiful face.
She's putting on her clothes.
MAN
(puzzled)
Don't you even want to know - where
it is going to happen?
WOMAN
(grins)
Don't be ridiculous…
Flash!
He looks her leaving the room. Door shuts.
Flash!
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man's finger moves to the trigger.
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Through the sniper's optical tube - Woman moves to the entrance. The
view moves towards Boss, who is next to her. He slows down his step,
puts off his tinted glasses.
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man's face, his eye beyond the optical tube.
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Through the tube - Boss looks around. The smile slowly disappears from
his face.
He raises his eyes suddenly, for a moment… and his eyes…
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
…meet with Man's eyes.
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Through the tube - Boss turns back slowly… sniper's view moves a bit
and focuses on Woman… She also turns back her head…
The deep sound of crowd's buzz. Then we hear a sound of heart beating.
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Man's finger is on the trigger. Heart beating sound.
Man's eye. Heart beating sound. Crowd buzzes.
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Boss and Woman are almost entering the building.
She moves forward slowly, her back is turned to us.
Crowd buzzes. Heart beating sound fasters.
Camera dollies promptly to Woman at the entrance… making its way
through the heavy-crowded street…
We hear a crashing sound somewhere behind…
The opposite building.
In extremely slow motion we see Man jumping out from the upper window
of the building.
Woman slowly turns her head back.
Man's body drops down… so as splinters of broken window.
Heart beating sound. Someone screams on the street.
Woman's gaze in slow motion.
Boss' gaze in slow motion.
Man's body on the ground. His eyes are open, he's breathing hardly.
INT - LOFT (CITY CENTRE) - SUNSET
Telescopic rifle is on the floor, nearby the opened case.
Dark-orange rays of settling sun illuminates the loft with a mystic and
beautiful light.
From outside we hear nervous and exited people voices… a police car and
ambulance siren…
EXT - CITY CENTRE - SUNSET
Man, lying on the ground, is surrounded by the crowd.
A few police officers go out from the cars and moves through the crowd.
Man's eye is half-open. Settling sun reflects in it.
His lips freeze. He breathes harder and harder.
Woman looks at the accident place. Her gaze goes down.
Boss' gaze is hard and complicated.
Finally, his hand squeezes her hand.
BOSS
(in a low voice)
Lets go…
He leads her to the entrance.
Man's eyes freeze. His breath freeze. He dies.
Police officers and ambulance doctor approach him.
Policemen move through the crowded street.
POLICE OFFICER
All right… Get back… Everybody back,
back, back… Move away from the place…
Clear out the street…
Sun has almost disappeared behind the high buildings.
From above we can see the city centre… the accident place… policemen
and ambulance doctors doing their job… and the crowd dispersing…
FADE OUT
CREDITS ROLL
THE END