The Unfolding Ballad
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               FADE IN SLOWLY:



               EXT. LAKESIDE - DAY

               WE SEE trees, snowfall, and a handsome YOUNG MAN, 20, who
               sits in the snow dressed for autumn.  He is depressed with
               cold hands seeking warmth inside his pockets.

               SUPERIMPOSE - DECEMBER 31ST, 2001



               EXT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - DAY

               New Jersey suburbia.  A large American flag dangles on the
               property.  The young man enters through the front door.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - DAY

               The young man strolls throughout like a tourist.



               LIVING ROOM

               He discovers a family portrait.  We don't see this photo,
               though the young man studies it thoroughly.  Then, SOMEONE
               enters through the front door.  The young man freezes.
               Unseen, the person walks upstairs and returns to the outside
               shortly, oblivious to the young man's presence.  The young
               man walks to a window to watch the person leave in a car.



               EXT. LAKESIDE - NIGHT

               TYM (the young man) slowly falls asleep in the snow.



               EXT. HILLSIDE - FANTASY - DAY

               WE SEE two rainbows, flocks of birds, flowers, and sunshine.
               A unicorn appears from beyond the hillside.  An obvious
               dreamlike image.



               EXT. LAKESIDE - MORNING

               A pair of black boots CRUNCH the snow.  A MAN dressed in
               black marches towards him.

               Tym fakes sleeping and shuts his eyes tight.

               The man in black, a mysterious one, suddenly arrives by Tym
               standing above him.  From inside his black overcoat he pulls
               out a handgun and sets it besides Tym.  The man's face is
               hidden.  The man in black walks away, vanishing.  Tym opens
               his eyes.  He grabs the gun where he expected it to be.



               EXT. INTERSTATE - DUSK

               Tym walks the shoulder lane to home.



               EXT. DELAWARE MEMORIAL BRIDGE - DAY

               Tym walks across the bridge, high above the Delaware River.



               EXT. VANDERSLICE HOME - NIGHT

               A Lincoln Navigator with Delaware tags pulls into the
               driveway.  BRIAN VANDERSLICE, 38, readies to exit the
               Navigator. Tym sneakily approaches Brian and fires six
               bullets at close range into him.



               INT. VANDERSLICE HOME - NIGHT

               HOLLY VANDERSLICE, 38, Brian's wife, has heard the shots,
               terrified as she approaches her front door.



               EXT. VANDERSLICE HOME - NIGHT

               Tym is aiming the gun at the front door.  He shoots once.

               WE HEAR Brian's blood dripping into a puddle already
               existing. 

               Snowflakes begin to fall from the sky.

               End titles.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - MORNING

               The season is summer.  A phone RINGS.  Tym ignores it.  He
               opens his eyes to "8:46" on a clock radio.  An airplane soars
               above the house ROARING.



               INT. DAMON'S - MORNING

               Tym is in a booth in a popular restaurant called Damon's, an
               upgrade from Denny's.  The entire interior is black and white
               while breakfast is served.  It's jammed packed. 

               He looks around and sees the round, alluring brown eyes of a
               young woman seated nearby.  Her name is LEVITIA, 20.  She's
               with her MOTHER.  Levitia wears a red top -- the only person
               donning the color.  Half Mexican and half white, her long
               auburn and dark brown hair complements her outfit with
               perfection. 

               Then, her eyes meet Tym's.  Tym looks away.  So does the
               Levitia.  They play this game two more times and Tym almost
               smiles to himself.  She does as well.  

               A WAITRESS delivers two glasses of water.

                                   WAITRESS
                         And your water has arrived. 

               She slips him her phone number.

                                   TYM
                         Thank you... for the water. 

               The waitress smiles and flees.



               GABRIEL GROOM

               sips the hottest cup of coffee.  At 49, he's among world's
               greatest homicide detectives, carrying a dark intellect, and
               seated behind Tym in the adjacent booth.  Their backs are to
               each other.

               His cell phone RINGS.  Gabriel answers it.



               EXT. STREET - NORTH PHILADELPHIA - MORNING

               TY KENT, a thug residing from North Philly, is on the other
               end of the line making threats.  The SOUND of Damon's is all
               we hear.



               INT. DAMON'S - MORNING

               Tym chews some gum briefly and sticks a quarter onto it. 
               Then he stamps it under the table.  ANGELA, the blonde
               hostess, awaits for Tym's attention.  With her is HOPE, a 28
               year-old beauty.

                                   ANGELA
                         Can you do me a favor, old friend?

                                   TYM
                         Depends.

                                   ANGELA
                         Do you mind if she sits here and
                         eats with you?

                                   HOPE
                         I won't bite.

                                   TYM
                         Sit.

                                   HOPE
                         Thanks.

                                   ANGELA
                             (to Hope)
                         Don't worry.  He's really a nice
                         guy.  And I'll send the waitress
                         for you as quickly as I can, all
                         right?

                                   HOPE
                         Thank you.

               Angela leaves.

                                   HOPE
                         You sure you don't mind me sitting
                         here?

                                   TYM
                         I'm sure.

               Hope gently and smoothly caresses her forehead.

                                   HOPE
                             (quietly to herself)
                         God damn it.

                                   TYM
                         Are you cold?

                                   HOPE
                         No, not in July.

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         I can tell you right now you're not
                         from around here are you?

                                   HOPE
                         And how can you tell that?

                                   TYM
                         Where are you from?

                                   HOPE
                         Brooklyn.

                                   TYM
                         Really?

                                   HOPE
                         Wouldn't wanna be from anywhere
                         else, so, really.  Where'd you
                         think I was from?

                                   TYM
                         I pictured you as one of those rich
                         Martha's Vineyard citizens or from
                         The Hamptons.

                                   HOPE
                         That's funny.  No, I'm from
                         Brooklyn, born and raised. 

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         You ever think of time as being a
                         countdown instead of a progression?

                                   HOPE
                             (puzzled)
                         Ummm, no.

                                   TYM
                         Where we're not actually going
                         forward, but backwards. 

               Hope thinks it over.

                                   HOPE
                         Were you one of those prodigies of
                         some sort, on his way to M.I.T.,
                         trying to discover something as
                         much as impossible as it is
                         ingenious like, the speed of
                         darkness? 

               Tym thinks it over.  At this point, we know Gabriel is
               furious. 

               CLING!  Hope is startled as Gabriel hammers a fist onto his
               table.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Niggers.  They must be annihilated.
                         All of them.  But him first. 

               Gabriel rises and leaves Damon's.

                                   TYM
                         You have a headache?

                                   HOPE
                         Yeah, but a migraine it seems like
                         though.

                                   TYM
                         Well, congratulations.

                                   HOPE
                         Excuse me?

                                   TYM
                         Your newborn.  She must be, or he
                         must be nine, eleven months old by
                         now.

                                   HOPE
                         Son of a bitch -- wait -- do I know
                         you?

                                   TYM
                         Doubt it.

                                   HOPE
                         Then how do you know this?  Am I
                         still showing a little?

                                   TYM
                         Not at all.  I remember you from
                         the hospital

                                   HOPE
                         You really remember me?

                                   TYM
                         Really.

                                   HOPE
                         Wow.  That's amazing that you can
                         remember me, a total stranger, from
                         that long ago.

                                   TYM
                         Well, I have this, memory thingy.
                         It's perfect.  Everything or
                         anything of interest just stays
                         with me.

                                   HOPE
                         Hmm.  I've never heard of that
                         before. 

               Hope grins and doesn't believe any of it.

                                   TYM
                         What's that like, being a mother?

                                   HOPE
                         The greatest.  I believe every new
                         life conquers any new death. 
                         Remember that if you will.

                                   TYM
                         I will.  A boy or girl?

                                   HOPE
                         Girl.

                                   TYM
                         Name?

                                   HOPE
                         Carly.

                                   TYM
                         And where is he?

                                   HOPE
                         He is, I-don't-care.

                                   TYM
                             (carefully asked)
                         Why?

                                   HOPE
                         He hit me.  He struck me so hard I
                         now have an ongoing dilemma with
                         these sinister headaches.

                                   TYM
                         There's these two dummies lost in
                         the woods.  I mean, they're
                         certified dumb.  Vivid and
                         blatantly.  I mean, these two dumb
                         bastards are the dumbest beings
                         that have ever existed on Earth. 
                         So they're walking and walking
                         without a clue of where they are. 
                         Then they come across a river.  Not
                         a real river.  More like a stream
                         you know, a creek, that type of
                         thing. And Dummy Number One asks
                         Dummy Number Two, "How the hell are
                         we gonna get across this river?" 
                         Dummy Number Two says, "Why don't
                         you go look for some branches,
                         twigs, sticks, logs, anything to
                         make a bridge?"  So he goes and is
                         gone without thinking twice about
                         it.  About three hours later, this
                         dummy returns with enough branches
                         to build another Brooklyn Bridge. 
                         But when he gets back he sees his
                         friend, Dummy Number One already
                         across the river.  So he's pissed,
                         real pissed, and he says, "Shit! 
                         Now how am I gonna get across the
                         river?" 

               Tym is about to deliver the greatest punchline ever.

                                   TYM
                         And Dummy Number One says --
                             (pause)
                         -- "You dumb motherfucker!  You are
                         across the river!" 

               Hope CRIES OUT laughing.  She attracts much attention.

                                   HOPE
                         Oh my God!

                                   TYM
                         You okay?

               She calms.

                                   HOPE
                         Wow.  That was so lame and cute.

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.  My brother told me that
                         joke.

                                   HOPE
                             (appreciative)
                         You're a diamond with a pulse.

                                   TYM
                         What's your name?

                                   HOPE
                         Hope.

                                   TYM
                         Without you there's no hope for me.

                                   HOPE
                         Oh, god.  Congratulations, you're
                         Asshole Number 3,000.

               Tym shivers.

                                   TYM
                         Are you cold?



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - MORNING



               BEDROOM

               Gabriel loads a clip into a Desert Eagle.  BLAM!  He fires
               and shoots a pillow on his bed.



               KITCHEN

               Gabriel stands at the counter and sips on a cup of coffee.
               His wife, MARY, enters the two-story house and into the
               kitchen with two bags of groceries.  She looks to be 30, but
               in fact is closer to 45, over-wearing her make-up, wanting to
               be noticed.

                                   MARY
                         Hi.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (quietly)
                         Hey.

               We instantly assume the couple is on the brink of a divorce. 
               Mary puts away the groceries.

                                   MARY
                         Bianca called. She's engaged now.
                             (a beat)
                         Your son called also.  He's doing
                         fine. 

               Mary stops to declare Gabriel's complete attention.

                                   MARY
                         Gabriel, Look at me. 

               He refuses.

                                   MARY
                             (furious)
                         GABRIEL!

               Gabriel, unmoved, gently puts down his cup.

                                   MARY
                         I want you to retire.

                                   GABRIEL
                         That is an impossibility.

                                   MARY
                         I just told you your son called.
                         He's out there, God knows where
                         exactly and you stand here showing
                         not a hint of curiosity.  You're
                         neglecting my son!  My son!  It's
                         nothing at all to you.

                                   GABRIEL
                         He left.

                                   MARY
                         Listen, he --

                                   GABRIEL
                         -- He left.

               A beat.  Mary moves closer and more solemn.

                                   MARY
                         So he could be starving right this
                         minute and you wouldn't give a
                         damn?

                                   GABRIEL
                         He left.

               She moves closer.

                                   MARY
                         He could be dead, God forbid, and
                         you wouldn't care? 

               A beat.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (boldly)
                         He left.

               Mary SMACKS Gabriel across the cheek.

                                   MARY
                         God damn and fuck you, Gabe!

                                   GABRIEL
                         No, fuck you.

               There is absolute silence.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Nobody can understand how I feel.

                                   MARY
                         Leave.  You leave, now. 

               Everything is still.

                                   MARY
                         Gabriel I want you TO LEAVE NOW!
                         LEAVE!!

               Gabriel rushes to the bedroom.



               BEDROOM

               Gabriel equips himself with a gun.



               EXT. GABRIEL'S HOME - MORNING

               Gabriel hurries to his car and speeds off.



               EXT. DOWNTOWN PHILADELPHIA - DAY

               Gabriel is the sole person standing still and erect within
               the vast mobile pedestrian crowd.

               His finger is on the trigger of a gun.



               EXT. PHILADELPHIA SKYLINE - DAY

               Establishing where we are, the City of Brotherly Love never
               looked so grand when represented.



               EXT. DOWNTOWN PHILADELPHIA - DAY

               Gabriel begins to march across the street into oncoming
               traffic.  Cars SWERVE, BRAKE, and SKID, avoiding life
               threatening collisions.  He's pacing for a group of BLACK
               TEENAGERS with an intention to shoot and kill.  The group
               finally spots Gabriel coming from the chaos in the street. 
               They meet.  Gabriel stares at them, and they stare back,
               startled.

                                   GABRIEL
                         The only reason you niggers get to
                         see another day, get to breathe
                         another breath, is because I chose
                         not to.  Remember me always.



               TEENAGERS

               We're struck as they are, viewing our personal fear of death
               and reaction in their own eyes.



               EXT. STREET - NORTH PHILADELPHIA - DAY

               Gabriel's car brakes hard.  FOUR YOUNG BLACK MEN, a crew, are
               hanging out on a corner in front of a deli.  Gabriel goes
               directly after one of them, tackling him to the sidewalk
               following with a gun to his head.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Where is he?  No.  Tell him to
                         come. 

               The man YELLS in pain.  Gabriel reacts almost pulling the
               trigger.

               In SLOW MOTION, the three other black men each draw their own
               pistols simultaneously.

               Gabriel looks over realizing his own life is not for trade.
               He withdrawals.



               INT. GYMNASIUM - NIGHT

               A 4th of July party in progress.  EVERYBODY in town has
               attended.  A microcosm of America's population is here.  Hip
               hop music BLARES loud enough to deafen.  Four wall-to-wall
               American flags decorate each side of the gym's interior.
               There's even a bar set up.  Tym enters and it's like a
               celebrity sighting.  Everyone knows him shaking hands as he
               fights through the crowd like a snake in a grassland.  He
               eventually runs into JEFF, 21.

                                   TYM
                         You've seen her around?

                                   JEFF
                         What?

                                   TYM
                             (louder)
                         Have you seen her?

                                   JEFF
                         No!

               RAVEN, 18, sits with Angela, bored.

                                   ANGELA
                         Look who just stepped in the
                         building. 

               Raven smiles.

                                   ANGELA
                         You're in love.

                                   RAVEN
                         I don't even know him all that
                         well.

               Tym bumps into KAREN, 19, an attractive, short brunette
               carrying a seductive aura.

                                   KAREN
                         Hey, what's your name?

                                   TYM
                         Who wants to know?

                                   KAREN
                             (moves in skin tight)
                         I do.

                                   TYM
                         Okay.  Listen carefully, cause I'm
                         serious, okay?  If you really wanna
                         know, call me, and I'll tell you
                         everything about me you wanna know.

                                   KAREN
                         Okay, what's your number?

                                   TYM
                         If you really wanna know, you'll
                         find that out without my help.

                                   KAREN
                         Why don't you just tell me? 

               Tym shakes his head, no.

                                   ANGELA
                         Stay here.

               Angela heads for Tym.

                                   ANGELA
                         Raven's over there.  She wants to
                         talk to you.

                                   TYM
                         Where?  Oh, I see.

               On his way to Raven, Tym shakes hands with SAMMY, 21 and
               Laotian.  There he also runs into RON, 20, a black guy who
               raps.

                                   RAVEN
                         What's up?

                                   TYM
                         You tell me.

                                   RAVEN
                         Nothing at all.

                                   TYM
                         How are you feeling?

                                   RAVEN
                         I'm fine, thank you. 

               They both look into the massive crowd.  Jay-Z's hit from the
               2001 summer, "Izzo (H.O.V.A)" starts an instant buzz.  Raven
               is into the music.  A YOUNG MAN approaches her.

                                   YOUNG MAN
                             (reaching out for Raven's
                              hand)
                         Come on.

               She smiles and dances with the young man.  Then red, blue,
               and white strobe lights begin to FLASH ON AND OFF.



               INT. LEVITIA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Levitia reads a novel.  Shortly her concentration strays
               elsewhere thinking of someone.  She feels a chill and rubs
               her arm.



               INT. GYMNASIUM - NIGHT

               Tym feels a chill and rubs his arm.  The DEEJAY, black and
               26, stops the music.  Everyone boos him.

                                   D.J.
                         Yo this is what's up.  It's about
                         time for that time.  Financed,
                         sponsored, brought to you and all
                         that good stuff by my man who put
                         together this party, no other than 
                         - 

               His mic cuts off.  The deejay points to Tym.  Tym makes
               himself known to all and bows.  The deejay taps the mic and
               sound returns.

                                   D.J.
                         -- who will now provide you and I
                         with another surprise outside.  So
                         we gonna take this party out onto
                         the football field where we got
                         somethin' special set up for this
                         special 4th of July celebration.
                         Knah'mean?  Let's go!

               A DRUNK yells out --

                                   DRUNK
                         U.S.A.!  U.S.A.!  U.S.A.!!

               The party follows the chant as they exit the gym.

                                   RAVEN
                             (to Tym)
                         What's the surprise?

                                   TYM
                         It's not really a surprise, but I
                         do have one that I have to give to
                         you, personally.

                                   RAVEN
                         When?

                                   TYM
                         An hour and a half or two. 

               Angela arrives to pick up Raven.

                                   ANGELA
                         Come here, I gotta show you
                         something! 

               She drags her away.  Tym is left alone and the gym is nearly
               vacant.  The strobe lights keep FLASHING and the gym is
               emptied.  Tym sits in the same spot.  He notices not too far
               away a GIRL crying her heart out silently.  She's screaming,
               yet nothing is heard.



               EXT. FOOTBALL STADIUM - NIGHT

               The party is set on a high school football field.

                                   D.J.
                         Okay I'm gonna need a countdown for
                         the surprise, aight?  Here we go.

                                   PARTY
                         7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1!!

               Tym sits high up in the bleachers, alone.  On zero, the
               deejay cues the music's return while professional red, white,
               and blue fireworks shoot up into the sky.  Tym looks down on
               what he has created, impressed.



               INT. LEVITIA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Levitia is glancing out her window and can see the fireworks.
               It puts a smile on her face.



               EXT. ROADSIDE - NIGHT

               A lonesome area.  Gabriel leans against his car seeing the
               fireworks.  During each firework he empties a round from his
               gun into the air.  Distraught, he twitches quite often.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Lord Jesus, please warn everyone
                         about me.



               INT. GABRIEL'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Ready for bed, Mary pulls back the covers.  She wonders about
               a bullet hole in her pillow.



               EXT. FOOTBALL STADIUM - NIGHT

               Directly across from Tym, a figure is noticed in the opposing
               bleachers.  A MAN, unidentifiable.  The fireworks light up
               everything in sight but him.  It's as if he is a shadow.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - LATER THAT NIGHT

               Upper middle class Delaware suburbia.  A brand new home.  The
               room is extremely neat with many symmetrical arrangements.

                                   RAVEN
                         How did you set up that party
                         tonight?

                                   TYM
                         Why?

                                   RAVEN
                         I just wanna know.  You know, I
                         don't even know you and I'm in your
                         bedroom.  That's somewhat of a bad
                         combination.

                                   TYM
                         You know I'm not gonna do anything
                         to you.

                                   RAVEN
                         I'm not assuming anything.  I just
                         wanna know who's bedroom I'm in.

                                   TYM
                         I understand, but I'm not like
                         other guys.  So, don't worry.  I'm
                         cool. He's by the window now.

                                   RAVEN
                         Yeah, that's the same thing Michael
                         Jackson said in the Thriller video. 

               A beat.

                                   RAVEN
                         What?  What are you looking at? 

               Tym sees someone walking to the front door.  A MAN dressed in
               black wearing a ski mask.

                                   TYM
                         Shhh.  Call the cops.

               Tym stands at the top of the stairs looking down into total
               darkness.  Light from the bedroom contrasts the visibility of
               the two floors.  From the darkness below comes flying a sharp
               and shining blade!  It passes above Tym's shoulder.  Running
               footsteps are heard downstairs.  Tym chases after them.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT

               Tym charges out of his house holding a gun ready to shoot
               anyone in sight but fails to find a single soul.



               INT. GABRIEL'S CAR - NIGHT

               He's approaching Tym's house.  Two state police cars are
               already parked there.  Along with Gabe is RICHARD, 27, a very
               tall and novice detective.

                                   RICHARD
                         What's this about?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Could be something, or it could be
                         everything.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT

               Tym and Raven sit on the front steps.  Raven remains scared.
               TWO STATE POLICE OFFICERS are talking things over on the
               driveway.  Gabriel arrives and joins the officers.  Richard
               walks to Tym and Raven.

                                   RICHARD
                         You two okay?

               Raven nods, yes.  Tym's attention is directed at Gabriel.

                                   RICHARD
                         All right, can I get your name?

                                   RAVEN
                         Raven.

                                   RICHARD
                         And your boyfriend here?

                                   TYM
                         We're just friends.  What's your
                         name?

                                   RICHARD
                         My name?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.

                                   RICHARD
                         Detective.

                                   TYM
                         Okay, Dick.  You two the back up?

                                   RICHARD
                         No, we're actually looking for
                         someone and my partner believes
                         this guy that broke into your house
                         tonight could have something to do
                         with that.

                                   TYM
                         And you don't?

                                   RICHARD
                         I face facts, but he's supposedly
                         the best.  As prime as they come.
                         The highest of the highs in this
                         line of work.

                                   TYM
                         What makes him so special?

                                   RICHARD
                         Never has let one murder go
                         unsolved.  Never.  If his badge
                         pissed all the other cops would
                         need umbrellas for theirs.
                         So, can you briefly describe the
                         night for me?

                                   RAVEN
                         I'm gonna go.

               Raven leaves.  She is too stressed out.



               EXT. VANDERSLICE HOME - DAY

               Gabriel rings the doorbell.  He feels on a bullet hole in the
               door.  Holly Vanderslice opens the door.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         Thank you for coming.



               INT. VANDERSLICE HOME - DAY



               LIVING ROOM

               Holly and Gabriel both sip on hot cups of coffee.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         For so long I've wished that I
                         should have opened that door, just
                         so we could see each other and feel
                         each other just one last time even
                         if it meant my life as well.  I was
                         empty.  Not to know why my husband
                         was murdered, it's really hard to
                         grasp.  And I haven't yet still. 
                         And to live without him didn't
                         serve a purpose.  But somehow, now
                         I know there's hope.  Mr. Groom, I
                         have a request.

                                   GABRIEL
                         What is your request?

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         I need you to find the person who
                         took my husband from me, and I need
                         you to kill him.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Holly, I swear to you on my son's
                         life, it is done.  It's only a
                         short matter of time now.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         Thank you.



               INT. PUBLIC LIBRARY - DAY

               Tym walks down different aisles throwing his arm out,
               randomly selecting three books.  At a table he skims through
               pages.

               BOOK #1 - WE SEE disturbing pictures from The Holocaust of
               World War II.  

               Tym chooses the other book.

               BOOK #2 - WE SEE pictures of blacks lynched in the early 20th
               century. 

               Tym returns the two books.



               GABRIEL

               sits at table reading a book on U.F.O.'s.

                                   TYM (O.S.)
                         E.T. wanted for murder? 

               Tym comes INTO VIEW sitting across from Gabriel.  They
               finally meet face to face.

                                   GABRIEL
                         No, he is not.

               Gabriel stares at Tym's book.

                                   TYM
                         Physics and that stuff.  Figured
                         I'd finally crack the great mystery
                         of time travel.
                             (a beat)
                         You don't have the slightest clue
                         who I am, do you?

                                   GABRIEL
                         And you know who I am?  A lot of
                         people do.

                                   TYM
                         Were you abducted by aliens before?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Young man, I'm not in any mood to
                         be taken lightly.

                                   TYM
                         Detective Groom, I'm gonna look you
                         the eyes and try to let you know
                         how serious I am.  I'm gonna take
                         somebody's life, and I want you to
                         solve the case since you're the
                         best.  That simple. 

               Gabriel sets aside his book.

                                   GABRIEL
                         You are serious?

                                   TYM
                         Swear to God and all I am.

                                   GABRIEL
                         And you're challenging me?
                             (speaks in Italian;
                              English subtitles)
                         Young and dumb.

                                   TYM
                         Call it whatever you choose to, but
                         someone will surely die.

                                   GABRIEL
                         This challenge, I am honored to
                         accept.  But, you listen to me and
                         you listen with both right and left
                         ears.  To ask what you're asking
                         for is to ask for death.  You think
                         you know me, no.  Maybe you knew
                         me.  But you don't have a fuckin'
                         clue what I would do to you.  I beg
                         you to reflect your intentions.

                                   TYM
                             (speaks in Italian;
                              English subtitles)
                         That is an impossibility.

               A beat.

                                   GABRIEL
                         A nigger recently killed my
                         brother.  You're gonna kill someone
                         else's brother or son or father. 
                         You and that nigger will become the
                         same to me.
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Wherever you will be, I will be. 

                                   TYM
                         Would you spare my life if I told
                         you that someone is trying to kill
                         me and that I am just taking the
                         law into my own hands?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Then you should notify an
                         authority.  Is this the true reason
                         why you are here?

                                   TYM
                         No.  My situation is very
                         complicated.  No one can understand
                         what I am going through.
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         That's all I have to say.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Then it is done? 

               Tym rises to leave.

                                   TYM
                         Much sooner than you'll ever think.



               EXT. SIDEWALK - DAY

               Gabriel is interrogating Raven.

                                   RAVEN
                         He's funny, gentle, yet bold and
                         direct. Everybody likes him.  Very
                         unselfish.  But, I guess you can
                         say he's a little weird.  Not in a
                         bad way though.  He's just probably
                         on another intellectual level than
                         most of us, or probably all of us. 
                         Like, he might just say something
                         out of the blue like --



               EXT. PARK - DAY

               Tym is leaning down, feeling the ground.

                                   TYM
                         I can feel the earth rotating.



               EXT. SIDEWALK - DAY

                                   RAVEN
                         But, he's harmless.



               INT. GABRIEL'S OFFICE - DAY

               Tym is interrogating Richard.

                                   RICHARD
                         He can be very intimidating.  Ever
                         since his brother was murdered they
                         say he lost knowledge of himself. 
                         I never knew the real him, but you
                         can easily tell he's very distant.
                             (a beat)
                         A couple months back, when we uh --
                         when I first got assigned to him,
                         we went to a house to arrest an old
                         man who had killed his own niece. 
                         He let's us in and confesses,
                         casually gets ready to go to jail
                         for the rest of his life, leaves
                         the room and comes back firing a
                         shotgun bigger than a tree. 
                         Gabriel takes him out without fear
                         or hesitation.  It's over within
                         seconds.  But, by the time I
                         finally realized what had just
                         happened, Gabe walks up to the old
                         man who's dead already, and --



               INT. OLD MAN'S HOUSE - DAY

               Gabriel approaches the corpse of the OLD MAN.

                                   RICHARD (V.O.)
                         He empties a clip into the man's
                         skull.

               Gabriel shoots.  Then he calmly walks by Richard and exits
               the house.

                                   RICHARD (V.O.)
                         When he's finished he walks past me
                         without any eye contact whatsoever.



               INT. GABRIEL'S OFFICE - DAY

                                   RICHARD
                         Killings kill him inside.  Your
                         friend might just be one of the
                         most dangerous men on Earth.  But
                         what do I know?



               INT. GABRIEL'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Mary's in bed half sleep. Gabriel sits next to wife and is
               delicate.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         I need you.
                             (speaks)
                         Mary, I need you.
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         If we are none, then suicide is my
                         only option.
                             (speaks)
                         Everything will change.  I'll give
                         you all my heart and apologize for
                         all there is to take back.
                             (kisses her)
                         You just have to understand the
                         promise I made.  This last one and
                         it is done.  You will have me back. 
                         Bear with me.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - LATER THAT NIGHT



               BEDROOM

               Gabriel and Mary are under their covers.  Gabriel awakens to
               a sense of danger.



               DOWNSTAIRS

               Gabriel peeks through a window downstairs.  He sees a YOUNG
               MAN dressed in black across the street slowly pacing. 
               Gabriel has a gun armed ready for anything.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Tym and Raven prepare to dine at a table for two.  They are
               mute at first.  Then, their waitress arrives, an Italian
               belle named BIANCA, 21, who's very lively with tons of
               smiles.

                                   BIANCA
                         You two ready to order yet?

                                   RAVEN
                         I'm sorry.  I still can't decide.

                                   BIANCA
                         No problem. Take your time.

                                   TYM
                         I'll have a cheeseburger, with no
                         cheese.

                                   BIANCA
                             (smiling)
                         So, you just want a regular
                         hamburger?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.  Please.

               Tym notices Bianca has nothing to write down the order.

                                   TYM
                         You keep all your orders in your
                         head?

                                   BIANCA
                         Yup.

                                   TYM
                         You sure you won't mess up ours?

                                   BIANCA
                         I'm sure. I got this!

                                   TYM
                         Oh.  Okay then.

               Bianca begins to leave.

                                   TYM
                         Wait a sec.  By any chance do you
                         remember me?

                                   BIANCA
                             (scrutinizes his face)
                         Can't say I do.  Can't say I don't.

                                   TYM
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         But, I do look familiar?

                                   BIANCA
                             (surprised and impressed)
                         Yes you do.
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Are you fluent?

                                   TYM
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         That depends on what we're talking
                         about.

               Tym gazes into her eyes.

                                   BIANCA
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Are you flirting with me? 

               Tym gazes even more.

                                   BIANCA
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Your date doesn't understand a word
                         of what we're saying, does she?

                                   TYM
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         We're not together.  Just friends.

               Bianca glances at Raven and doesn't believe it.  She then
               flaunts her engagement ring.  It's priceless.

                                   BIANCA
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         And what about my fiancee?  Nice
                         try though.

                                   TYM
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Congratulations.

                                   BIANCA
                         Do you need anything else?

                                   TYM
                         I just wanna say one more thing,
                         about Gabriel.
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         If you care to save him.  I suggest
                         you call him.

               Bianca's smiles disappear.  She leaves.  Raven wonders about
               infinite possibilities.

                                   RAVEN
                         I don't even wanna know.



               ANOTHER TABLE

               We're looking over the shoulder of a MAN dressed in black. 
               He is alone.  WE SEE Tym and Raven's table.

               EXT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Walking to Tym's car, a Lexus GS430.

                                   RAVEN
                         Okay, I lied.  I wanna know.  What
                         did you say to the waitress?

                                   TYM
                         It was personal.  Do you wanna
                         drive?

                                   RAVEN
                         Sure.



               EXT. ROAD - NIGHT

               The Lexus approaches a red light.  Raven and Tym are the only
               ones around.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Bianca returns to the table to collect the bill.  She finds
               at least five hundred dollars cash in tips.



               INT. LEXUS - NIGHT

               There's complete silence.  Tym turns to Raven.  She looks at
               him.

                                   RAVEN
                         What?

                                   TYM
                         There's something I need to tell
                         you.

                                   RAVEN
                         Spit it out.

               Tym wants to so bad, but remains unspoken.  Suddenly, two
               fire engines with their sirens SCREAMING come speeding fast
               from behind.  They run through the red light in a flash and
               disappear down the road. 

               A beat. 

               Bang.  Bang!  Gunshots afar.  Another one.  BANG!  Closer.
               BANG!  The shooter can't be found.  BANG!  The passenger side
               window cracks.  And so quickly, Tym is shot in shoulder.

                                   TYM
                         AHH!!

               Tym continues to HOLLER obscenities in pain.

                                   RAVEN
                             (at the sight of blood)
                         Oh my God!

               Raven reacts.



               EXT. ROAD - NIGHT

               Tym's yells are heard.  Raven's chaotic reaction as well.
               Nobody is around to help.  The Lexus finally takes off.



               INT. GABRIEL'S OFFICE - DAY

               At his desk, Gabriel reads a U.F.O. book.  In walks Tym with
               his arm in a sling, helping himself to a seat.  Gabriel
               continues to read.  Tym picks up a photograph of Gabriel and
               Mary from the desk.

                                   TYM
                         Is your wife worth living for? 
                         They say ever man grows up to marry
                         his own mother.  That true?

                                   GABRIEL
                         You married?

                                   TYM
                         Not even close.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Car wreck?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah, something like that.  He shot
                         me.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Who?

                                   TYM
                         I need your help.  Find out who
                         shot me.

                                   GABRIEL
                         And then?

                                   TYM
                         You remember.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Yes I do.



               INT. RESTAURANT - NIGHT

               Gabriel and Mary are out for dinner.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I asked myself earlier today if you
                         were worth living for.

                                   MARY
                         Am I worth living for, Gabe?

                                   GABRIEL
                         I almost gave up once.  My brother
                         was the only real connection I ever
                         had growing up.  When he was
                         killed, all things just shut down
                         like that.
                             (snapped his fingers)
                         His maker still walks unpunished.
                         That got to me.  But, I hate no
                         more.  Whatever you want, whatever
                         I can do, all except one, and it's
                         yours.  I'm so sorry for losing
                         knowledge of us.

                                   MARY
                         I missed you.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Missed?

                                   MARY
                         Reflect.  Your son.  Your love just
                         ran out.  My Gabe, my husband, the
                         one I know, I missed dearly.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I'll do my best to keep you from
                         feeling that ever again.



               INT. GABRIEL'S OFFICE - DAY

               Gabriel and Richard consult.

                                   RICHARD
                         Gabe, I think you should look into
                         this a little more carefully.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Call me, Gabriel.

                                   RICHARD
                         Gabriel?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Yeah.  For now on, you and
                         everybody else can call me,
                         Gabriel.

                                   RICHARD
                         He's going to do something to
                         somebody.  We're supposed sit back
                         and wait for that?

                                   GABRIEL
                         He's not gonna do a damn thing.

                                   RICHARD
                         Why isn't he?

                                   GABRIEL
                         He's not getting paid.

               Richard looks puzzled.

                                   GABRIEL
                         There's no contract.  He's no
                         assassin.

                                   RICHARD
                         Look, I'm not the novice you make
                         me and all the rest out to be. 
                         That wasn't my assumption neither.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Calm down.

               Gabriel goes to refill a cup from a coffee machine.

                                   GABRIEL
                         A killer, a murderer, same
                         similarity, same difference, takes
                         life from here --
                             (points to his heart)
                         -- and not from here.
                             (points to his brain)
                         If you're making threats, you're
                         questioning yourself. 
                         If you're a killer, your mind
                         doesn't talk, but your heart does. 
                         He's not ready yet.

                                   RICHARD
                         Let's say you're right --

                                   GABRIEL
                         -- I am.

                                   RICHARD
                         He's not ready.  And when he is? 

               A beat.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Some day that'll be.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Tym is sitting alone in a booth.  His focus is a YOUNG COUPLE
               not too far away.  It somewhat saddens him.  A BLONDE
               WAITRESS drops off the bill.  She's gone in a split second.
               Tym pulls out a few bills from his pocket.  In need of some
               more change he reaches under the table and grabs the quarter
               he placed there sometime before.  Suddenly, Karen, the girl
               from the 4th of July party, takes a seat across from Tym. 
               Her friend, STEPHANIE, 19 and blonde, sharing the same
               personality as Karen, squeezes herself next to Tym.

                                   TYM
                             (to Stephanie)
                         Let me see your hand.  Stephanie
                         give him her hand.

                                   TYM
                         Pay close attention.  Listen
                         carefully.  I'm going to touch your
                         hand, okay?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Only my hand?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.  Just your hand for now.  I'm
                         gonna touch your hand and you tell
                         me whether you hear me touching
                         your hand or you feel me touching
                         your hand.

                                   STEPHANIE
                             (unsure of what to expect)
                         Okay?

               Tym takes his index finger and as gently as possible grazes
               down onto Stephanie's hand.

                                   TYM
                         Did you hear that?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         No, I felt it.

                                   TYM
                         Okay, okay.  Listen real carefully.
                         Matter of fact close your eyes. She
                         closes her eyes.  Tym touches her
                         hand again the same way but even
                         more gentle this time.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Holy shit!

               She opens her eyes.

                                   TYM
                         Did you hear it?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Yeah, that was kinda' freakish. 
                         You have a sexy, smooth touch.  Why
                         are you here all alone?

                                   TYM
                         Why, what's up?

                                   KAREN
                         What are you doing tonight?

                                   TYM
                         What I do every night, nothing.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Why not do something for a change?

                                   TYM
                         Something sounds interesting at the
                         present moment.  Whatever something
                         may be.

                                   KAREN
                         Let's go then.

                                   TYM
                         Where are we going?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         To our apartment.

                                   TYM
                         Where's that at? 

               Karen pushes out her chest.  On her tightly fitted navy blue
               t-shirt reads, "Delaware" in gold.

                                   KAREN
                             (smiling as usual)
                         Just on the U. of D. campus.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Come on.

               Stephanie grabs his hand and drags him to the register to pay
               the bill, and then out of the restaurant. 

               The blonde waitress returns to Tym's table agitated not to
               find a tip.



               EXT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Tym releases his hand from Stephanie.

                                   TYM
                         Wait a sec.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               In the kitchen, Tym finds his waitress.  She turns around and
               we see her face of sorrow.  He shoves a wad of cash into her
               hand.

                                   TYM
                         Thank you.  All right?

                                   WAITRESS
                             (extremely appreciative)
                         Yes.

               Tym leaves.  The waitress celebrates the death of her pain.



               INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT

               Tym, Karen, and Stephanie have just started smoking weed from
               a bong.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Here.

               Tym takes the bong.  He inhales with pride.  Ten seconds
               later he's coughing chronically.  The girls giggle at him.

                                   KAREN
                         God damn.  You okay?

               Tym falls head first on the couch.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Jesus Christ, why do all guys suck? 
                         There's not one guy worth shit out
                         there.

                                   KAREN
                         What about him?  Does he suck?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         No, not him.  Every guy but -- hey,
                         you what the fuck is your name? 

               Tym rises to attention.

                                   TYM
                         No, I do not suck.  I am a true
                         gentleman.

                                   KAREN
                         Are you high yet?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Nope.  Are you?

                                   KAREN
                         I don't know.

               Karen starts laughing hysterically.  She's high.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Yes, you are bitch.
                             (to Tym)
                         Yo, you there, why are you guys all
                         such certified assholes?

                                   TYM
                         I wouldn't know.

               At this point, all three have taken their turns inhaling some
               effective marijuana.

                                   KAREN
                         Maybe he's the one for us all?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         If you could choose between one of
                         us to fuck right now, who would you
                         choose?  

               Tym has a grim look on his face.  His cheekbones then rise
               and a smile forms.

                                   TYM
                         Lovely.

               Following is heart-pounding laughter.  Tym glances up and
               sees Karen doing ballet dances.

                                   TYM
                         Why the fuck is she doing ballet?
                             (laughing continuously)
                         Oh my god!

                                   KAREN
                         Let's take him.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Where, the bedroom?

                                   KAREN
                         No, not yet.



               INT. ROOM - NIGHT

               Tym is high again on the floor and facing the wall, inches
               from it.  His eyes are closed ninety percent of the time.

                                   STEPHANIE (O.S.)
                         When do you wanna go back home?

                                   TYM
                             (very much out of focus)
                         Home?  Yeah back home, right?  We --

                                   KAREN (O.S.)
                         My dad said he'll get our tickets
                         whenever, so whenever.  Like that's
                         anytime soon.

                                   TYM
                         --  don't have any sales tax in
                         Delaware. 
                         So you go and get a apple pie from
                         Burger King for 99 cent, that's all
                         you gotta pay.  No dollar and eight
                         cents or whatever the fuck you pay
                         anywhere else.  Yeah none of that
                         shit, right? Yeah so I collect a
                         lot of pennies.

                                   STEPHANIE (O.S.)
                         What the hell is he talkin' about?

                                   KAREN (O.S.)
                         I don't know.

                                   TYM
                         Yes you do ladies.  You just said
                         that --
                             (finally realizes he's
                              been talking to himself)
                         -- Oh, shit they're not even
                         talkin' to me.

               Tym laughs harder than ever.

                                    STEPHANIE (O.S.)
                         You're not in Kansas anymore, or
                         Delaware either.  We're in New
                         Orleans sweetie.

                                   KAREN (O.S.)
                         Come on, let's get him up and at
                         it. Take him out on the balcony. 

               Everything is revealed and we actually are in New Orleans, on
               Bourbon Street.  Karen and Stephanie help Tym out on the
               balcony.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         With that weed he won't be able to
                         walk.

                                   TYM
                         Shit, I can see red and purple and
                         all those colors. My eyes are
                         closed, but I can still seeee!

               Tym's legs are extremely numb.  It takes a while to get out
               on the balcony.  WE SEE Karen and Stephanie wearing dozens of
               beads around their necks.



               OUT ON THE BALCONY

               A busy Friday night on Bourbon Street.  Not like Mardi Gras,
               yet still NOISY and crazy.

                                   KAREN
                         You see, we're in New Orleans.

                                   TYM
                         Get the fuck outta here, we are!
                         Then I gotta greet the south.
                             (shouts)
                         All confederates can go to hell!

               A "fuck you" is tossed back up at him.  A beer bottle SMASHES
               into the wall too close to Tym.  Karen and Stephanie quickly
               retreat with Tym.



               INT. HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT

               Tym is curled up on the bed -- paranoid.  He's dropped acid.
               Stephanie and Karen attend to him like nurses.

                                   TYM
                         Are you mad at me? 

               Tym looks like he's chewing his own tongue.  His eyes bulge a
               little.  And he sweats like a marathon runner.

                                   KAREN
                         No.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         That acid fucked him up.

                                   KAREN
                         How much longer do we have of this?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         When did he first trip?

                                   TYM
                         Are the cops after me?

                                   KAREN
                         No.  There are no cops.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         It was like, one o'clock, right?

                                   KAREN
                         Yeah.  So we got until midnight of
                         this shit?

                                   TYM
                         Are you mad at me?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Nobody is fuckin' mad at you. 

               Stephanie and Karen find the situation humorous.  A beat.

                                   TYM
                         Are the cops after me?

                                   KAREN
                         No.

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         Are you mad at me?

                                   KAREN AND STEPHANIE
                         No!

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         Are the cops after me?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Nope.

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         Are you mad at me?

                                   KAREN
                         No, I'm not.

                                   STEPHANIE
                         You think he's just fuckin' with
                         us? 

               Karen takes off her top, and in her bra, she directs her
               chest in front of Tym's eyes.

                                   KAREN
                         See if he gets hard.

                                   TYM
                         Are the cops after me?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Yes they are.  We better run.

                                   TYM
                             (frightened)
                         Are they?!

                                   KAREN
                         No, they're not.  Nobody is after
                         you or us.  Okay?

                                   TYM
                         They're not?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         No, they're not.

                                   KAREN
                         What's it look like Steph?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Nothing.  Wait.  Kiss me.

                                   KAREN
                         Parisian style?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         Hell yes.  French kiss for the
                         French Quarter.

               They kiss.  A beat.

                                   TYM
                         Are you mad at me?

                                   KAREN
                         Jesus Christ!

                                   STEPHANIE
                         No, we're not mad at you. 

               A long beat.  There is silence.

                                   TYM
                         Did she call yet?

                                   KAREN
                         Did who call?

                                   STEPHANIE
                         That's it. Time to go.



               INT. LOUIS ARMSTRONG INT'L AIRPORT (NEW ORLEANS) - DAY

               Tym sits alone in the boarding area.

                                   INTERCOM
                         Gabriel Groom please report to Gate
                         D7.  Gabriel Groom please report to
                         Gate D7.  Departure for B.W.I. is
                         preparing for take off.  Gabriel
                         Groom please report to Gate D7.

               Tym, stunned, looks to the right, then looks to the left, and
               back to the right.  He continues to search for the detective.

               A small crowd is approaching Tym.  Ending his search is
               AMANDA BYRD, 20, a gorgeous tall black girl with the
               smoothest light caramel complexioned skin.  She drags along a
               large suitcase and a backpack.  She wears small shirt,
               exposing her belly ring, and wears tight blue jeans revealing
               every sexy curve in her figure.  Her eyes are even decorated
               with the mildest touch of glitter.  She's the finest thing in
               all of New Orleans.  Amanda moves against the crowd at an
               angle no one else walks.  She is headed for Tym.  

               She settles her things three seats away from Tym.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Can you watch my things while I go
                         grab a bite to eat? 

               Tym is stunned by her beauty and elegant voice and presence.
               He finally nods, yes, slowly.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Nevermind.  It's okay.

                                   TYM
                         You don't trust me? 

               They instantly act like they've known each other since grade
               school.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Well, you didn't look like you
                         cared. You'll watch them for me
                         though? 

               Tym politely nods, yes.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Thanks.

               She retreats.  Tym begins looking around in search of Gabriel
               Groom.  No sign of him.  Tym then stares at Amanda's luggage,
               wondering who she is and where she's coming from.

               Amanda returns with a value meal from Popeye's.  She says
               nothing as she puts her wallet in her backpack.  Then she
               starts to dine. An AIRPORT EMPLOYEE walks past pushing an OLD
               WOMAN in a wheelchair.  He's eyeing Amanda down.

                                   AIRPORT EMPLOYEE
                         Damn.  Lookin' good, are we not?

                                   OLD WOMAN
                         Oh, thank you kindly. 

               Amanda, after seeing the man once for a split second, she
               never looks at him again.  She hates the attention.

                                   TYM
                         Not your type?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Nope.

                                   TYM
                         The food good?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Yup.

                                   TYM
                         What's your name?

               Amanda smiles in flattery.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         My friends call me Birdy.  But,
                         Amanda Byrd.  That's me.

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         Can I ask you a question, Amanda?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Yup.

                                   TYM
                         Does that bother you when we look
                         at you in that five to ten, sex
                         offender way?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         I wouldn't know, cause those kind
                         don't exist to me.

                                   TYM
                         And which kind does?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         I guess your kind.

                                   TYM
                         Is that why you asked me to watch
                         your stuff out of all the people
                         around here?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                             (obviously lying)
                         No.
                             (confesses)
                         Okay, I took my chances.

                                   TYM
                         What do you think the odds are
                         against you?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         You're asking me what I think
                         you're thinking about me? Something
                         like that?

                                   TYM
                         Exactly like that.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                             (puzzled; she stares into
                              his eyes)
                         I don't know.

                                   TYM
                         A few months back, they would be
                         certain.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         What are you engaged now?

                                   TYM
                         No, I'm just -- are you?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Not even close.

                                   TYM
                         I have to say this.  I just have
                         to. I must say that you're the
                         second most amazingly beautiful
                         girl I have ever seen.  I know
                         that's coming from nowhere and a
                         little too aggressive but, it's the
                         God's honest truth.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         I don't really care for those
                         comments but I should say thank you
                         anyway I guess.

                                   TYM
                         No, you don't have to.  It just
                         came out.  That's the way I am.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         But only second?  Who's the first?

                                   TYM
                         I have no idea.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         You don't know who she is?

                                   TYM
                         I only saw her once.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         Kinda' like Nessy or Big Foot
                         sighting or the unicorn.

                                   TYM
                         Unicorn?  What do you mean?

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         A unicorn.  The one thing you might
                         seek but never find.  I wish all
                         the luck for you though.  But I get
                         it now.  When we land there's no
                         living happily ever after for us,
                         is there?

                                   TYM
                         Well, if you weren't going to
                         Frisco.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         You're not going to San Francisco?

                                   TYM
                         I'm on my way to B.W.I..

               Amanda Byrd rises, collects her things.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                         I might miss my flight.

                                   TYM
                         It's okay.  I already missed mine.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                             (risen)
                         Hold on.  You went through my
                         things didn't you?

                                   TYM
                         Guilty.

                                   AMANDA BYRD
                             (smiling)
                         I should whip your ass right now,
                         you know that?

               With anyone else she would do exactly that.  But Tym has
               earned her respect.  She grins at him, thinking of a
               farewell.  Tym looks down feeling some guilt.  Amanda Byrd
               walks to a help desk.  Tym looks up to watch her walk every
               step.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - DAY

               Gabriel enters and sees Mary sitting together with their SON,
               18 years of age, and very uncertain of what Gabriel's
               reaction will be. Gabriel goes to stand next to his son.  He
               puts a hand on his shoulder.

                                   GABRIEL
                         All I have love for resides in this
                         room, right here and right now.
                         Gabriel wraps an arm around his
                         son.

                                   MARY
                             (cannot stop grinning)
                         Just like old times.

                                   GABRIEL'S SON
                         Just like old times.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Like old times.
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         The depression has finally arisen.
                             (to his son)
                         I'm never gonna leave you again.



               BEDROOM

               Gabriel prays alone on his knees.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (whispering)
                         I beg you Lord, please forgive me
                         for all I have done.  Please, Lord.
                         Please, Lord.  Pleas, Lord. 
                         Please, Lord.  Thank you.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               FADE IN:



               EXT. PARK - DAY

               WE SEE a tree.  The leaves have turned into a scheme of
               oranges, yellows, and reds with some falling to the ground.
               It is autumn.  Tym sits on a bench drawing the most precise
               portrait of Levitia.

                                   BIANCA (O.S.)
                         You got a lot of talent.  Who is
                         she?

               Walking her dog in the park, she's stopped to take a seat.

                                   TYM
                         Someone I saw and caught an endless
                         glimpse of.

                                   BIANCA
                         How long have you been into art?

                                   TYM
                         A half hour, forty five minutes
                         tops.

                                   BIANCA
                         Yeah right.

                                   TYM
                         I'm serious.  This is my first
                         ever.  I'm working off my memory.

                                   BIANCA
                         You're that quick?

                                   TYM
                         As quick as the speed of darkness.

                                   BIANCA
                         Speed of darkness?  What the hell
                         does that mean?

                                   TYM
                         It's simple, yet complicated.

                                   BIANCA
                         It's like physics stuff?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.  How the hell do you know?

                                   BIANCA
                         My dad's a physics professor. 

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         You have no clue at all who I am,
                         do you?

                                   BIANCA
                             (laughs)
                         No.  Not at all.  Are you famous?

                                   TYM
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         What's your father's name? 

               A beat.  Bianca recollects Tym very well now, smiling.

                                   BIANCA
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Professor Sianni. 

               She waves her engagement ring.

                                   TYM
                         You do remember.

                                   BIANCA
                         How's your girlfriend?

                                   TYM
                         I told you then we weren't
                         together.  When's your wedding?

                                   BIANCA
                         New Year's Eve.

                                   TYM
                         Do you love him?

                                   BIANCA
                         Of course I do.

                                   TYM
                         Enough for a marriage?

                                   BIANCA
                         Enough for a marriage.

                                   TYM
                         How do you know if you love
                         someone?

                                   BIANCA
                         When you feel it.  When I take
                         whoever's voted Sexiest Man Alive
                         or whoever has the most potent mojo
                         formula or whatever and can't see
                         myself with them and only my
                         fiancee, then I know I love him. 
                         You in love?

                                   TYM
                         Love is anything I am willing to
                         die for.  To take away my life and
                         someone's agony during the same
                         moment.  That's love.

                                   BIANCA
                         You in love?

                                   TYM
                         I'm in love with myself.  And they
                         call it being cocky.

                                   BIANCA
                         Why did you say those things about
                         Gabriel?

                                   TYM
                         You remember that too?

                                   BIANCA
                         Yeah and I went to see him with
                         your words.  And he told me not to
                         worry. That it was a joke. 

               Tym almost smiles.

                                   TYM
                         It was a joke.

                                   BIANCA
                         Some joke.  Think I should go now. 
                         I miss my fiancee.

                                   TYM
                         Before you go --
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         -- where can I find your father?



               INT. PROFESSOR SIANNI'S OFFICE - DAY

               Tym enters glancing around at the several physics posters on
               the walls.

                                   TYM
                         Mister Sianni?

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Professor.

               A bearded man of 50, who speaks with an Italian accent.

                                   TYM
                         You know some things about physics,
                         huh?

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Everything there is to know.

                                   TYM
                         Not everything.  You interested in
                         time travel?

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Are you from the future?

                                   TYM
                         I don't think so.  Are you from the
                         past?

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Everyone is.

                                   TYM
                         You sure?

               Tym goes into his pocket and takes out a crumbled and folded
               piece of notebook paper.

                                   TYM
                         I can take you faster than the
                         speed of light.

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         How?

                                   TYM
                         With the speed of darkness. 

               Sianni explodes in a wicked sounding laugh.  Tym expected it.

                                   TYM
                         You take a box, sealed shut. 
                         Inside we have darkness, total.  If
                         I punch a hole in the box, what's
                         inside?  Light now.

               Sianni is beginning to understand and take it seriously.

                                   TYM
                         The darkness has, must, and always
                         will leave before the light enters.
                         Therefore, it is faster.

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         But darkness is nothing.  It is
                         only the absence of light.

                                   TYM
                         There is something I found in
                         darkness that no one else who has
                         ever lived even thought about. 
                         It's all on this sheet of paper.

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Where does this darkness travel to
                         when exiting the box? 

               Tym unfolds the paper and tries to smoothen the creases.  He
               then hands it over to the Professor and simply leaves.

                                   TYM
                         You're welcome.

               At the door.

                                   TYM
                         Oh and remember --
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         -- use salt.  It works best with
                         salt.



               INT. PHILADELPHIA INT'L AIRPORT - BAGGAGE CLAIM - DAY

               Tym is sitting and waiting patiently. He also is enjoying the
               sight of traveling strangers.

                                   GABRIEL (O.S.)
                         I haven't forgotten you. 

               REVEAL AT LIGHT SPEED, Gabriel seated with his back to Tym.
               Tym, shocked, remains silent.

                                   GABRIEL
                         What do we do?  What do we do?  If
                         you were ever serious about
                         murdering another man or woman, let
                         it be the past.  I don't have much
                         to say, but trust that I know how
                         you must have felt.

                                   TYM
                         Feel.  How I always feel.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Enough!  You're nothin', my friend.
                         Death is foreign to you.

                                   TYM
                         Would you like a countdown for the
                         challenge?

               A beat.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Sittin' here in an airport thinking
                         about murder.  You know what you
                         bring to me?  The soul of September
                         the eleventh in the year two
                         thousand one Anno Domini.  If you
                         wanna add to those storm of
                         murders, I'll fuckin' kill you and
                         join as well.

                                   TYM
                         What do you know about that day?

                                   GABRIEL
                         First hand horror is what I lived.

                                   TYM
                         I was there.  I was down there.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Then why add to the killing?
                             (a beat)
                         This nation will never forget.

                                   TYM
                         Yes they will.  I won't.

                                   GABRIEL
                         If I ever see you again, that'll be
                         another day, my friend. 

               Gabriel rises to leave.

                                   TYM
                         Detective.

               He turns around.

                                   TYM
                         I haven't any friends.

               GABRIELLE VANDERSLICE, very witty and sarcastic at 10,
               approaches Tym.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Who are you waiting for?

                                   TYM
                         The only person I love.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         What's her name?

                                   TYM
                         His name is Galileo.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         You love a boy.  My uncle loves a
                         boy too.

                                   TYM
                         No, no.  Galileo is my brother.
                         He's flying in from a place far far
                         away.  Who are you waiting for?

                                   GABRIELLE
                         My aunt.  She's flying in from Los
                         Angeles.  She's my mother's sister.
                         My mother doesn't have any
                         brothers, so my uncle who has a
                         boyfriend is my daddy's brother.

                                   TYM
                         And where's your mother and father
                         now?

                                   GABRIELLE
                         My mother's in the ladies room and
                         my daddy died.

               Her mother appears.  She is Holly Vanderslice.  Tym is
               unaware of who she is.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                             (to Tym)
                         Hi.  Sweetie, leave the young man
                         alone.

                                   TYM
                         She's okay.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Do you wanna hear something scary?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         My friend told me that there's this
                         star in the sky, right?  And during
                         a certain time of the night on one
                         day of the year, if you look at the
                         star, you die.

                                   TYM
                             (grinning)
                         That's not true.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Yes it is!  It's true.

                                   TYM
                         I don't believe it.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         I swear to you it's true.  It's
                         true.

                                   TYM
                         When I can I see this star?

                                   GABRIELLE
                         It happens once every winter.

                                   TYM
                         I won't believe it until bin Laden
                         looks at it.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         It's true.
                             (a beat)
                         It's true.



               INT. GABRIEL'S OFFICE - NIGHT

               Gabriel sips on a cup of coffee reading the obituaries in the
               newspaper.  Richard walks in and interrupts.

                                   RICHARD
                         Mister Kent just called. 

               Gabriel pays full attention.

                                   RICHARD
                         The son of a bitch used his cell
                         just like you said he would.  His
                         cell, Gabriel.  And I got him on
                         G.P.S., right here in New Castle
                         County, Delaware.

               Gabriel leads the way to the nearest exit.

                                   GABRIEL
                         You can call me, Gabe.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Tym sits in a booth with his brother, GALILEO, 22, who wears
               a stylish pair of prescribed glasses.

                                   TYM
                         That little girl scared the shit
                         outta me.



               INT. GABRIEL'S CAR - NIGHT

               Speeding on the highway.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I know he has two cousins that live
                         in Wilmington.  That's where we're
                         going.

                                   RICHARD
                         Should I expect gunfire?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Always.



               EXT. ROW-HOME - WILMINGTON, DELAWARE - NIGHT

               Gabriel and Richard walk to the front door.  Their guns
               drawn.  Richard knocks.  A TEENAGE BLACK KID answers.  He has
               a freshly bruised eye.

                                   RICHARD
                         Get your hands up!  Get your hands
                         up!  Now!

               The boy raises them.

                                   RICHARD
                         What's up?  Yes or no, is Ty here?

                                   TEENAGE BOY
                         No.

                                   RICHARD
                         Listen to me.  Don't lie, all
                         right? 

               The boy understands.

                                   RICHARD
                         Where is he?

               The boy knows the cops are asking him to rat.

                                   TEENAGE BOY
                         Damon's.

                                   RICHARD
                         Thank you.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Get some ice on that eye.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT



               TY KENT

               His face hides inside the hood of a black sweatshirt. 

               Gabriel walks in then stops to search for his target.  It
               doesn't take long to spot him.

               Gabriel's directly between Ty Kent and Tym's table.



               EXT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Richard is making his approach via back entrance.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               Gabriel finally greets the eyes of Ty Kent.  His intentions
               are to make the arrest.

               Ty Kent pulls out two alarming guns from under his table and
               fires without questioning. Everyone ducks and reacts
               instantly.

               Gabriel reacts dodging death. 

               The bullet ZIPS past and hits Tym's brother in the back of
               his head.

               Richard enters and hunts down Kent, shooting him to his
               demise. 

               Tym has accompanied the BLOOD and his brother.  His hands
               cover the wound at the rear of the head.

                                   TYM
                             (repeatedly)
                         GOD, NO!  OH, GOD, NO!

               He hugs his dead brother tight.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (yells to Richard)
                         Is he dead?!

                                   RICHARD
                         Kent is gone.

                                   TYM
                         I did it I did it I did it I did it
                         I did it I did it... 

               Gabriel attends, placing a hand over Tym's shoulder.  Tym
               silences.  He understands death well and knows there is
               nothing he could possibly do. 

               Tym looks up and WE SEE the emptiest expression on his face.
               He takes a finger coated with his brother's blood and wipes a
               tear track running down one of his eyes. 

               His soul has abandoned him.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               FADE IN:



               EXT. HILLSIDE - FANTASY - DAY

               The unicorn sprints across the frame within the dreamlike
               images.



               EXT. TREES - MORNING

               Naked trees.  Leafless.  We're getting very close to winter.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - MORNING

               In bed, Tym looks at Levitia's portrait posted on the wall.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - MORNING



               BEDROOM

               Gabriel stands to his feet for the first time of the day. He
               has a slight smirk on his face.  Mary, in the bed, makes a
               move -- she turns to see Gabriel.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Mornin'.

                                   MARY
                         Good morning.



               KITCHEN

               Gabriel's son is cooking eggs.  Gabriel walks in.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Eggs?  Wanna make me some?

                                   GABRIEL'S SON
                         How many?

               Gabriel picks up a newspaper nearby.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Make it three.  Scrambled.



               INT. LEVITIA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Levitia brushes her beautiful and shining hair in front of a
               mirror.  She is dressed casually in BLUE for a party.  From a
               look of disappointment, she tries to smile but the happiness
               is false and expires quickly.  Her SISTER bombards through
               the door.

                                   SISTER
                         Come on, we're ready!



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Gabriel is making coffee.  His son walks in, dressed for a
               party.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Going out?

                                   GABRIEL'S SON
                         Yeah.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Need some dough?

                                   GABRIEL'S SON
                         Nah, I don't need anything.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (offers a hundred dollars)
                         Here.  Take it.

                                   GABRIEL'S SON
                         Nah, I don't need it.  Really.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (softer)
                         Take it.

               He takes it.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Be careful driving. 

               His leaves and is on his way.  Mary walks in.  She grabs a
               mug and stares into Gabriel's eyes.  They both are waiting
               for the coffee.

                                   MARY
                         He just left?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Yeah.

                                   MARY
                         Do you know where he was going?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Nope.

               Smiles.  Suddenly they clash into the most passionate
               kissing.  Gabriel ends up lifting her close to the sink.  She
               breaks the faucet and a fountain drenches them both.  They
               ignore it with a giggle and their newlywed days make a
               return.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym remains under covers.  He slowly rises and takes a deep
               breath.  YOUNG PEOPLE are heard outside.  Then, the phone
               RINGS.  Tym peeks through the blinds and sees a party across
               the street.  The phone continues to ring.



               INT. HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

               The party inside is a zoo.  Levitia is with Raven on a cell
               phone.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               The phone is ringing, but Tym watches everything that moves
               outside.



               INT. HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

               Levitia finally disconnects.

                                   RAVEN
                         He never picked up? 

               Levitia shakes her head, no.

                                   RAVEN
                         I promise when I see him, I'll tell
                         him you were looking for him.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym backs away from the window and returns to bed.



               EXT. HOUSE PARTY - NIGHT

               Levitia exits.  She's the only one outside.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym puts on a pair of in-ear headphones and listens to his
               discman.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT

               Levitia rings the doorbell.  As time progresses without an
               answer, she knocks.



               INT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT



               BEDROOM

               Tym opens his eyes to the last knock.



               FRONT DOOR

               He comes downstairs to open the door.  No one is there.  Tym
               SLAMS the door shut.



               INT. GABRIEL'S KITCHEN - NIGHT

               Gabriel and Mary fuck.  By the sink, they're soaking wet. 
               Mary climaxes.

               She's in ecstasy after an orgasm.

                                   MARY
                             (soft whisper)
                         Fuck.  My heart could explode.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I'm sorry for everything.

                                   MARY
                         Shhh.  Right now if we went any
                         further down, we would be in
                         Elysium.
                             (a beat)
                         You're still inside of me.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Hold me.

               She hugs him tight.

                                   GABRIEL
                         We are forever.

                                   MARY
                         And ever.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - DAY

               Tym sits completely still on his bed.  He is depressed.  His
               left arm twitches with a balled fist.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym is in bed listening to his discman.



               INT. VANDERSLICE HOME - NIGHT

               It's raining outside.  Pouring.  Holly Vanderslice
               sorrowfully glances out the window.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - SAME NIGHT

               Tym stands looking out the window on the rainy night.  On his
               window the rain that hits it FLOWS UPWARDS.  Tym is attracted
               to the patterns of the raindrops.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               In the dark Tym draws a portrait of Hope.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym has a long stare to the floor.  He then begins to cry.



               INT. GABRIEL'S BEDROOM - DAY

               Gabriel and Mary make love under their sheets.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym punches a hole in the wall.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym sits on his bed.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         I haven't spoken a word in five
                         days.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym draws a portrait of Amanda Byrd.  His artwork is perfect.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym draws a portrait of Karen.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - SUNRISE

               Tym draws a portrait of Stephanie.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - MORNING

               Tym finishes a portrait of Bianca.  Then he posts it on the
               wall where the others are on display.



               INT. GABRIEL'S BEDROOM - MORNING

               Gabriel and Mary cuddle.  They have just had sex.

                                   MARY
                         I'm anxious to see Bianca in her
                         wedding gown.  She's grown to be so
                         beautiful.  You're still going,
                         right?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Of course!  I'm there before you
                         are.  I wouldn't miss it for an
                         Eagles Super Bowl.  What made you
                         think I would?

                                   MARY
                         I don't know, I just wasn't so
                         sure.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Mary, it's over.  For good.

                                   MARY
                         Forever?

                                   GABRIEL
                         And ever.

                                   MARY
                         Kiss me.

               They kiss and are at it again.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym rests on the bed.  He doesn't blink.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Loneliness is a cold feeling.



               EXT. STREET - MORNING

               We're looking down on the street from a few feet up.  A cloud
               of dust swallows everything.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym takes a deep breath.



               EXT. VANDERSLICE HOME - DAY

               Gabriel rings the bell.  Holly Vanderslice answers with a
               fresh hot cup of coffee for Gabriel.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         Come on in.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Thank you.



               INT. VANDERSLICE HOME - DAY

               They sit in the living room.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         So?

                                   GABRIEL
                         I need to ask you a question.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         Please do so.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Is there anything at all you can
                         remember that was somehow
                         overlooked? 

               A beat.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         My memory isn't so good.  But,
                         fault us for being human and
                         whoever killed my husband walks
                         free.

                                   GABRIEL
                         No.  That's not going to ever
                         happen.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         How can you be so sure if you're
                         still looking for leads at this
                         point in time?

               A beat.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                             (frustrated)
                         He kills my husband and there isn't
                         shit anyone can do about it?!  I've
                         been trying to be so strong for my
                         daughter, for me. 

               Gabriel stands to give her a hug of comfort.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I will not break my promise.  I beg
                         you to trust me.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         Okay.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Okay?

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         Okay.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Do you need anything?  Anything?

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         No, we're doing fine.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I apologize.  I've avenged my
                         brother and now I will make sure
                         your wounds too are healed as well. 

               The phone RINGS.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         Excuse me.

               She leaves the room.  Gabriel looks at the family photos
               nearby.  He takes out his gun just to familiarize himself
               with it again.  In walks in GABRIELLE.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Are you gonna find my daddy's
                         killer?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Yes I will.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         I used to hear her crying a lot
                         when I go to sleep. Have you ever
                         shot anyone before?

                                   GABRIEL
                             (hesitant)
                         Many people.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         And you killed them?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Most.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         You don't believe in second chances
                         very much, do you detective?

                                   GABRIEL
                         No, I guess not.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         And you're a firm believer in the
                         death penalty?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Loyally.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         I think you're very shallow.  No
                         offense.

                                   GABRIEL
                         You're a special little girl.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         I know, but when you do catch my
                         daddy's killer I don't want you to
                         kill him too.  Any man sad enough
                         to kill another man, must not care
                         for his own life, so why give him
                         what he wants?  I'd rather see him
                         suffer, forever.

                                   GABRIEL
                         And ever?

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Yup.

               They smile in agreement.



               INT. DAMON'S - DAY

               Gabriel taps Bianca, who's working, on the shoulder from
               behind.

                                   BIANCA
                         Hey!  How are you?!

                                   GABRIEL
                         I'm good, I'm good.  I'm doing
                         good. And yourself?

                                   BIANCA
                         I'm excited.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Well, I'm excited for you.

                                   BIANCA
                         Want your coffee?

                                   GABRIEL
                         No, I just stopped by to ask you
                         something real quick.

                                   BIANCA
                         About?

                                   GABRIEL
                         The kid.  The young man, that
                         dropped my name before, you haven't
                         seen him in here lately, have you?

                                   BIANCA
                         Can't say I have.  I don't really
                         remember his face.  I see so many
                         almost everyday.

                                   GABRIEL
                         You're sure?

                                   BIANCA
                         Afraid so.  Is something wrong?

                                   GABRIEL
                         No!  Nothing like that.  Just
                         needed to discuss a matter with
                         him.  No biggie.

                                   BIANCA
                         How's Mary?

                                   GABRIEL
                         She is better than ever.
                         Congratulations again.  I'm so
                         proud to see you grow up out of
                         harm's way.

                                   BIANCA
                         Thanks.

                                   GABRIEL
                         New Year's Eve?

                                   BIANCA
                         Yup.  New Year's Eve it is.



               INT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT



               BEDROOM 

               The room is very messy now.  Weeks have past and Tym's facial
               hair is visible.  He scratches the itchy little hairs that
               are growing.  Then, he goes into the hallway where it is
               pitch black.  

               He now always walks with his head tilt down.  We are
               following him.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         I can see in the dark. 

               He reaches the kitchen, opening the fridge.  Light.  He
               drinks orange juice straight from the carton.  The door on
               the fridge closes and it is pitch black again.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         My memory permits it. 

               He returns to his bedroom and listens to his discman.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - MORNING

               Tym looks at himself in the mirror.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Fuck you.



               EXT. STREET - MANHATTAN - MORNING

               A row of PEOPLE are staring at us with exhausted faces.  They
               are all coated with a grayish dust from head to toe.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - MORNING

               Looking in the mirror, Tym reveals a knife.  He scratches his
               itchy beard with it.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - DAY

               Under his covers he's alarmed and his complete attention is
               locked on the door that is open about a foot wide.



               THE DOOR

               No one is there. Suddenly, a MAN coated in the grayish dust
               glides through the opening to peak through.  Terrifying.  Tym
               shuts his eyelids as tight as possible and PANTS.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym walking back and forth on the same path.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         I haven't been outside in two
                         months and I now know what hate is. 
                         I should use my knowledge.  If I
                         step into the world you all should
                         thank me for not taking your lives.

               He finally speaks.  His voice has changed into a raspy
               whisper.

                                   TYM
                         I don't give a fuck.  I don't give
                         a fuck about anything at all.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               The phone RINGS.  Tym looks over his portraits on the wall.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         I'm never going to see her again
                         and so there was nothing else to
                         live for.



               EXT. STREET - MANHATTAN - MORNING

               A FIRE FIGHTER rests on a curb, covered in dust.  He has a
               blank stare that never varies.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym sits on his bed.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         See what I see.  Feel what I feel.
                         And you will wish to kill what I'll
                         kill.



               INT. TYM'S KITCHEN - NIGHT

               Tym talks on the phone in the dark.

                                   SAMMY (V.O.)
                         Yo, you tryin' to come out wit' us
                         tonight?!

                                   TYM
                             (into phone, raspy)
                         Yeah.

                                   SAMMY (V.O.)
                         Aight -- I'll come pick you up in
                         about fifteen.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               FADE IN:



               EXT. TYM'S HOUSE - NIGHT

               Sammy's black 1997 Acura pulls up.



               INT. ACURA - NIGHT

                                   SAMMY
                         It's cold out there, ain't it?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.

                                   SAMMY
                         Sup, G?  I ain't seen you in a
                         minute, G?

                                   TYM
                         I'm all right.



               INT. ACURA - LATER

               Traffic is pretty heavy.  The night seems to move too fast
               for Tym.  He's sightseeing like a tourist in his own town.



               EXT. BANK - NIGHT

               Sammy stops to use the ATM machine outside.  A state police
               car parks nearby shutting off its lights.



               INT. ACURA - NIGHT

               Tym can't help but to notice the cop's presence.  Sammy
               returns.

                                   SAMMY
                         Yo, tell me why the machine don't
                         work!  That's crazy, yo!  Let me
                         call Jeff.

               Sammy makes a call on his cell.

                                   SAMMY
                             (into phone)
                         Yo, where you at?
                             (a beat)
                         Aight, I'm almost my sister's
                         house, so where you wanna meet up
                         at?
                             (a beat)
                         Salem Woods?  What street?
                             (a beat)
                         Aight.  I should be there in like,
                         half hour.
                             (a beat)
                         Aight.



               EXT. APARTMENT COMPLEX - NIGHT

               Sammy parks the Acura.  They get out.

                                   SAMMY
                         Damn, it's cold! 

               Sammy enters a code in the box outside of the apartments.

                                   SAMMY
                         Yo, why it's not workin'? 

               He repeats the code over and over.  Then he makes a call.

                                   SAMMY
                             (into phone)
                         Yo, what's the code to get in?
                             (a beat)
                         I been pressin' that!
                             (to Tym)
                         Yo, G, hit the code.  3-0-6-7-8. 

               Tym punches it in and the door opens.  He wants to smile.

                                   SAMMY
                         Oh shit.



               INT. LINDA'S APARTMENT - NIGHT

               LINDA, 24, opens a knocking door.  She's gorgeous with blonde
               streaks, and a bit taller than her brother, Sammy.

                                   LINDA
                         What's up, y'all? 

               Tym sits on a sofa in front of the TV.  He's hypnotized by a
               steaming meal of steak and macaroni & cheese in a chair next
               to him.  Sammy and Linda head for the kitchen.  Linda hands
               Sammy a bag full of weed.

                                   SAMMY
                         Where's --

                                   LINDA
                         -- Sleeping.

               Sammy sits down at the table, opens the bag, and smells the
               weed.  Linda tosses two more bags on the table.

                                   SAMMY
                         Let me get another bag.

                                   LINDA
                         No!  Your ass is gettin' just one.

                                   SAMMY
                         Damn Linda.

               Sammy transfers portions of the weed into his own bag.  Linda
               takes the seat next to Tym, returning to her meal.

                                   LINDA
                         Your dad is so nice.  Every time I
                         see him he gives a dollar to my
                         kids.

                                   TYM
                             (raspy)
                         He never gave me a dollar. 

               Linda smiles.  Sammy's done.

                                   SAMMY
                         Aight, let's go. 

               Sammy tosses a ten dollar bill next to Linda.



               INT. ACURA - NIGHT

               On the road, driving.

                                   SAMMY
                         What's your driving record like?

                                   TYM
                         Okay.

                                   SAMMY
                         Cause mine got suspended, man.  I
                         can't get pulled over.



               EXT. ROAD - NIGHT

               A state police car pulls out of a coffee shop onto the road,
               tailgating the Acura.  The police car switches lanes to the
               right and all stop for the oncoming red light.



               INT. ACURA - NIGHT

                                   SAMMY
                         Aw, shit.  Don't look at him, yo! 

               Sammy's cell RINGS.

                                   SAMMY
                             (into phone)
                         Yeah, I'm almost at 7-Eleven now.



               EXT. 7-ELEVEN - NIGHT

               A state police car is parked in the lot.  Sammy's Acura
               drives by the store on the road.



               INT. ACURA - NIGHT

                                   SAMMY
                         Damn, yo!  This shit is crazy!



               EXT. STREET - NIGHT

               We're in a middle-class housing development.  Sammy's Acura
               parks behind a black Mazda.  They get out and get into the
               back of the Mazda.



               INT. MAZDA - NIGHT

               Inside is Jeff and Ron.  Jeff is on the passenger side.

                                   RON
                         You got the blunt, right Sammy?

                                   SAMMY
                         Yeah, man.  Had to go to Exxon to
                         get one.

                                   RON
                         Why?

                                   SAMMY
                         Fuckin' cops were just sittin'
                         there at 7-Eleven.

                                   JEFF
                         Damn.  I haven't seen you since --

                                   TYM
                         -- Fourth of July.

                                   JEFF
                         Yeah!  That party was fuckin'
                         perfect. I never got a chance to
                         thank you for that.

                                   TYM
                         You're welcome.

                                   RON
                         That shit was hot, wasn't it? Yo, I
                         heard some shit about you though.

                                   TYM
                         Who?

                                   RON
                         You.

                                   TYM
                         Like what?

                                   RON
                         Nothin', man.  I just heard some
                         shit about you.

                                   SAMMY
                         Who gonna roll this?
                             (in his hand is a Phillies
                              Blunt)
                         Ron, you can roll.

                                   RON
                         Nah, Jeff roll the best blunts.

                                   JEFF
                         Yeah I got it.
                             (takes the cigar)
                         Ron, let them here those rhymes.

                                   RON
                         Nah, wait 'til we start blowin'.

               Jeff rolls a blunt like a pro.

                                   JEFF
                         This is a science.



               INT. MAZDA - LATER

               Ron inhales a blunt.

                                   RON
                             (rapping)
                         Yo, as I smoke this weed it's like
                         I'm dreaming/ I call it treason
                         when I be leanin' in the Lex wit'
                         demons pullin' me left to right
                         like the winds in the snowy season/
                         don't go believin' everything you
                         hear about me/ I'm iced out wit'
                         bling on one hand wit' four rings
                         like an Audi/ right now we about to
                         get high as the clouds be/ don't
                         ever doubt me/ don't let me catch
                         you sleepin' like I palmed ya
                         fuckin' house key/ cause what I
                         love the most is gone/ what's
                         second ain't an attraction at all/
                         my dog/ do you understand what I'm
                         rappin' at y'all --

                                   JEFF
                         Stop!  Stop!  Pass-the-fuckin'
                         blunt.

                                   RON
                         Why you always be cuttin' me off,
                         man?  I was flowin'.  Shit.

                                   JEFF
                         Dude, this ain't a studio.  We're
                         here to smoke --
                             (mocking his rap)
                         -- and not clap at ya' raps/ ya'
                         African descendant of a black bat.

                                   RON
                         African Black bat?
                             (laughing)
                         The fuck are you talkin' about? 
                         You white Wild E. Coyote lookin'
                         mothafucka'.

               Everyone is laughing.

                                   JEFF
                         Dude, we're high as a kiddy kite.

                                   RON
                         That shit was hot though, right?
                         Yo, y'all high?

                                   JEFF
                         Fuck yeah we high, dude.

                                   RON
                         This the sixth mothafuckin' blunt
                         of night.  And I'm high as shit. 
                         Oh shit!

                                   ANGLE ON TYM
                         his left leg is twitching.  He is
                         laughing hysterically.

                                   TYM
                         Why is my leg twitching like that?

                                   RON
                         Let's do that shit we was doin'
                         last time.

                                   JEFF
                         Aww, damn.

                                   RON
                         Sammy, let me see your phone.

               Sammy gives Ron his phone.  Ron passes it to Jeff.  Jeff
               dials a number.  It's on speaker phone.

                                   RON
                         Who'd you call?

                                   JEFF
                         Aaron.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         Hello?

                                   JEFF
                             (tough voice)
                         Yo.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         Hello?

                                   JEFF
                         Yo, this Aaron or what?

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         Yeah.  Who is this?

                                   JEFF
                         You know who this is punk.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         No, who is this?

                                   JEFF
                         I'm just gonna tell it to you like
                         this.  You grow up and let's talk
                         and handle this like grown men.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         Dude, what are you talking about?

                                   JEFF
                         If I ever catch you messin' around
                         with my girl, it's over for you.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         Who's your girl?

                                   JEFF
                         Motherfucker, don't act stupid.
                         Don't act like you still write with
                         crayons, dude.  You know exactly
                         what the fuck I'm talkin' about,
                         dude!

               Everyone in the car is keeping their laughter to a near
               silence.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         Whoever your girlfriend is, I'm
                         sorry, okay?

                                   JEFF
                             (furiously)
                         This AIN'T A GAME!  I'M DEAD
                         FUCKIN' SERIOUS!  YOU TOUCH MY GIRL
                         AND IT'S GOODNIGHT. NIGHTY NIGHT ON
                         YOUR LIFE! YOU UNDERSTAND?!

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                             (frightened)
                         DUDE, I DON'T KNOW WHAT THE FUCK
                         YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT!  WHOEVER YOUR
                         GIRL IS, I'M SORRY!  OKAY?  I'm
                         sorry, dude.  I really am.

                                   JEFF
                         I'm serious.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         I know you are!  So please, accept
                         my apology and let's move on.

                                   JEFF
                         No, I don't think so.  I'm not yet
                         satisfied.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                         No, dude.  Listen to me.  I don't
                         want any trouble. 

               WE HEAR Aaron sniff.  He's crying.

                                   JEFF
                         You crying, dude?  I don't like
                         grown men crying?  For real.  That
                         shit makes me vomit.  You must be
                         messin' with my girl then.

                                   AARON (V.O.)
                             (pure anger)
                         LOOK, I DON'T GIVE A FUCK! 
                         YOU WANT TO COME GET ME, THEN COME
                         AND GET ME!

               He hangs up.  Jeff, Ron, and Sammy all burst into their
               greatest laughter.  Tym barely gives up a giggle, familiar
               with Aaron's degree of anger.  He eventually laughs hiding
               any suspicion.



               INT. MAZDA - LATER

               Tym shakes hands with Jeff and Ron, a farewell.

                                   RON
                             (shaking Tym's hand)
                         Stay alive.

                                   JEFF
                             (shaking Tym's hand)
                         Stay alive.



               EXT. CONVIENENCE STORE - NIGHT

               Sammy's Acura pulls up to get gas.  Tym walks into the 24
               hour convenience store.



               INT. CONVIENCE STORE - NIGHT

               The first thing he sees is Hope at the ATM machine inside. 
               He pauses briefly, thinks of what to do, then walks past her.
               Tym acts like he's shopping nearby.  She walks past him.

                                   TYM
                         Rootin' for the Eagles this Sunday? 

               She smiles, but says nothing, walking to the register.  Hope
               has no recollection of him.

                                   TYM
                         Guess not.

               WE HEAR a giggle from Hope.  Tym gets a hot dog and walks to
               the register. 

               At the register, Hope is buying cigarettes and aspirin.  Tym
               slides his hot dog over on the counter.

                                   TYM
                         Can you pay for me?

                                   HOPE
                             (with a smirk)
                         I don't think so. 

               A beat.

                                   HOPE
                             (smiling)
                         Can you pay for my cigarettes.

                                   TYM
                         Those are bad for you.  I would,
                         but they'll kill you.  So, I'm
                         actually doing you a favor by not
                         paying for them.

                                   HOPE
                         I'm trying to quit.

                                   TYM
                         Oh yeah?  That's the same thing I
                         said when I first started smoking
                         crack.

               Hope briefly SCREAMS in laughter.

                                   HOPE
                         That's not something you wanna be
                         saying in the public. 

               A beat.  She receives her change.  She and Tym make awkward
               eye contact, then everything proceeds to as they were.  She's
               gone and Tym pays for his hot dog.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         I could not say more.  Another
                         night I will drastically regret.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               FADE IN:



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym lies on his bed, aiming a gun under his chin.



               INT./EXT. DEPRESSION MONTAGE - NIGHTTIMES

               CUT TO SEVERAL PEOPLE sharing the same faces of depression.
               All races, male and female, in all shapes and sizes, they all
               are connected in a way.  All depressed and suicidal.

                                   FEMALE VOICE (V.O.)
                         How are you doing?

                                   TYM (V.O.)
                             (raspy whisper)
                         How am I doing?  I don't want to
                         live anymore.  And yet, I can't
                         bear to bring myself to take my own
                         life. Do you know what that feels
                         like?
                             (a beat)
                         It is the coldest feeling, not
                         wanting to live, and not wanting to
                         die. For you it is not
                         understandable. Let me be.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym on his bed.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Death is certain.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT (FLASHBACK)

               Tym holds his bleeding brother in his arms.



               EXT. TREES - DAY

               WE SEE leafless trees.  It begins to snow.



               INT. GARAGE - DAY

               Sunlight has yet to reach inside.  It's pitch black.  A metal
               SCRAPING is heard though.



               INT. RESTAURANT - FANTASY - NIGHT

               Formally dressed, Tym sits across from Levitia.  Disgusted,
               she rises to leave.



               INT. GARAGE - DAY

               The door opens electronically.  The BRIGHTEST light SHINES
               through.  Tym holds a shovel.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - DAY

               Several inches of snow cover the earth.  There is a silence
               that would allow a feather hitting the ground to be heard.
               Tym looks around.  No one is to be found.

               Tym begins to shovel his neighbor's driveway.  He puts much
               effort into shoveling.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         I punish myself for my sins. 
                         Hoping that somehow things will
                         change.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - LATER

               He shovels another neighbors driveway.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - EVEN LATER

               He's shoveled several driveways.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - SUNSET

               He's shoveled as much as his body could give.  He walks back
               to his driveway and tosses his shovel to the side.  Then he
               walks in the garage and closes the door.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - SUNSET

               Exhausted and then some, he lies down on the bed.  His head
               turns to see a small bird standing on a dresser.  There is a
               great confusion about the moment.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym strikes a match and lights a candle.  He stares into the
               flame.  Slowly he dissolves into a very emotional cry.  He is
               seriously thinking about suicide.



               EXT. SKY - MORNING

               An entire background of blue sky.  An unidentifiable MAN,
               burnt and bloody, free falls.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               We now know why Tym cries under the lit candle.



               EXT. STREET - MANHATTAN - MORNING

               A WOMAN is dead on the ground from a severe head wound.  Her
               eyeballs are entirely are black, suffering from an 8-ball
               hemorrhage.



               INT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT



               BEDROOM

               Tym opens his window to get hit by the cold air.  Tym stands
               by a mirror.

                                   TYM (V.O.)
                             (raspy)
                         Look at me.

               He looks into the mirror.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Why haven't you killed me yet? 
                         What do you wait for so long?
                         You'll never get what you want.



               HALLWAY

               Pitch black.  The bathroom light is turned on by Tym.  He
               shuts the door behind him when he enters.



               BATHROOM

               On the toilet he ponders, and revealing a sharp knife.



               EXT. SKY - NIGHT

               An empty sky.  There is ONE STAR alone in the heavens above.



               INT. TYM'S BATHROOM - NIGHT

               Frozen.  He's trying to choose between life and death.



               EXT. SKY - DAWN

               The morning's first approach, yet still dark.



               INT. TYM'S HOME - DAWN



               BATHROOM

               Tym turns the tub's faucet on the coldest setting.  He lets
               the water fill up the tub.

               He then soaks an arm in the freezing water, numbing it. His
               face now reads anger. No turning back. He puts the knife over
               the arm now.



               HALLWAY

               Sunlight is barely making it through.  The hall is empty.



               BEDROOM

               No one there.



               LIVING ROOM

               No one there.



               DINING ROOM

               No one there.



               KITCHEN

               No one there.



               LAUNDRY ROOM

               No one anywhere to stop him.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - SUNRISE

               Life is dead outside also.  The small bird flies out of Tym's
               window.



               INT. TYM'S HOME - SUNRISE



               BATHROOM

               Tym has the knife over a prominent vein.  But he puts the
               knife on the floor.

                                   TYM
                             (subtitled thoughts)
                         Why me?  Why should I take my own
                         life?



               BEDROOM

               He reaches under his pillow and pulls out his gun.  He puts
               on a dark grey hooded sweatshirt and is gone.



               EXT. STREET - NIGHT

               We're in Gabriel's neighborhood.  Tym is walking down the
               street with his hood on.  Gabriel drives by.  With him is
               Richard.



               EXT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Gabriel parks in the driveway.  They exit.

                                   RICHARD
                         I think the Eagles can really take
                         it all the way this year.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Yeah.  They were lookin' good. 
                         Really hittin' hard, I tell ya'.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               They enter.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Make yourself at home. You know.
                         Yadda, yadda, yadda.

                                   RICHARD
                         I got you.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Food, drinks.  Anything but my
                         wife.

                                   RICHARD
                         Got you.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I'll be back.

               Gabriel heads upstairs.



               BEDROOM

               Mary is asleep.  Gabriel peeks through his window. HE SEES
               Tym out front on the sidewalk casually holding his gun.



               EXT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Tym stares at the door.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT



               BEDROOM

               Tym looks up at Gabriel.  He finally walks away.



               KITCHEN

               Richard is drinking a glass of water.

                                   GABRIEL
                         You remember that kid who talked
                         about possibly killing me?

                                   RICHARD
                         Yeah, I do, vaguely.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I think after the wedding tomorrow,
                         I'm gonna arrest him.

                                   RICHARD
                         Really?  On what?

                                   GABRIEL
                         The murder of Brian Vanderslice.
                         You want a real drink?

                                   RICHARD
                         You can arrest just any ol' body,
                         can't you?

                                   GABRIEL
                         God damn right I can. I'm Gabriel
                         Groom. How about that drink?

                                   RICHARD
                         Sure. But, after the wedding?

                                   GABRIEL
                         After the wedding.

                                   RICHARD
                         I'll be ready.

                                   GABRIEL
                         And after that, I'm turning in the
                         badge and gun and all of it.
                         Retiring.

                                   RICHARD
                         No shit.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Finally gonna do it.  After the
                         wedding.



               INT. BALLROOM - DAY

               The Wedding.  

               Bianca marries STANLEY GIBBS, 25, a handsome black man with a
               charming smile.

                                   PASTOR
                         You may kiss the bride. 

               Stanley and Bianca finalize their marriage with a long kiss.



               BIANCA 

               tosses her bouquet into a crowd of women.



               STANLEY 

               speaks with Gabriel with champagne.

                                   STANLEY
                         I'll tell you, those Eagles are no
                         joke.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Their defense is too strong for
                         anyone else in the league.

                                   STANLEY
                         It's so good everyone forgets how
                         nice of an offense they have.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Good point.  That's true.  Very
                         good point.



               MARY 

               is sitting at a table with several other WOMEN.

                                   MARY
                         Me and Gabriel's honeymoon was --
                         oh my God!  So amazing.  We kinda'
                         experienced that night again a few
                         weeks ago too.

               Everyone laughs.

                                   MARY
                         He's always been so devoted.



               STANLEY AND BIANCA

               they dance to a slow Soul song from the 70's that a
               professional BAND and ORCHESTRA plays.

               MARY

                                   MARY
                         Today's his birthday.

                                   WOMAN
                         Are you serious?!

                                   MARY
                         Yeah.  Bianca and I have a little
                         surprise for him.



               GABRIEL

               he whispers an earful into the BAND LEADER's ear. Gabriel
               gulps down a glass of wine. The band plays a familiar tune.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (singing)
                         I've got sunshine, on a cloudy day. 

               Gabriel has a mic and sings the Temptations, "My Girl." He
               approaches Mary like a true heartthrob of the stage.

                                   GABRIEL
                         When it's cold outside, I've got
                         the month of May --

               The second verse begins.

                                   GABRIEL
                         -- Stanley, get some of this! 

               Gabriel throws Stanley the mic.

                                   STANLEY
                             (sings to Bianca)
                         I don't need no money, fortune or
                         fame.  I got all the riches baby,
                         one man can claim -- 

               A bunch sing the rest.

                                   MANY
                             (singing)
                         -- I guess you say, what can make
                         me feel this way?  My girl, my
                         girl, my girl.  Talkin' 'bout my
                         girl.  My girl!



               HOLLY VANDERSLICE 

               has a drink with Mary.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         I want to thank you again for
                         inviting me.  I really needed this.

                                   MARY
                         You don't have to thank me or Gabe.
                         Tell you what, let's make a toast.
                         A toast to all love.

                                   HOLLY VANDERSLICE
                         I can drink to that. 

               Their glasses clash.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym stands still looking out his window into the sky.



               INT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

               Gabrielle is talking to Gabriel.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         You don't believe me, do you?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Wait a sec.  You're saying that
                         there's a star tonight out that if
                         I stare at it at a certain point in
                         time, that I'll die.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Exactly, Gabriel.

                                   GABRIEL
                         You've been drinkin' tonight?

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Nope.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Wanna taste a little?



               BIANCA 

               has a mic and everyone's attention.

                                   BIANCA
                         I just want to say thank you to
                         everyone here today, the caterers,
                         the band, family and friends.  This
                         has to be the absolute greatest day
                         of my life. 
                         I've never felt so complete, but
                         that's because I've been around so
                         many inspiring people all my life. 
                         To my boyfriend, Stanley, I love
                         you.

                                   GABRIEL
                             (shouts)
                         Husband, Bianca.  To your husband.

                                   BIANCA
                         Oh my god!

               She can't help but laugh.  Laughs all around.

                                   BIANCA
                         My god, I'm sorry.  To my husband,
                         Stanley.  I love you so much.  To
                         my father, I love you.  And
                         Gabriel, who's been so supportive
                         to each and everyone around him. 
                         I'm sure most of you will agree. 
                         He's also responsible for most of
                         this wedding. My wedding.  But you
                         all don't know that today is also
                         his 50th birthday. And to show how
                         much we all appreciate you --

               CATERERS roll out Gabriel's birthday cake.

                                   BIANCA
                         -- I've gotten together with many
                         people here today, and others, and
                         we have all pitched in -- 

               Mary sneaks up behind Gabriel, kisses him on the cheek and
               shoves a set of car keys in his hand.

                                   BIANCA
                         -- and purchased a brand new Lexus
                         just for you. We love you, Gabriel. 
                         We all love you.  Happy fiftieth. 

               He receives a standing ovation.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym readies to leave the house, putting on a black hooded
               sweatshirt.



               INT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

               The mood is calmer than before.  People casually chat with
               each other.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I know you're mostly responsible
                         for these keys.

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         It's nothin'.  Don't worry about
                         it.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Thank you.  So, what have you been
                         up to these days?

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         I'm working on something big in the
                         lab on campus.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Oh yeah?

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         I truly believe I am onto
                         something. Very close to a new
                         discovery in science.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I wish you the best then.



               EXT. PHILADELPHIA SKYLINE - NIGHT

               Establishing the current location.

               EXT. SOUTH STREET - SOUTH PHILADELPHIA - NIGHT

               A CROWDED night out on the busiest street in the city for
               partying.

               Tym has his finger on the trigger of a gun.

               Tym marches towards a GROUP of peers.  At random he aims and
               shoots a young man.  Everyone on South Street scatters in
               panic.  Tym disappears in the chaos.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               The doorbell rings.  Gabriel's son runs downstairs to open to
               answer.  He opens the door and there is Tym with his hood
               worn horrifically over his head.



               INT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

                                   GABRIEL
                         It's time!

               Everyone shouts the countdown to the New Year.

                                   ALL
                         9... 8... 7...



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Tym shows a knife in a flash and stabs Gabriel's son in the
               chest.  He falls to the floor a few steps in the house.



               INT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

               Continuing the countdown.

                                   ALL
                         3... 2... 1... Happy New Year!! 

               They all give each other the traditional kisses of New
               Year's.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Tym walks inside and retracts the knife from the body. Blood
               is reaching all over the floor.  Tym feels for his heart,
               marks the spot in his memory and stabs him in the heart.  Tym
               leaves the knife in the body.



               INT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

               A PHOTOGRAPHER sets up Bianca's family for a picture.  The
               photographer uses an old fashioned camera from late 40's.

               A MAN wearing a badge walks up to Gabriel.  He whispers in
               his ear, "someone is here to see you." Gabriel senses bad
               news but within the current atmosphere he refuses to let
               anyone see it on his face.



               EXT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

               Richard awaits for Gabriel.  Gabriel walks out pacing
               quickly. Richard whispers in his ear "bad news."  Gabriel's
               face turns into stone.  He manages to convert his anger and
               sorrow into a forced smile.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Thank you.



               INT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

               Bianca, Mary, Holly, Gabrielle, and Stanley are about to take
               a picture together.

                                   BIANCA
                         Where's Gabe?  Wait for Gabe to
                         take the picture.



               INT. TYM'S BATHROOM - NIGHT

               Tym is in the dark.  WE HEAR water running in the tub.



               INT. BALLROOM - NIGHT

               Gabriel whispers a request in the band leader's ear. 

               Gabriel takes Gabrielle by the hand into the middle of the
               dance floor.  They are alone.  Then, the band and orchestra
               plays the sensual sounds of the Tango. Gabriel is teaching
               Gabrielle how to tango. 

               They almost finish the entire tango, then Bianca gestures to
               ask Gabriel permission to tango.  They begin to tango. They
               stop the dance shortly.  Bianca's wedding dress restricts her
               from proceeding.  

               Beautifully, Mary glides into Gabriel's presence.  They
               finish the tango together.



               CLOSE ON BOUQUET

               TILT UP to see Levitia, dressed in an exotic WHITE dress, is
               the one who caught the bouquet.



               GABRIEL AND MARY

               their tango flows melodically.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               FADE IN:



               INT. GABRIEL'S CAR - NIGHT

               Gabriel and Mary are joyfully smiling at the night.



               INT. TYM'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Tym sits on his bed with a stare seeing past everything.
               Parts of him still bloody from murdering.



               INT. GABRIEL'S CAR - NIGHT

               Gabriel pulls into his driveway.  The front door is cracked
               opened.

                                   MARY
                         Why is the door opened?



               EXT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Gabriel lags letting Mary reach the front door first.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Mary looks inside seeing her dead son with a knife in his
               chest, pale, and in a pool of blood.  She INSTANTLY CRIES
               OUT. Gabriel walks inside and physically prevents her from
               touching the body.

                                   MARY
                             (screaming)
                         Who did this?!  Who did this?! 

               Gabriel turns numb.  He walks outside.  Mary cries, forever
               it feels like, rightfully so.



               EXT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT

               Mary can be heard crying in the background.  Gabriel needs
               the fresh air outside.  His cell phone RINGS.  He doesn't
               answer, but it keeps ringing.

               In the midst of everything, he somehow answers the phone.

                                   TYM (V.O.)
                         I killed them.  I confess.  The
                         case you haven't solved yet is
                         because of me.  Now you're perfect
                         again.  Your son.  I killed him
                         tonight. 
                         You know who this is and you know
                         where to find me.  I am not sorry. 

               Tym disconnects.  It begins to snow.



               INT. GABRIEL'S HOME - NIGHT



               BEDROOM

               Gabriel opens a drawer.  In it WE SEE only a gun and a badge.
               He chooses the gun, leaving the badge behind.



               DOWNSTAIRS

               Mary is curled up in a ball on the floor.  Gabriel walks
               downstairs and kisses her on the forehead.

                                   MARY
                         Where are you going? 

               A long beat.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Nowhere.

               Gabriel gets on his knees and kisses his son on the forehead.



               EXT. GAS STATION - NIGHT

               Dead quiet with no one around.  Gabriel is pumping gas. Next
               to his pump is Hope doing the same.  Hope finishes and throws
               away a new pack of cigarettes.  She sees Gabriel and Gabriel
               sees her.

                                   HOPE
                             (with a joyful smile)
                         Happy New Year.

               Gabriel simply nods.



               EXT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT

               Gabriel's car parks outside.  The front door is cracked
               opened.  Gabriel walks straight it with his gun out.



               INT. TYM'S HOME - NIGHT

               Silent and dark.  Gabriel strolls throughout like a tourist.
               Everything is NEAT. He walks upstairs.  He enters --



               TYM'S BEDROOM (A PIGSTY)

               -- and sees Tym hanging by a noose from the ceiling fan. 
               He's twitching severely, still alive, and suffocating.
               Gabriel paces directly in front of Tym, staring him in the
               eyes.



               INT. GABRIEL'S CAR - NIGHT

               Gabriel is driving with an empty expression on his face.  Tym
               lying in the back seat barely conscious.  There's a silence.

                                   TYM
                             (distorted voice)
                         Where are you taking me? 

               No answer.

                                   TYM
                         Why U.F.O.'s? 

               A beat.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Because I believe they don't exist.
                         None of this exists.



               EXT. HILLSIDE - NIGHT

               We're at the same place Tym has envisioned several times
               before where the unicorn once was.  Gabriel parks. 
               He helps a handcuffed Tym out into the middle of the field. 
               No one is around.

               A pair of black boots CRUNCH the snow.



               THE MAN IN BLACK

               walks to where he is unnoticed by Gabriel or Tym.  He reveals
               himself fully for the first time.  He is Brian Vanderslice.



               GABRIEL AND TYM

               stand like a duel in the Old West.  In between them within
               the background, a bolt of lightning suddenly STRIKES without
               sound.

               Tym forms tears.

                                   TYM
                             (Italian; subtitled)
                         Tell my mother, I tried my best to
                         be capable of loving her.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Okay, my friend. 

               Gabriel shoots Tym in the shoulder.  Tym doesn't move an
               inch.  Gabriel shoots him again, this time in the chest, in
               the heart.  Tym falls immediately to the snowy earth.



               INT. LEVITIA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

               Levitia, dressed in RED silk pajamas, sets her bouquet next
               to a portrait of herself, the same one Tym drew in the past.
               On the portrait is her name, signatured by Tym.

                                   LEVITIA
                             (liking the sound of her
                              own name)
                         Levitia.  Levitia. 

               She smiles grandly.



               EXT. HILLSIDE - NIGHT



               CLOSE ON TYM

               He doesn't blink, yet a tear cascades from his eye as if even
               when dead his sorrow carries on.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               FADE IN:



               INT. PHYSICS LAB - DAY

               Professor Sianni is staring at a homemade device.  Two thick
               rays of light, parallel to each other, are shining bright.
               One ray of light is red, the other is blue. Bianca walks in
               holding a salt shaker.

                                   BIANCA
                         Is it ready?

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Yes.

               Professor Sianni takes the salt shaker and sprinkles salt on
               top of the two light rays.  The impact of the salt onto the
               rays creates magical sparks. Something struck him.  He is
               amazed.

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Bend down and look. 

               Bianca sets her eyesight parallel with the height of the
               rays.  

               Professor Sianni sprinkles some more salt on top. 

               WE SEE, salt normally falling through the red ray of light.
               But, there is a delay in the blue light, like salt freezes
               within it.  A delay of two or three seconds. 

               Professor Sianni keeps sprinkling salt amazed.  He begins to
               laugh.  A wicked and distinct sound.  He is too happy.

                                   BIANCA
                         Oh my god.

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         Do you see it?!

                                   BIANCA
                         What does this mean? 

               Professor Sianni keeps laughing, and laughing, and laughing.

                                   PROFESSOR SIANNI
                         The speed of darkness. 

               The professor continues to laugh...

                                                         SHARPLY CUT TO
                                                                 BLACK:



               EXT. LAKESIDE - MORNING

               Tym has awakened from a dream.  He coughs viciously in the
               middle of a peaceful silence.  Then he reaches into his
               pocket and pulls out a handgun.  Using the gun as a pencil he
               inscribes three words in the snow we don't see.  Tym throws
               the gun into the lake.



               EXT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - MORNING

               Tym hesitates to knock on the door.  He finally can do it.
               Alice, 47, answers.

                                   ALICE
                         Hello.

                                   TYM
                         Hi.

               A beat.  Tym's voice is RASPY.  He has a cold.

                                   ALICE
                         What can I do for you?

                                   TYM
                         Is Anne home?

                                   ALICE
                         No, she isn't right now.  Though,
                         she should be back any moment now. 

               She remembers he is someone expected.

                                   ALICE
                         You're... ?

               Tym nods, yes.

                                   ALICE
                         Come in, please.  Get out of the
                         cold.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - MORNING

                                   ALICE
                         Would you like some tea?  You sound
                         like you're getting the flu.

                                   TYM
                         Yes, please.

                                   ALICE
                         Come inside the kitchen.



               KITCHEN

               Alice puts water in a tea kettle and onto the stove.

                                   ALICE
                         So you're coming from Delaware?

                                   TYM
                         Yes.

                                   ALICE
                         How was the traffic coming up the
                         turnpike?

                                   TYM
                         Fine.

                                   ALICE
                         Me and my sister used to go down to
                         Rehobeth Beach all the time one
                         summer.  We both met our husbands
                         on the same day down there.
                             (a beat)
                         So, what is it you have to show us
                         regarding my sister? 

               Tym reaches into his pocket, pauses, then takes out a
               crumbled and folded piece of notebook paper.  He hands it to
               Alice.  She reads it.  Slowly what she has comprehended sinks
               in and she bawls in sorrow.

               Tym is ashamed to look on.  Frozen.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - MINUTES LATER

               The tea kettle is BOILING.

               Alice is fixing two cups of tea with a sad look on her face. 
               She fights against powerful tears battling her inside.

                                   ALICE
                         Were you with her?

                                   TYM
                         No.

               She hands him his cup of tea.  He doesn't say "thank you." 

               A beat. 

               In walks in two girls at the front door.  Who we know as
               Raven is actually ANNE VIBLE.  Along with her is who we know
               as Angela, the hostess from Damon's.  Her actual name is
               ADRIENNE.  They walk into the kitchen.

                                   ADRIENNE
                         Hello all.

                                   ALICE
                         Hey Adrienne.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         What's up?

                                   ALICE
                         You two want some tea?

                                   ADRIENNE
                         No, thank you.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         I'll have some.

               Alice pours another cup.  Anne walks next to her.  Adrienne
               tries smiling at Tym.  Tym ignores it.  It bounces right off
               of him.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Alice, who's the guy in our
                         kitchen? 

               Alice looks at Anne once seriously.  Anne now knows who he
               is.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         It's all gonna come back you know?

                                   ALICE
                         Dear, it never really left.
                             (to Tym)
                         Please, show her. 

               Tym reaches into his pocket and pulls out the same notebook
               paper.  He hands it to Anne. She drops the paper to the floor
               after reading it.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                             (crying)
                         No!  No!  I didn't want to read
                         that!

                                   ALICE
                         Anne, calm down!  

               Alice comforts her and also restraining her as she throws a
               brief tantrum.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Fuck you!  GET THE FUCK OUTTA OUR
                         HOUSE!

                                   ALICE
                         Anne, no.  No.  No.  No. 

               Anne is in all tears now.  All sadness and no anger.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Why does this happen?  Why does
                         this happen?  To me?  Why?

                                   ALICE
                         I don't know, sweetie.  I don't
                         know. 

               Adrienne is looking at the paper on the floor.

                                   ALICE
                             (whispering to Anne)
                         Stay strong.  Stay strong.  Always
                         stay strong.



               CLOSE ON NOTEBOOK PAPER
               It reads:
               "ANGELA VIBLE  103RD FLOOR WTC SOUTH,
               MOTHER OF ANNE VIBLE, WIDOW TO AARON VIBLE
               LOVE YOU ALICE, MY ONLY SIS
               I LOVE YOU ALL
               GOD BLESS"

               Adrienne picks up the paper and hands it back to Tym.

                                   ALICE
                         Don't give up.  I love you, Anne.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - LATER

               Anne sits next to Adrienne on a sofa.  Alice and Tym are both
               in chairs.

                                   TYM
                         I always wanted to be a cop.
                             (a beat)
                         The first had just collapsed and I
                         found myself behind a car.  And it
                         must've just flew right under my
                         eyes.  When the streets first
                         started to clear and you could see
                         just a little, I read it.  Nothing
                         came to my mind then but for some
                         reason I picked it up.  I don't
                         know why. And a cop --



               EXT. STREET - MANHATTAN - MORNING (FLASHBACK)

               Who we know as Detective Gabriel helps Tym get on his feet.
               He's dressed in a suit and his N.Y.P.D. badge SHINES.

                                   TYM (V.O.)
                         -- helped me up.  I remember his
                         badge was looking good as new, the
                         first thing he had cleaned off. 
                         And I saw my brother on the ground. 
                         He wasn't moving at all.

               The Detective assists Tym on standing his brother up.  The
               detective yells to a man.  That man is Richard, who in
               actuality is not a cop.

                                   TYM (V.O.)
                         He barely breathed.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - MORNING

                                   ADRIENNE
                         When did he die?

                                   TYM
                         The hospital was more than full.
                         But we managed to get there.  On
                         foot.



               INT. HOSPITAL - MORNING (FLASHBACK)

               Chaos.  Tym struggle to keep his brother on his feet.

                                   TYM (V.O.)
                         I was holding him up in my arms. 

               WE SEE Hope lying on a bed.  She is pregnant enough to see
               with our own eyes.  She's suffered a wound to her head. Tym
               looks around and finally sees Hope.  They make eye contact. 
               Hope gestures for Tym to join her.  Tym walks to her holding
               his brother up. Hope stands and helps Tym lie his brother on
               the bed.  He and Hope hug with great emotion.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - MORNING

                                   TYM
                         He was dead for at least an hour
                         already.  I held my own brother in
                         my arms.  He died there in my arms. 

               A beat.  Tym takes a sip of tea.

                                   TYM
                         This tea is good.  And I like
                         coffee. Can't be both can you? 

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         I walked back down there as close
                         as I could get and grabbed as many
                         sheets of paper I could stuff in my
                         pockets. For the past few months
                         I've spent tracking down who they
                         belong to. None of them belonged to
                         anyone who died, except three. 
                         Four survivors. The rest the papers
                         were just information.  And you
                         were at the bottom of the pile, but
                         first I grasped.  And that's why
                         I'm here. 

               Tym clears his throat.

                                   TYM
                         Damn, this tea is good. 

               His voice clears tremendously.

                                   ALICE
                         My sister taught us the recipe.

                                   TYM
                         I'll drink to that. 

               Tym raises his tea cup as if it was a wine glass.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - LATER

               Anne sees Alice and Adrienne to the front door.  Anne
               receives hugs from each. Anne walks back into the living
               room.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Do you want some more tea?

                                   TYM
                         If you don't mind.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         I don't.



               INT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - EVEN LATER

               Anne hands Tym a cup of tea like a waitress.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Drink now while it's too hot to
                         really clear up your voice.

                                   TYM
                         Drink it now?  You crazy?

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         It really helps. 

               Tym drinks.  It's extremely too hot for him and he tries hard
               not to show it.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         So... who are you?

                                   TYM
                         What do you mean?

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         I mean, who are you?  What do you
                         like to do?  What kind of music do
                         you listen to?

                                   TYM
                         I had a friend from Philly who
                         introduced me to soul music years
                         ago.  I got hooked right away to
                         the sounds of Philly and Motown and
                         stax.  You ever listen to any soul
                         music? 

               Anne shakes her head, no.

                                   TYM
                         The Delfonics?  Stylistics?  Harold
                         Melvin and the Blue Notes?  None of
                         them?

               Anne, done from looking confused, shakes her head, no once
               again.

                                   TYM
                         Well, the Temptations?

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Of course.  My girl?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.  I love soul music.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Anything older I like is Lynyrd
                         Skynyrd, The Beatles, Led Zepplin.

                                   TYM
                         Of course those too.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         What's your favorite movie?

                                   TYM
                             (immediately answered)
                         The Godfather.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         You're like real mature.

                                   TYM
                         Is that bad?

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         No, I just look at you and could
                         think differently.

                                   TYM
                         Bad.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                             (laughs; she has her mom's
                              final message in front of
                              her)
                         No.  It's not bad. 
                         You know I had a dream about you
                         once.  When you first called.  I
                         dreamt that you had rang the
                         doorbell seconds after calling
                         saying you were here, and I had
                         just got the shower feeling fresh. 
                         And I had opened the door, and
                         standing there was my mom like you
                         had returned her to me and she
                         never was dead.  I woke up and I
                         asked God if he could please return
                         my mom for me.  I prayed she wasn't
                         dead for a month at least.  And
                         it's weird because I look at this
                         paper, and it feels like she's
                         still alive and wrote this last
                         night maybe or even this morning. 
                         I miss her so much. 

               A beat.  Tym finishes his tea, gulping it down.

                                   TYM
                         I had a dream last night. 

               Tym chuckles.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         About what?

                                   TYM
                         I can't remember.  I'm not sure.  I
                         killed a man.  But, I don't know it
                         was very confusing.  It had all of
                         my ex's in it though.  That was
                         somethin' special.  My last ex was
                         getting married.

               FLASHCUT TO SHOTS of Karen, Stephanie, Amanda Byrd, and
               Bianca.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         You hook up with a lot girls a lot
                         in real life?

                                   TYM
                         Not since.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         What else?

                                   TYM
                         My brother died again.  It was a
                         fuckin' nightmare.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Are you still -- suicidal?

                                   TYM
                         It's like for the longest time, I
                         was that goldfish in his tank stuck
                         on the ocean floor of the Pacific.
                         I told myself when I left here I
                         was gonna kill myself. 

               A beat.

                                   TYM
                         I can't get that day out of my head
                         and I never will.  And there is
                         nothin' for me to live for.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Please, don't do it.

                                   TYM
                         I used to ask myself why was I
                         still living?  What was the use? 
                         And you were the reason then. 
                         Tomorrow I'll ask myself that same
                         question, and I won't be able to
                         answer it.  I don't wanna see
                         tomorrow so that I'll ask myself
                         that question.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         I used to want to kill myself.  But
                         you can't.

                                   TYM
                         Why not?

               A beat.  She can't answer.

                                   TYM
                         I'll go home, numb my left arm in
                         the coldest water, open up my vein,
                         and fade away.  No one will ever
                         notice.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         I'll pray for you.

                                   TYM
                         I'm going to go now.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         I want to apologize for screaming
                         at you earlier.

               Tym walks to her, touches her on the shoulder.

                                   TYM
                         You don't ever have to apologize to
                         me.

               She cries and hugs him farewell.

                                   ANNE VIBLE
                         Thank you for bringing my mom back.
                         Thank you.



               EXT. VIBLE RESIDENCE - DAY

               Tym walks to his car.  Not a Lexus, but an old Mazda.  Tym
               waves from inside his car.  Anne waves back.  Then she takes
               down the American flag posted up on the property and walks
               back inside.



               EXT. PHILADELPHIA SKYLINE - DUSK

               Establishing where we are.



               EXT. NORTH PHILADELPHIA - DUSK

               Tym walks into a restaurant for a cheesesteak.



               INT. RESTAURANT - DUSK

               Ordering.

                                   TYM
                         A large cheesesteak, with ketchup.
                         That's it.  No, make it two.  Two
                         cheeseteaks with ketchup.



               EXT. ROW-HOME - NORTH PHILADELPHIA - NIGHT

               Tym is at the door.  A MAN who we know as Stanley Giibbs
               answers.  He's very happy to see Tym.  They shake hands.



               EXT. INTERSTATE-95 SOUTH - NIGHT

               Tym drives into Delaware from Pennsylvania.



               EXT. TYM'S REAL HOME - NIGHT

               A lower middle class house.  Another car is parked in the
               driveway.



               INT. TYM'S REAL HOME - NIGHT



               KITCHEN

               A woman, who we know as Holly Vanderslice, washes the dishes.
               She is Tym's MOTHER.  Tym walks in and puts a cheesesteak in
               the refrigerator.  His mother stares at him.  Tym refuses to
               acknowledge her presence.  Silence throughout.



               GABRIELLE'S BEDROOM

               Tym walks inside to see his sister asleep under the covers.
               Tym sits on the bed.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Don't get me sick.

                                   TYM
                         I got you a cheesesteak.  A real
                         one.  Not the imitation brand
                         neither. It's in the frig'.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         Your voice cleared up.

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.

                                   GABRIELLE
                         I'll eat it tomorrow.  I'm too
                         tired tonight.

               Tym cringes to the sound of "tomorrow." He kisses his sister
               on the cheek.

                                   TYM
                         Goodbye, Gabrielle.  Get your
                         sleep.



               TYM'S BEDROOM

               Tym is praying, crying also.

                                   TYM
                         God, please.  Forgive me, please. 
                         I can't live anymore.  I'm sorry
                         but I'm nobody.  I fuckin' hate
                         this feeling.  I have nothin'. 
                         God, please... I beg you...



               HALLWAY

               Tym passes by his mother's bedroom.  The door is half opened,
               but dark inside.

                                   TYM'S MOTHER (O.S.)
                         Do you remember the night you were
                         downstairs crying and I was praying
                         for you?  What were you crying
                         about?
                             (a beat)
                         Were you afraid? 

               Tym never wanted to reflect on that night ever again.  He
               stays silent and continues on.



               BATHROOM

               Tym runs cold water in the tub.



               KITCHEN

               Tym grabs the sharpest knife he can find.  He's heading back
               upstairs... then... THE PHONE RINGS RIGHT NEXT TO HIM. 

               He pauses.

               He answers.

                                   TYM
                             (into phone)
                         Hello?
                             (long beat)
                         Yes.

               Tym hangs up.  He drops the knife and falls to his knees.  He
               cries, then laughs, then cries, then laughs.  So many
               emotions run throughout his soul during the moment.

                                   TYM
                             (to himself)
                         It's over.  You do work in
                         mysterious ways.



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

               The interior is very colorful.  Not black and white like in
               Tym's dream. Tym sits in a booth alone.  A GROUP of college
               students wearing "University of Delaware" sweatshirts
               collaborate right beside Tym. There's at least 15 of them.

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #1
                         Dude, you gotta come to this party
                         tonight.  Fuck studyin'!  We don't
                         have classes for another two weeks.
                         It's fuckin' New Year's Eve.  We're
                         gettin' drunk.

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #2
                         Dude, we even got fireworks.  None
                         of those bullshit snap crackle and
                         pop toys we used to play with back
                         in the fourth grade neither.  This
                         is gonna be the greatest night of
                         our young lives.

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #1
                         The way this country felt for so
                         long, tonight is for the nation.
                         Our nation.  Yours and mine.

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #3
                         Okay.  I'll go.

               The group YELLS in the college frat style.

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #1
                         That's what I'm talkin' about dude.
                         We need more patriotic partyin'
                         motherfuckers like you.

                                   TYM
                         Where's the party at?

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #1
                         Dude!  Dude, you're coming to.

                                   TYM
                         Where's it at first?

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #1
                         We got the Bob.

                                   TYM
                         At the Bob?

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #1
                         At the Bob! All night long.

                                   TYM
                         I'll be there.

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #1
                         Cool dude.

               He and Tym shake hands.

                                   COLLEGE STUDENT #2
                         This night is never going to end. 

               The college group clears out one by one.  And like they were
               a gift wrapping, they break apart and WE SEE a girl, Levitia
               of Tym's dream.  She wears a pink sweater with tight light
               blue jeans.  She stands there smiling ... and sits across
               from Tym.  Her real name is MICHELLE.

                                   MICHELLE
                         Can I go too?

                                   TYM
                         Yeah.  How are you?

                                   MICHELLE
                         I'm good.  And you?

                                   TYM
                         I'm good if you're good.



               EXT. LAKESIDE - MORNING

               DOLLY towards the inscription Tym left in the snow.  In his
               signature style, it reads:



               "GABRIEL GROOM R.I.P."



               INT. DAMON'S - NIGHT

                                   MICHELLE
                         I'm Michelle.

                                   GABRIEL
                         So, who are you?

                                   MICHELLE
                             (sarcastically)
                         I'm Michelle.

               Gabriel smiles.

                                   GABRIEL
                         I mean who are you and what --

                                   MICHELLE
                         -- do I like to do?

                                   GABRIEL
                         Yeah.

                                   MICHELLE
                         Music.  I like listening to all
                         kinds of music, watching movies,
                         shopping, just hanging out.  The
                         usual stuff around here.  Oh, and I
                         also like writing poetry.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Really?

                                   MICHELLE
                         Yeah.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Can you poetize right now?

                                   MICHELLE
                         Poetize?  Yeah I think I can
                         poetize.
                             (reciting from memory)
                         I will never explain the feelings
                         That were running through my mind
                         That moment I first saw you Someone
                         whispered something kind A tingling
                         sensation everywhere Just staring
                         into your eyes You were so
                         unbelievable I was mesmerized You
                         may not know who I am But I saw
                         those looks you sent I was hoping
                         the feeling was mutual All the
                         signs from above was meant I gazed
                         into your eyes You gazed into mine
                         The moment was unforgettable
                         Everything was going to be just
                         fine I want to be in your arms Hope
                         you feel the same Maybe someday we
                         will meet and I will learn your
                         name...



               EXT. PARK - NIGHT

               Fireworks light up the sky in the distance.  Gabriel and
               Michelle sit on a bench under a light post.  Michelle glows.

                                   MICHELLE
                         Happy New Year.

                                   GABRIEL
                         Happy New Year to you.

                                   MICHELLE
                         Is this where we kiss? 

               A beat.

                                   MICHELLE
                         I like you Gabriel.  You wanna know
                         how I know?

                                   GABRIEL
                         How?

                                   MICHELLE
                         Because I don't know.  That's how.
                         I just do.  You seem cool and the
                         type of company I need right now. 
                         So... tell me everything about you.

                                   GABRIEL
                         You have no idea the feeling I felt
                         hours ago, last year, and for
                         months it lasted.  Stagnant,
                         depressed. 

               A beat.



               CLOSE ON MICHELLE

               Her beauty is on focus.

                                   GABRIEL (O.S.)
                         You saved my life. 

               INSTANTLY, the snare of The Delfonics' classic,"La, La, Means
               I Love You" SNAPS hard.



               STAY CLOSE ON MICHELLE

               She's happy to be his savior, after wondering what he meant.

                                                              FADE OUT:

               The first verse of "La, La, Means I love You" begins when
               the screen goes black.

                                   THE END
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