Main Credit Sequence.

Behind the credits, we see montage footage of SWAT people loading up. A shotgun being loaded up, masks being put on, etc.

End Main Credits

Cut to: Building Exterior

We see a 4 storey building, which isn’t the worst building you could see, but it isn’t the best either. We see that a SWAT teams is approaching the building. We can’t see any of their faces behind the masks. They stop at one of the doors. The leader yanks it open and runs inside.

Cut to: Building Interior

The leader runs inside, followed by the team. They look around to see 4 guys with guns sitting around on desks.

Leader (woman’s voice)
Freeze!

Two of the guys go for their guns. The leader lets of a spray of bullets to one; the man behind her shoots the other.

Leader
Anybody else?

The two other goons shake their head, and put their hands up. The leader walks up to one of the men.

Leader
Which floor?

The goon says nothing. The leader pulls her gun up and points it at his chest.

Leader
Which floor?

The first goon opens his mouth to speak. The second goon pulls out a handgun and fires it. One of the bullets hits the first goon in the chest, the otherhits the leader in the chest. They both fall to the ground. The second goon turns to the rest of the team. He fires three times. Two men fall before the third man lets of a spray of bullets. The second goon falls to the ground, dead. The leader rolls over onto her back and moans. She stands up, and reaches behind her. She pulls the bullet off the vest she’s wearing. She drops it and looks at the SWAT men on the floor.

Leader
They didn’t have their vests on, did they?

One of the men shakes their head. The leader reaches up and pulls her mask off. It reveals her (Lauren Slater) face for the first time. She’s about thirty years old, with blond hair and deep blue eyes. 

Lauren
Damn it.

She reaches down and pulls out a radio off her belt. She holds it up to her mouth and presses a button.

Lauren
Home Base. We’ve suffered two casualties, and taken down two hostiles. Any idea where the deal is happening, over?

Radio Voice
Team 1, boss says the deals being done on the third floor. Take your men and head up their now. We’ll do cleanup afterwards. Over

Lauren
Gotcha. Over

She puts the radio back on her belt. She turns to the four other men.

Lauren
OK guys. We’re heading up to the third floor. Any person we encounter will be considered hostile. You are ordered to fire at will. Do you understand me?

All Men
Yes mam

Lauren
Ok. Hopkins and Baldwin, you go to second floor and secure it there. Mewes and I are heading up to the third floor to break up the party. Am I understood?

The men nod.

Lauren
Head off.

Two of the men take off up the stairs. One of the men stays behind with Lauren.

Mewes
Are we going now?
Lauren
Yeah. Head up.

Mewes takes off up the stairs, followed closely by Lauren. They circle up the stairs and stop outside a door. Mewes puts his hand on the knob and turns to Lauren. She nods. He turns the knob, and then opens the door. He runs in, gun trained. Lauren runs in after him. They look around the room. It’s empty. Mewes opens a doorway. He walks over to it and peaks through. Gunfire follows the action. Mewes hides behind the doorframe. Lauren runs over and stands next to him. She looks at him.

Lauren
How many?

More gunfire.

Mewes
Just the one. I can take him.

Before Lauren can answer, Mewes runs into the room on an angle. He rolls on the floor. Lauren can do nothing but listen. We hear a short spurt of gunfire. Lauren lowers her gun and walks into the doorframe. A lone gunman is standing in the room. Mewes is lying on the floor, dead. Lauren brings her gun up and fires. The bullets hit the gunman square in the chest. He squeezes the trigger. Bullets tear up the floor, and then the wall as the man falls to the ground, dead. Lauren looks at Mewes for a second, and then walks on through the room. She steps into another room; this one is empty as well. But there is a door across the room, and we can hear voices talking in there. She walks over to the door and puts her head to the door. She hears laughter. She steps back and kicks in the door. The door flies open and she steps in, gun up and ready to kill. There are three men sitting at a table, and five men sitting around on desks and various things. Lauren looks at all the men.

Lauren
Hi.

One of the five men stands up and runs. Lauren reacts by firing one lone bullet at the man. The bullet digs itself deep into the man’s brain. The man stumbles, and then falls through a window

Lauren
Now that you’ve all seen how accurate I am with this little beauty, I’d like all you boys to stand up and put your hands on your heads.

One of the men at the table stands up.

Man
You know, I like a woman who can handle a “weapon” well.
Lauren
Oh yeah?

Man
Yeah. How about you drop that gun and we can have a little go right now huh? Come on, you little beauty. Come have a go.

Lauren
OK.

The man smiles. Lauren lowers her gun and fires. A bullet hits the man in the knee. He falls to the ground, holding his knee, screaming.

Lauren
Anybody else want a little quickie, huh?

The two other men at the table stand up and put their hands on their heads. One of the goons sitting on the desk grabs his handgun, takes two steps, and grabs one of the men. He puts the gun to the mans head. Lauren raises her gun and points it at the two men.

Goon
Listen here missy. Put your gun down, or rich boy here gets one to the brain.

Lauren
Go ahead. I don’t know him

Goon
I swear to fuckin’ god, if you don’t put your gun down, I’ll decorate these walls in a pretty shade of red and grey.

Lauren
OK.

Lauren lowers her gun. As the goon turns to looks at the other goons sitting around, Lauren raises her gun and squeezes of three rounds. One misses completely, one hits the man in the left shoulder, the other hits the man in the chest. The bullet doesn’t stop there. The bullet passes through the man and hits the goon in the heart. Both men fall to the ground. Lauren looks around at the other men looking at her. She smiles at them. One of the goons looks at the window. He turns and runs. He goes straight through the window. He screams until he hits the ground. Lauren shakes her head. 

Lauren
Everyone that’s left, you can on the ground, face down, or I can put you down. Either way, you’ll be on he ground in about ten seconds.

The men decide it’s better to just do what she says. The men get up from where they’re sitting, and then lie down on the ground. Lauren pulls out the radio, holds it up to her mouth and presses a button. She waits a second, and then holds down the talk button.

Lauren
Slater to Hopkins. You there?

Hopkins voice
Yeah, I’m here Lauren. What’s your status?

Lauren
My status is I’m fine. Mewes is dead. How about you?

Hopkins
Baldwin took a few hits about ninety seconds ago, but he’ll live. Have you located the target yet?

Lauren
Yeah, sort of.

Hopkins 
How do you mean “sort of?”

Lauren
Well, one guy took a swan dive out the window after I shot him, one of the buyers and his goons are dead, and everybody else is on the ground. One of the buyers is bleeding, so we better get a medic up here ASAP.

Hopkins
Understood.

Cut to: Building Exterior: Later in the day.

Lauren and Hopkins are leaning against a car talking. Hopkins looks over at the ambulance and sees a man in a suit talking to one of the people.

Hopkins
Shit.

Lauren
What?

Hopkins
Banks is here.

Lauren looks over at him. The man he’s talking to points straight at her.
Lauren
He looks pissed.

Hopkins
Yep.

Banks storms up to Lauren and Hopkins.

Lauren
Hi Shaun

Shaun
Shut up. What the fuck happened here?

Lauren
There was an opportunity here and I took it.

Shaun
Without notifying me or anybody else?

Lauren
By the time I notified you and half the city those assholes would have been finished and packed up.

Shaun
You went in there with six people. Because of you, two good cops are dead.

Hopkins
Hey, you can’t pin that shit on her.

Shaun
Look Hopkins, just stay the fuck outta this conversation. Better yet, fuck off somewhere

Hopkins looks at Lauren. She nods her head. Hopkins stands up and walks off.

Shaun
What the fuck were you thinking? If we had been ready, we could have been more successful. Two of your team is dead.

Lauren
Hey, I did this city a favor. I took down three lieutenants of the biggest crime lord in this city. Last time I checked, this is my job. It was me who was assigned this case. It was me who made the decisions. 

Shaun
But I’m your boss. I should be kept in the loop at ALL times. Not just when you feel like it. 

Lauren
If I had told you, you would have organized the biggest thing since sliced bread. And I think that we have a leak.

Shaun
What the fuck do you mean a leak?

Lauren
A mole, a rat, a traitor. You get me?

Shaun
No. Not one bit. Do you have anything to prove this bullshit theory?

Lauren
Just think about it. Every time we organize something huge, we bust in to find them packaging fish or some shit. We haven’t had a decent bust all year.

Shaun
That’s it. You don’t have anything else?

Lauren
Nothing solid yet. Just give me a few days.  

Shaun
A few days. If I had my way, you’d be out of a job in a few days.

Lauren
Yeah, I’m sure. Look, are you coming tomorrow?

Shaun
To what?

Lauren
Um, I’m getting married.

Shaun
Oh yeah. I forgot. No, I can’t make it tomorrow. I got lots and lots of work to do. I don’t know if I should be saying this, but congratulations on tomorrow, and congratulations on what you did today. You did one hell of a job.

Lauren
Thank you, sir. How much did we get?

Shaun
Nine and a half million dollars, and three hundred kilos of hash.

Lauren
Shit. We’re partying tonight.

Shaun laughs. He put his hand out.

Shaun
Congratulations lieutenant.

Lauren extends her arm and shakes his hand.

Lauren
Thank you sir. Now if you’re all done with me, I think I’ll go home and enjoy my last night as a single woman.

Shaun laughs. Lauren stands upright and walks off.

Cut to: Slater/Green house Exterior.

We focus on a nice two storey place.

Cut to: Slater/Green house Interior.

We see Mark sitting on a chair at a table. He is typing on a computer. 

Cut to: Front door. 

The front door creaks open. A figure steps inside.

Cut to: Kitchen

Mark is still typing. A person enters the room, with a gun drawn. The person walks up behind Mark and presses the gun against the back of Marks head. Mark stops typing.

Person (deep voice)
Stand up.

Mark stand up, and raises his hands above his head.

Mark
My girlfriend is a cop. She’ll be home any minute. And she’s armed. So you just better leave.

Person (woman’s voice)
Ohh, don’t you want me to sick around?

We turn to see the person is Lauren. Mark smiles, and turns to face her.

Mark
Welcome home.

Lauren
Yeah, you were just making me feel welcome too.

Mark
Oh yeah. How was work?

Lauren
Excellent. We seized something like 9 million bucks.

Mark
And that’s good, right?

Lauren
Well, it should be. But I lost three of my team. And I’ve got Banks chewing my ass of about how I didn’t (deep voice) run it by him. 

Mark
I love it when you talk dirty.

Lauren
Oh yeah?

Mark
Yeah.

The two come together and embrace in a passionate kiss. After a few seconds, they break.

Mark
What’s wrong?

Lauren
Nothing. Everything is perfect. I so happy.

Mark
Good

They embrace again.

Cut to: Office Exterior.

We pan around a tall building, and then zoom in close to an office.

Cut to: Office Interior

A well built man (Seth Fox) is sitting in an office chair, hand to his ear, talking on the phone.

Fox
Yes. Yes. I know. This lady is beginning to annoy me. What do you think I should do? When? OK. I’ll call in the team. OK. OK. Goodbye.

Fox presses a button on the phone. He drops it on the desk. He taps his hands on the desk. He opens a desk drawer and pulls out a book. He opens it, and then runs his finger down the page. He picks up the phone and dials in a number.

Cut to: Office Interior – Later on.

We pan around the room. There are six men sitting in chairs. We slowly get a look at each one. We then focus on Fox.

Fox
Thank you for coming. As you all know, I have had certain “women” problems for the past year. And that is why I have called you gentlemen in here tonight. 

Frank
What sort of thing are we talking?

Fox
The lady cop is getting married tomorrow. I want you guys to crash the party.

Joe
How much are we talking here?

Fox
Three hundred and fifty grand, all up.

Val
Are we just killing her?

Fox
No. I want it to be perfectly clear that nobody should fuck with my business. Take out everybody you can.

Johnny
Should we expect any trouble?

Fox
No. Probably a few resistant family members, but that’s it.

Tom
Are we being supplied with hardware, or do we supply our own?

Fox
I’ll supply you with anything you need.

Chuck
All right. Let’s saddle up, and get moving. You got an address on this wedding.

Fox
Yep. I’ll give it to you downstairs.

All the men stand up and troop out of the office.

Cut to: Church Interior

The rows are filled with people. Lauren and Tom are standing up the front. The priest is reciting the marriage stuff out of the bible.

Priest
And you may now kiss the bride.

Tom lifts up the veil, leans in and kisses her.

Cut to: Church Interior – Later

Lauren is walking around with Tom, saying hello to people and stuff like that. There is a DJ up on the stage thing, playing music. Some people are dancing. Lauren turns to Tom.

Lauren
I’m going to get out of this dress. I have spare clothes in a bag near the stage.

Mark
OK. Cool. I’ll see you in a bit.

Lauren
OK.

She walks over to the stage, picks up a bag, and walks into the bathroom.

Cut to: Church Exterior.

Two black 4WD’s pull up across the street. The six men jump out and grab weapons from the car. They load up, and then walk over to the church. They open up the door.

Chuck
Knock Knock.

He aims his machine gun at a women staring at them and pulls the trigger. The blast sends the woman tumbling to the floor. 

Cut to: Church bathroom.

Lauren hears the shots. She is out of the dress, and is wearing jeans and a T-shirt. She looks around for something she can use as a weapon. She sees nothing. She walks over to the door and pulls it open a crack. She sees total chaos. Men, women and children are running away from the six men. The men are blasting away people, left and right. Tom looks over at the bathroom door. He storms over. Lauren backs away from the door, the looks around for somewhere to hide. Tom bursts through the door, gun at arm level. He looks around, but sees nothing, but the wedding dress, hanging up on a hook. Lauren comes out of one of the stalls behind Tom and delivers a punch to his side. Tom turns to shoot her. Lauren grabs the gun with one hand, with the other, she backhands him across the face. He falls to the floor, dazed. He drops the gun to the floor. Lauren walks around and stands directly behind him. She places her hands around his neck. She jerks them violently. We hear his neck crack. His body falls to the floor. She picks up the machine gun and looks around for another way out. She sees an outline of a hatch on the roof. She grabs the barrel of the gun, and bashes the roof with it. The plate comes off easy. 

Cut to: Church.

Mark is hiding behind the stereo; looking up at the DJ (he’s standing up). 

Mark
Hey man. Get down. Ohhhhh shit. What the fuck are we supposed to do?

DJ
Hold on. I got something.

He reaches under the stereo and brings out an Uzi – slow motion.

Just as he aims it at Mark, shots are heard. Bullet holes and blood appear on the DJ. He falls to the floor, dead. We hear a thud, and then a second as Lauren comes crashing down from the roof, machine gun firing. Se lands and looks over at Mark.

Lauren
Are you OK?

Mark
No, I’m not.

Lauren
Good.

She picks up the dead DJ’s Uzi.

cont’d
When you get the chance, lean out and shoot at them with this.

Mark
OK.

Lauren looks around for something. She peaks out and looks at the men circling the room. She leans out and fires off with the machine gun. After 5 seconds the gun clicks. She hurls it away, and then looks for something else. She fells something poking in her back. She looks at what it is. It’s a shotgun, and a box of shotgun shells. She grabs the shotgun. She checks to see if it’s loaded. It is. She peaks out, and then pulls herself back in. She then stands up, firing away. Mark leans out and fires as well. One of Laurens shots catches Johnny in the belly. He screams, and then hits the floor. One of Mark’s bullets hits Chuck in the shoulder. Chuck flinches then looks down at it.

Chuck
Oh you motherfucker. You’re gonna pay for that shit.

Chuck pulls the trigger on his machine gun. Bullets hit the far wall, as well as the stereo stuff. The gun clicks empty. Chuck runs left for cover. Lauren takes Mark’s Uzi, then leans out and blasts three away. Most of them miss, but three hit Joe in the stomach. He makes a hard face, and then spins to the ground, still firing. Val dives to the ground, but Frank is to slow. Some of Joe’s bullets hit Frank in the chest, sending him straight to the floor. Lauren leans back in. Mark now has the shotgun. Val starts to stand up. Mark peaks out.

Mark
One’s getting up. I can shoot him now.

Mark stands up, shotgun in hand. He runs left (for dramatic performance) firing and cocking the shotgun. One blast hits Val in the side. The bullets travel through his arm, and also through the side of his torso. He falls back to the ground, dead. Lauren peaks out at the carnage. Mark looks at Lauren. Chuck comes back out from where he’s been hiding. Lauren sees him.

Lauren (yelling)
Mark, Get down!
Chuck brings his machine gun round – slow motion.

Mark looks at Chuck – slow motion

Chuck fires – slow motion.

Bullets fly around the room. Three bullets hits Mark in the chest. Mark fly’s back and hits the far wall.

Lauren
Noooooooooooooo!

Lauren jumps up and fires away with the Uzi. One well placed Uzi bullet hits Chuck square in the forehead. Chuck falls forward to the ground. Lauren looks around at all the dead bodies of friends and family. She turns to Mark. She runs over to him.

Lauren
Mark. Mark. Are you ok?

Mark
I don’t feel too good. I feel kinda dizzy and faint.

He dies. Lauren shakes him. Nothing. She checks his pulse. She takes her hand away from his neck, then leans forward and starts to cry. A swarm of police officers enter the church, weapons drawn.

Fade to: Church Exterior

Lauren is sitting on the church steps. She isn’t crying, she isn’t talking. Just sitting there. A person walks up to her and taps her on the shoulder. She looks up. It’s Shaun.

Shaun
Hi. You OK?

Lauren
I’ve had better days.

Shaun sits down next to her.

Shaun
You have any idea where these punks came from?

Lauren
Oh. I have the exact idea where they came from.

Shaun
Where?

Lauren
Seth fucking Fox sent them.

Shaun
You gotta be kidding me.

Lauren
Nope. I busted them assholes yesterday, and now he’s paying me back for it.

Shaun
Lauren, you gotta think about what you’re saying. How in god’s name could he have known about it?

Lauren
I don’t know. 

Shaun
Listen. This morning, I talked to my bosses. We decided that it would be best if you took a little time off work.

Lauren
Yeah. I think that would be a good idea.

An ambulance driver walks up to them.

Ambulance driver
Ms Slater?

Lauren
Yeah.

Ambulance driver
We’re ready to take you to the hospital now.

Lauren
OK.

She stands up, and then turns to look at Shaun.

Lauren
Bye.

Shaun
See ya round.

Lauren turns and walks off with the ambulance driver.

Cut to: Oakes house Exterior.

We see a house which is in the middle of nowhere. 

Subtitle
Three months later.

Cut to: Oakes house Interior.

We cut into a bedroom. Music is playing on a stereo. We pan around and focus on a 16 year old boy (Paul Oakes). We see him fiddling with a video camera. We hear a knock on a door. Paul walks over to the window and looks out. He can see the front door. There are five men standing there. Paul picks up the stereo remote, turns the music off, then exits the room.

Cut to: Oakes house Living room/front door.

Paul comes down the stairs and walks to the front door. We see that one of the men is Seth Fox. It looks like three are bodyguard, and Paul’s head is blocking the fifth man.

Seth
Hi. You’re Paul right?

Paul
Yeah. That’s me.

Seth
Hi. I’m Seth Fox. I’m here to see your dad. Is he here?

Paul
Yeah. He’s in the kitchen. Do you want me to get him?

Seth
No. We can find our way. Can I come in?

Paul
Yeah. Sure.

Paul steps aside and lets the five men in. They step inside, and then walk through the house. Paul turns and walks back up the stairs. 

Cut to: Paul’s room.

Paul opens the door, and steps inside. He shuts and locks the door. He turns and takes three steps, then kneels down. He takes a hold of the rug on the floor, and lifts it up, and places it aside. We see that there is a hole on the floor that looks directly down on the kitchen. Paul grabs the video camera, and attaches something which looks like a tiny wormy video camera. Paul feeds the camera through the floor. He opens the screen, and hits record.

Note: The kitchen scene will be seen through the camera.

The screen sees a man (Paul’s father) sitting on a stool. The three bodyguards are standing around the kitchen. Seth is pacing, and the fifth man is standing with his back to the camera.

Paul’s Father
I swear. I don’t know what happened to the extra 5 kilos. It was there when I went through it.

Seth
Look here. We know you’re lying. Now, if you don’t start telling the truth, I’m afraid it’s going to get messy.

Paul’s Father
I swear. Maybe it was the pickup guy.

Seth
No. We already asked him. And he told us the truth.

Paul’s Father
And you trust him.

Seth
Yeah I trust ‘im.

Paul’s Father
Look. I told you once. I’m going to keep on saying it until you get it through your fucking skull. I DON’T KNOW WHERE THE FUCKING COKE IS.

Seth looks over at the man with his back to us. The man nods his head. The man stands up, walks over and stops next to Seth, both their backs to us.

Seth
Well, if that’s what you say.

Seth and the man reach into their jackets and simultaneously pull out a handgun. They lower them so they are aiming directly at the Father’s chest.

Seth and the man fire away into the Father’s chest – slow motion.

The Father’s chest jumps as the six bullets hit him. He slumps in the chair, dead. The wife runs into the room to see what the commotion is. The man turns his gun on her and fires twice. The bullets catch her in the chest and send her flying off screen. A girl about 17 opens the bathroom door and walks out. (She thinks it’s the TV). She comes onscreen. Seth points his gun at her and fires once. The lone bullet hits the girl in the eye, sending her to the ground. 

Back to Paul: Paul looks scared, but he can’t turn away.

Back to Video Camera: Seth turns to the three bodyguards.

Seth
Find the boy. Kill him. 

The three bodyguards leave the screen. 

Back to Paul: Paul realizes it’s time to move. He yanks the video camera thing out of the floor. He stands up, and opens the tape “casket”. The tape thing opens slow, and then pops the tape out. He grabs it and shoves it in his pocket. He runs over to the window and slides it open. He lifts one foot out, and makes sure it’s safe, and then climbs the rest of the way out. The bedroom door flies open. One of the bodyguards is standing there, armed with a shotgun.

Bodyguard 1 (he doesn’t turn)
He’s in here.

Bodyguard 1 squeezes the trigger. The blast hits just below the window. Paul lets go, and is now standing on the first storey roof. He turns to his left and runs. The bodyguard is at the window. He loads another shot, then takes aim. He fires, and misses. The rounds hit just behind Paul’s right foot. Paul reaches the end of the roof. He jumps. He flies through the air, and then hits the tree. He grabs hold before he falls. All three bodyguards are in the room now, watching out the window.

Bodyguard 1
Get the fuck outside!

Bodyguard 1 climbs out the window. Bodyguard 2 & 3 turn and run out of the room. Paul is now on the ground. He runs across the open space. Bodyguard 1 takes a shot at him from the roof. Paul jumps and lands behind his Dads car. Paul peaks into the car through the window. The keys are hanging in the ignition.

Paul
Thank Christ.

Paul grabs hold of the handle and lifts it up. The door won’t open. He tries again. Nothing. Paul looks at the lock. It’s down.

Paul
Oh fuck.

Bodyguard 2 & 3 are standing at the front door. Bodyguard 2 has his shotgun at eye level. He squeezes off a round. The bullets hit the car, but they also shatter the windows. Paul reaches in, and opens the door from the inside. Keeping down, Paul turns the key. It won’t start. Bodyguard 3 brings his hands up. They are both holding Uzi’s. Bodyguard 3 lets loose with both Uzi’s. Bullets slam into the car, hitting both the front and back door, and going through the already open window. The car sputters to life. Paul slams his foot down on the gas and takes off. Seth is watching from the from behind them.

Seth
Go god damn it!

Bodyguard 2 & 3 run over to the car they pulled up in. Seth isn’t far behind them. They pile into the car, start it up, and take off. 

Cut to: Road

Paul is flying down the road. He is looking for a place to hide. He makes a hard left, just as Seth and his goons come round the corner. Paul keeps driving. He is now driving through a town. He breaks right and pulls just outside of a train station. Paul shoves the door open, get out, and runs into the train station. Paul shoves his way past people in the doorway. Paul looks around the station, focuses on something, and then runs over to it. He stops at a bunch of lockers. He looks for a spare one. He puts his hands in his pockets, looking for money. He pulls out a bunch of coins and puts them in. Paul then opens the door. He puts his right hand in his pocket, and pulls out the tape. He chucks the tape in the locker, and then slams the door. He turns the key, locking it, and then yanks the key out. He runs over to the ticket booth.

Paul
One way to whatever leaves next.

While the ticket guy is fiddling with the tickets and stuff, Paul takes his watch off. He opens the head. He puts the key in carefully. When he is satisfied, he closes the watch head. The ticket man gives Paul his ticket. Paul gets a twenty bill out of his pocket. He puts it on the counter.

Paul
Keep the change.
Paul grabs the ticket, turns and looks towards the door. Seth and the two Bodyguards just walked into the station. Bodyguard 2 spots Paul. Bodyguard 2 points. Seth and Bodyguard 3 look, and spot him. They briskly walk in Paul’s direction. Paul turns and runs to the train. He gives his ticket to the ticket collector guy, and steps on. Seth and the two Bodyguards don’t buy a ticket, they just go to walk on. The ticket collector puts his hand out to stop them. Bodyguard 3 punches him in the face. The ticket collector hits the floor. Seth pulls out a gun and points it at his head. The ticket collector looks up at the barrel. 

Seth
Tell the train to go. Now.

Ticket Collector (yelling)
‘Ey Murray. This one’s full. Ya better get movin’. I’ll move the others on the next train.

The doors on the train start to shut. Bodyguard 2 puts his arm in the door gap, stopping the doors from stopping. Seth puts the gun away.

Seth
Very good.

Seth and the 2 Bodyguards get on the train. A few seconds later, the train starts moving.

Cut to: Train interior. 

Seth and the two bodyguards are shuffling through the train, dodging people and luggage. They exit the car and walk into the next one. Seth spots Paul at the end of the car. Seth whips his gun out and raises his arm. Paul’s eyes widen. A man stands up in Seth’s way. When the man moves, Paul is gone.

Seth
Shit! The little fucker’s in the next car. GO! I’ll stay here and make sure he doesn’t double back.

The two Bodyguards run through the car. They reach the end and open the door. They stop on the platform and look around. They the open the next car door and run in. Seth walks slowly along the car, gun out. People are staring at him in shock as he goes past. A big burly man stands up in front of him.

Burly Man
Put the gun down now.

Seth laughs. He points his gun at the man. Instead of jumping out of the way, the burly man starts walking towards Seth. Seth puts his gun away, and then beckons to him “come on”. The burly man lets loose with a punch to the face. Seth hits the aisle hard. The burly man raises his fist up high, when two shots are fired. The burly man drops his hand to his chest. He puts his hand to his chest, and comes away with blood. The burly man falls backwards to the ground. After a few seconds, Seth stands up. He looks at where the gunfire came from. Bodyguard 3 is standing there, gun in hand. Seth nods at him. Bodyguard 3 nods back, and then takes off down the car. Seth wanders down the rest of the car. He opens the door, and stands on the platform. He looks around for a way that Paul could have gotten past them. Seth grabs the door handle, and leans out to look at the side of the trains. Right next to his face is a ladder. Seth swings out and grabs the ladder. He grabs a hold, and then proceeds to climb up. His face reaches past the train roof. He looks around; He spots Paul running along the roofs of the train cars. 

Seth
You little motherfucker.

Seth pulls himself all the way onto the roof. Seth then takes his gun out and aims it as best he can. Seth fires off two rounds. The two rounds pass Paul. 

Seth
SHIT!

Seth takes off along the train roofs. He is running, jumping and then running again. Seth jumps over a train car, and instead of running again, he stumbles. Seth then takes his gun out again. He puts both hands on it, and takes careful aim. Seth squeezes off five rounds, As soon as the fifth round is fired, Paul starts to run awkwardly. He stops running, but stumbles. He trips over his feet, and falls off the side of the train. 

Seth
Finally.

Seth looks over the edge off the train. He tries to see Paul’s body, but can’t. All he can see is the river. Seth shrugs his shoulders, turns and walks back along the roofs of the train cars. 

Cut to: House Exterior

We focus on a house. After a few seconds, we hear a phone ring. It keeps ringing.

Cut to: House Interior

We pan across the living room, seeing how untidy the room is. The phone keeps ringing. A person rises from the couch. It’s Lauren. She walks over to the coffee table and picks up the phone. She presses a button.

Lauren (groggy)
Hello?

Shaun (V.O.)
Hey Lauren. It’s Shaun.

Lauren
Shaun. Jesus Christ. It’s about time you called. 

Shaun
Have you been drinking?

Lauren walks over to a table next to the couch. It’s packed with bottles.

Lauren
Nope. Sober as a priest.

Shaun
Good, because we need you in today.

Lauren
Oh. You didn’t want me two months ago, when I was ready to come back to work.

Shaun
This is different.

Lauren
How is this different?

Shaun
An ambulance brought in a kid about three hours ago.

Lauren
So?

Shaun
The kid’s been shot.

Lauren
Where?

Shaun
The bullet bounced off his ribs.

Lauren
Lucky him.

Shaun
Yeah. That’s the good news. The bad news is they found the kid floating in a river somewhere upstate. When we tried to question him, he couldn’t remember jack shit. He also had a bad smash on the head. 

Lauren
Will you stop fucking around and tell me what the hell this bullshit has to do with me.

Shaun
We found a ticket stub in his pocket. Some calls were made upstate. Four people saw a kid who matches this kid here’s description. He was running along the top of a train, and somebody was chasing him. Three somebodies actually. We got something of a description. The description roughly sounds a bit like Fox.

Lauren
Seth Fox? As in the Fox who murdered my fiancé and a shitload of my family?

Shaun
Yeah. That Seth Fox.

Lauren
You know. The running along the train sounds like something I would do.

Shaun
Yeah. I know. That’s why I called you. 

Lauren
What for?

Shaun
We need somebody to cart this kid back upstate in a few days. 

Lauren
What? I ain’t no fuckin’ cab.

Shaun
I know, I know. But we need somebody that’s both smart and strong.

Lauren
I haven’t done any exercising or shit like that for three months solid.

Shaun
Well, I think you better start. That is of course, if you’re interested?

Brief pause.

Lauren
Yeah. I’m interested. Will there be any risk of trouble.

Shaun
Nah. I seriously doubt it.

Lauren
OK. When?

Shaun
About a week.

Lauren
Sure.

Cut to: Motocross.

A lone bike is at the starting line. It’s Lauren, although we can’t tell because she’s wearing a helmet. She revves the bike a few times, then takes off. She comes up over a jump. She looks at both directions. A cardboard target pops up on her right. With her right hand, she whips out a gun from a holster stuck to her right leg. She fires off two rounds, and then whips it back into its holster. One bullet hits the target bull’s eye, the other hits where the man’s forehead would be. She puts her hand back on the handle just as the bike hits the ground. She keeps riding. She hits another jump. She pulls a backflip, just as two more targets pop up on either side of her. She reaches down, whips out the two guns in their holsters, and fires off one shot with each one. Both bullets hit the bullseye right in the middle. She puts the guns back in their holsters, and then finishes the backflip. She lands, and then keeps going. She skids round a corner. She rides straight, until another huge jump comes up. She launches up, giving herself more air. She flies through the air, just as another two targets pop up on either side. She brings her hands out straight, like a T, and fires twice. Both bullets hit. Another two targets pop up in front of her. She brings her arms forward, and fires twice again. One bullet hits smack on, but one misses a little bit. She then lands the bike and skids it round, bringing out a gun and pointing it out straight. Just when she stops, the gun is pointed at Shaun’s heart.

Lauren
Boom. You’re dead.

Shaun
Good shooting. You’re getting a little sloppy though.

He motions to the missed target.

Lauren
You try hitting these tiny targets traveling at 70.

Shaun
Maybe I will someday.

Lauren
How’d you find me?

Shaun
Come on. I’m a cop. 

Lauren
What a laugh of a concept. Do you know you’re early?

Shaun
Yeah. The kids doing a whole lot better. If you’re ready, you can move him off tomorrow.

Lauren
What’s his name?

Shaun
Paul Oakes. Found his ID in his wallet. And get this. About 15 minutes away from the train station where Paul and the goon squad left, a bunch of local cops found a family with a bunch of holes in ‘em.

Lauren
How many?

Shaun
Mother, Father and bigger sister. All dead

Lauren
Oh Jesus Shaun. Why me. Out of all the people in this god forsaken city, did you have to dial my fucking number?

Shaun
First of all, this kid’s lost his entire family. He’s technically an orphan. Second, you and him are going through the same thing.

Lauren
Is there a third reason?

Shaun smiles.

Shaun
Yeah, he’s sixteen.

Lauren laughs at that one. She takes of her jacket, not moving the gun that’s pointed at Shaun’s heart. He notices it again.

Shaun
You wanna lower that thing?

Lauren
Oh, I suppose I could.

She whips the gun away from Shaun’s chest, spins it and puts it back in its holster.

Lauren
We going now?

Shaun
Do you want to take your bike back?

Lauren
Nah. Nobody’s game enough to touch it anyway.

Shaun
Well then, let’s go.

 Cut to: Hospital Exterior.

We watch the black car pull up in the car park from high up.

Cut to: Hospital Interior.

Paul is lying propped up in a bed. There are various things draped around the room, food, the clothes he was found in, etc. We pan around and stop at the door. The door opens. A doctor, Shaun and Lauren enter the room. Lauren is the last to enter. As she walks in, Paul sits up in the bed.

Doctor
Paul Oakes, this is Shaun Banks and Lauren Slater.

Paul
Hi.

Shaun
Hey Paul. I know you’ve been through a lot these past few days, but we need to take you upstate for a day or two. Detective Slater here will be personally taking you.

Paul
When are we leaving?
Shaun
An hour tops.

 Paul
Why?

Shaun
We need to find out what happened to you.

Paul
Why is this so important?

Shaun
Well, I hate to be the one to tell you this, but your parents and sister were probably murdered by the same person that shot you. We think they were trying to kill you.

Paul
And that’s why you’re sending me upstate with the mime?

Shaun
Yeah.
(to doctor)
Can you get him ready?

Doctor
I’ll have him ready for you in 20 minutes.

Shaun
Thanks.

He nods to Lauren to step outside with him.

Cut to: Hospital Hallway

Shaun and Lauren step out of the room and start walking down the hall.

Shaun
So, what d’ya think?

Lauren
I hate him. He’s a cheeky little shit. 

Shaun
Good. You two will get along just fine.

Lauren gives him a look to break all mirrors. Shaun frowns at her.
Lauren
Just one more question.

Shaun
Shoot.

Lauren
You’re sending me up alone. Why don’t you send me up with someone, like Hopkins, or Baldwin?

Shaun
Two things. One, Baldwin’s dead. Took a shit load of bullets busting into some crackhouse about a month ago. And two, you said it yourself.  

Lauren
What?

Shaun
I think we have a rat.

Lauren
You believe me now?

Shaun
Fox is building an empire. He’s becoming some kind of “Kingpin” or some shit like that. Everybody knows he’s got cops sitting around his pinkie finger. If we take him down, we want to take his pinkie and shove it up his ass.

Lauren
You think Hopkins is bought?

Shaun
I dunno. I don’t know what to think. This whole situation is one fucking mess.

Lauren
So, how d’ya know I haven’t been bought.

Shaun
Come on. Think about it. You’ve been gone for a little over three months. And the reason for that is because Fox hired 5 shitbag hitmen to kill you. But instead of that, they killed your fiancé and like half of your family. Both you and I know you’re looking for the perfect chance for revenge. And if you think about it, this could be it. We put Fox away for killing that kids family, we bunk him in with some black faggy motherfucker. He’ll be dead in about a week.  

Lauren
I like your thinking.

Shaun
Thank you.

Lauren
And there’ll be no chance of trouble?

Shaun
I’ve cleared it up with the local boys upstate. You should be clear all the way through.

Lauren
Do I get a gun?

Shaun
You won’t need it.

Lauren
I’m not comfortable with that.

Shaun
OK. I’ll give you a six shooter just to make you feel safe. OK?

Lauren
Fine.

Cut to: Hospital parking lot.

Note: The camera switches to look at whoever is talking in this scene.

Lauren and Paul are in the black jeep. Shaun is at the driver’s side door. 

Shaun
Here’s your gun.

He hands her the six shooter. Lauren checks it, and then nods.

Shaun
Fine?

Lauren
Yeah. Thanks.

Paul
Do I get a gun?
Lauren
You don’t need it.

Shaun
You set to go?

Lauren
Yeah.

Shaun
Oh, by the way.

He hands her a cellular phone.

Shaun (cont)
Take this. Just in case.

Lauren
Thanks.

Shaun
Have a good trip.

Lauren
Thanks. Catch you later.

Shaun
OK.

Shaun steps away from the car. Lauren starts the car, then does a U turn and exits the parking lot. As they go out of site. Shaun pulls out his own phone. He punches a number and puts the phone to his ear.

Cut to: Car Interior.

Paul and Lauren are silent. Paul reaches to the car stereo and turns it on. Music fills the car. Paul fiddles with the radio and finds a station he likes. He then sits back in his seat. Lauren reaches down and turns it off.

Paul
Hey!

Lauren
Shut up. I’m driving this hunk of shit, so it’s my rules. OK?

Paul
Whatever.

They both turn away from each other and stop talking.

Cut to: Freeway.

The jeep is cruising along the freeway. As it passes a billboard, a cop car emerges from behind it. It follows the jeep for a few seconds, then lights up. Lauren looks in the review mirror.

Lauren
What the fuck?

Paul
What the hell did you do now?

Lauren
Shut up. I haven’t done nothing.

She pulls over. The cop car pulls up behind her. Both officers get out of the car. Lauren sees this as strange. She grabs the six shooter and slides it over the seat to Paul. Paul tucks it between his knees, out of sight. The cops stop on either side of the car. One is on Lauren’s side, the other on Paul’s. Lauren and Paul both wind down their windows. Both officers lean in to look in the jeep. The one on Lauren’s side is bodyguard 2! The one on Paul’s side is someone new. We’ll refer to him as Copper 2.

Lauren
What’s the problem officer? I’m taking this kid upstate. My boss, Shaun Banks called all the sheriffs up this way to let them know.

Bodyguard 2
We know.

Lauren
Then what’s the problem?

Paul is looking at him. Paul knows that he has seen this man before, but he can’t realize where. Paul then realizes.

Paul
SHIT!

Bodyguard 2 brings his right arm, which has been hanging loosely out of sight. In his hand, he is holding an automatic handgun. Lauren reacts. Bodyguard points it at Lauren. Lauren grabs bodyguard 2’s arm with her left hand. She points it directly at Copper 2. Copper 2 is just watching. He reacts when this happens. He reaches for his gun. Lauren slams her right hand into the gun, causing it to fire. The bullet flies, hitting Copper 2 in the neck. Copper 2 falls backwards onto the road, dying. Paul snaps out of his trance and grabs the six shooter. He holds it, not knowing what to. Lauren is struggling with Bodyguard 2.

Lauren
Shoot him for fuck sakes.

Paul points the gun at Bodyguard 2 and fires. The shot hits Bodyguard 2 in the cheek. He falls in the car window, dead. Lauren relaxes for a second, then another shot is heard. The side view mirror on Lauren's side is taken off with the shot. Lauren grabs Bodyguard 2’s gun, then shoves him back out the window. Lauren peaks her head out the window. 2 4WD’s and one normal car. Lauren shoves her hand on the keys and starts the ignition. She turns to Paul as it starts up.

Lauren
Buckle up.

Paul nods. He puts on his seatbelt. Lauren slams her foot down on the accelerator. The car takes off. The other cars take off after them.

Cut to: Air shot.

We watch from a sky view as the cars start to race down the freeway.

Cut to: Freeway.

Note: The gunfire is going, even though it’s not scripted specifically.

The jeep is swerving backwards and forwards. The other cars are in close pursuit. The front 4WD has a man hanging out the window, aiming an automatic weapon and firing. Lauren and Paul duck their heads as bullets shatter the front windscreen. It literally disappears. Lauren turns to Paul as she’s driving.

Lauren
Hold the wheel.

Paul
OK

Paul's puts both hands on the wheel. Lauren leans out her window, armed with the automatic handgun. She aims and fires off about 10 rounds. The bullets hit the 4WD’s front hood, but no casualties yet. She ducks back into the car as gunfire from the second car tears up the door.

Lauren
SHIT!!! 
She puts her hands on the wheel and goes back to steering.

Lauren
Oh yeah, Lauren. No problems at all. No chance off trouble. Bull SHIT!!

She nods to Paul. Paul leans back over and holds the wheel. Lauren props herself ready, then leans out. She fires the handgun. She gets lucky this time. As Paul swerves a car, Lauren is jerked hardly to the left. Two of the bullets hit the passenger in the first car. Blood hits their windscreen. She leans back in and takes hold of the wheel. 

Lauren
One down.

Paul
Well, good fucking work. For all we know, there could be another hundred guys sitting somewhere.

Lauren
Thanks for the vote of confidence.

She leans back out. Paul grabs the wheel. She fires off five shots, one of which hits the driver of the first car. The car swerves, then tips and goes into a roll. It bounces off an innocent, and keeps rolling. The two other cars swerve to avoid it. She leans back in. Paul watches the car continue spinning down the freeway, then stops. It catches alight somehow. After a second, it blows up, lighting the freeway up with fire and smoke. Innocents hit their brakes to avoid hitting the wreck. 

Paul
Nice work.

Lauren
Thanks.

Paul
How many bullets you got left.

Lauren
I dunno. Check for me, will ya.

She tosses the gun over to him. He releases the clip, and checks the bullets.

Paul
It’s empty.

Lauren
Shit! Hand me the six shooter.
Paul grabs the six shooter off the floor. He hands it to Lauren. She opens the barrel bit thing.

Lauren
Five left. Why the hell did you have to use one for?

Paul
Don’t criticize my shit. If I recall, I saved your ass.

Lauren
OK. We’ll discuss this later.

Paul
Is that a promise?

Lauren
I sure as shit hope so.

Out of nowhere, a fourth car comes bearing down on them, bullets spraying. Lauren and Paul both duck down behind the steering wheel and stuff. The car keeps shooting, until they stop. 

Lauren
No bullets.

Paul
But they’re reloading.

Lauren
Let’s stop them then.

Paul
OK

Both cars are roaring down the freeway at each other. Lauren shows no expression of swerving.

Paul
Fucking oath. You are a crazy bitch.

The two cars are now just two cars length apart. The other car pulls away at the last second. It tries to swerve, but can’t turn hard enough. It runs up over the jeep’s hood, and keeps on going. It flies through the air, and off the road/ it does a half flip in the air, and lands just next to some diner place. The car explodes on impact.

Lauren
I gotta remember that one.

Paul
OK. Let’s get the rest of these motherfuckers.

Lauren
Good idea.

She leans out of the car. Paul grabs the wheel. Lauren takes careful aim at the man leaning out of the sunroof. She fires. The bullet hits him directly in the right eye. The man falls forward, gun still firing. The gun ends up aiming straight down, at the driver of the car. He notices the bullets are getting close to him. One hits him on the top of the head. He slumps back, dead. The car keeps going at top speed. Lauren takes another shot, this time hitting the tire. It pops, causing the car to slide sideways. It rolls, just like the other car. It rolls clean over into the other lanes. Oncoming cars stop as the car passes past them. They watch as it goes past. On the last roll, a live man comes out of the window. He lands on the ground, looking up. The car is still going. The car lands on his stomach. He’s dead. This leaves only one car left. The car speeds up. It smashes into the jeep. Paul and Lauren and jerked forward by the hit. Lauren looks back in her review mirror. 

Lauren
There’s only the driver and the passenger in the car. 

Slight pause.

Paul
Take the shot.

Lauren nods then leans out of the car. Paul takes a hold of the wheel. Lauren fires off two shots. Neither one hits anything to brag about. She leans back in.

Lauren
Nothing.

Paul
How many you got left?

Lauren
One. One shot.

Paul
Can you do it?

Lauren
Come on boy. You’ve seen what I can do. Are you doubting me now?

Paul
Oh, of course not. 

Lauren
Good.

Lauren leans back out of the car. She aims very carefully, and then shoots. The bullet hits the front right wheel. The car goes into a roll. Lauren leans back in to keep away from the rolling car. Finally it stops. Lauren stops the car and gets out. Paul gets out as well.

Lauren
Get the box out from under your seat.

Paul runs back to the jeep and opens the door, he reaches under his seat and feels around a bit. He feels something, and pulls it out. It’s a shiny black box, about the size of a shoebox. Paul grabs it by the handle and runs back up to Lauren, who is standing at the car, which is on its roof. She is looking at the two men struggling to get free. Paul stands next to her and hands her the black box. She sets it on the roof’s “floor” and opens it up. Inside are two handguns.  

Paul
Fuck. Where’d you get them from?

Lauren
Seriously kid, you think I would go cross country with you and not be prepared. 

She grabs one of the guns out of the box. She gets the other one and hands it to Paul. 

Lauren
Take the other one.

Paul walks around the car and opens the other door. He kneels down, and looks at the man. He is covered in blood and dirt. 

Paul
Hiya there.

Lauren has opened her door and is looking at the man strapped to the “roof”. 

Lauren
Hi. I know you know who I am. But what is your name?

Doug
I’m Douglas

Lauren
Hello Douglas. 

She holds up her gun so he can see.

Lauren
This is my gun. It’s loaded. So if you give me any shit, or you lie to me, I’ll blow your fucking head off. Got it?

Doug nods.

Lauren
Good. Now, question number one. Who sent you?

Douglas
I can’t tell you. He’ll kill me.

Lauren
You worry about me now. Who sent you?

Douglas
I don’t know his name directly. I think his name is Seth Fux or something.

Lauren
Seth Fox.

Douglas
Yeah. That’s him.

Lauren
Good. Question number two. Why are you trying to kill me?

Douglas
I don’t know. I’ve just been hired.

Lauren shakes her head, and her hand holding the gun.

Lauren
Wrong.

Doug
Oh NO!

Lauren takes aim and shoots him in the leg. He screams with pain as the bullet wound starts to bleed.

Lauren
Let’s try again. Why are you trying to kill me?

Doug
No. Not you. Him.

He motions to Paul.

Lauren
Why?

He doesn’t respond. Lauren takes aim and fires. The bullet hits the seatbelt. Doug falls from the “roof” and hits the”floor” on his head.

Doug
You bitch. That hurt.

Lauren
Why?

No answer. Lauren clicks back the hammer and aims it at Doug’s head.

Lauren
I’m not scared to kill you Doug. I’m sure your friend there will tell us everything we need to know. Now, why him?

Doug
He has a video. One of Seth some other guy killing his family. And besides, he’s evidence.

Lauren
Thank you Doug. You’ve been very helpful.

She fires her gun once. The bullet passes through Doug’s forehead and through his brain. His brains splatter all over the second man. He reacts with a jerk of his hand. In it, he’s holding a knife. He raises his arm to throw the knife at Lauren. Two shots are fired. They explode from his chest. His eyes go wide. He drops the knife and puts his hand to the holes. He falls on top of his buddy, dead. Paul is holding the gun in his outstretched arm. Lauren looks over at him.

Lauren
Thanks.

Paul
I know. Now you owe me two.

They start to walk to the car.

Lauren
What do you mean?

Paul
Think about it. I shot the guy just then. And the guy who you were fighting with.

Lauren
Come on. I saved your ass then. You’d be dead now if it wasn’t for my driving and shooting.

Paul
Yeah. Well I did half the driving.

Lauren
I don’t care. We’re still even.

Paul
Whatever you reckon.

They reach the car. They open the doors and get in. They start the car and drive off. 

Cut to: Coffee Shop.

Paul and Lauren are sitting in a booth at some fast food place. They are sitting across from each other. Lauren pulls out the phone and dials a number. We hear it ring a few times, and then we hear somebody answer.

Shaun (O.S.)
Hello?

Lauren
Hey. It’s me, Lauren.

Shaun (O.S.)
Hey. How are you? Are you there yet? That was fast.

Lauren
We ran into some trouble.

Shaun (O.S.)
What type of trouble?
Lauren
4 cars full of men with machine guns.

Shaun (O.S.)
Are you OK?

Lauren
Yeah. Me and the kid are fine.

Paul
I have a name, for Christ sakes.

Lauren mouths “shut up”

Shaun (O.S.)
Where abouts are you?

Lauren
I don’t want to tell you. Both you and I know some asshole could be listening in.

Shaun (O.S.)
What are you going to do? Keep going?

Lauren
No. We’re going to check into a motel, figure out something in the morning.

Shaun (O.S.)
OK. Call me back after.

Lauren
Sure. Catch ya later

Shaun (O.S.)
Bye.

He hangs up. She hangs up and puts the phone back in her pocket.

Paul
What did he say?

Lauren
Nothing useful. Now I need you to think. That guy said something about a video. Do you have something like that on you?

Paul
No. All I had on me when they found me was my wallet.
Lauren
Oh shit. It’s most likely in some ocean by now.

Paul
Maybe. Or maybe I stashed it somewhere where I knew I’d find it later.

She picks up her Styrofoam cup full of coffee.

Lauren
Well, there’s that possibility. What we have to do now is…

 She is cut off by the sound of a shot. The bullet hits the cup, flies through and hits somebody in the hip who is walking past. Lauren reacts.

Lauren
Get down!

She reaches over the table, grab Paul and shoves him to the floor, just as about a thousand more bullets enter the coffee shop. They hit the back wall. The people in the booths, the people standing up and the people behind the counter are all hit by bullets. Lauren looks over at Paul. He’s lying flat on the ground.

Lauren
Stay here. I’ll be right back. Take this.

She hands him the gun again. He grabs it and holds in his left hand. 

Paul
Promise?

Lauren
I haven’t let you down yet.

Lauren crawls off. She reaches the bathroom door. She pushes it open and crawls inside.

Cut to: Outside Coffee shop.

There are five guys standing outside the shop. All of them are holding machine guns. They stop firing to reload. One of them is Bodyguard 3

Bodyguard 3
Hey sexy. You in there?

All of them laugh. They go back to firing. But what they don’t see is Lauren sneaking up behind them. Lauren comes right up behind number 5, wraps her arms around his neck and pulls him back hard. His neck snaps as she pulls him back. His finger is still wrapped around the trigger. Bullets fly directly upwards. Lauren drops his body as 4 looks at her. He turns to shoot her. Quick as a flash, she whips her gun out from the back of her trousers and fires off three shots. They all hit him in the chest. He is blown off his feet. The other 3, seeing their man fall to the ground dead, makes them stop firing. They turn at once to look at who did it. Lauren stands there, looking at the three men. Lauren glances quickly to her right. She spots a car. She sprints as fast as she can towards it. The three men spin their guns and fire as she runs. She dives behind the car as a trail of bullets chew through the side of the car. She scrambles to a sitting position behind one of the wheels. She holds her gun so it’s just sitting in front of her nose. She leans out and fires off five blindly aimed shots. No cigar with the first four, but the fifth hits 3 in the hip. He flinches and yells, and then fires on the car. Bullets chew up the car, shatter the window, but none of them even touch Lauren.

Lauren
Jesus Christ these guys are lousy shots.

She leans out and fires off three more shots. One hits 3 in the heart, knocking him to the ground dead. She hides back behind the car. The two men left look at each other, then continue firing on the car. She makes a face as one bullet just singes her shoulder.

Lauren
It’s about time.

They stop firing. She hears clicking. She realizes they are reloading. She takes the chance. She rolls forward away from the car, and launches herself upwards. She lands on her feet. She turns and runs towards the car. She jumps, puts her other foot on the hood and pushes off with all her might. 

She’s flying through the air. She puts her arm straight out and fires four bullets – slow motion.

Three bullets hit 2 along the stomach. He falls to the ground. The fourth bullet hits the building. She hits the ground, rolls and stops. She’s lying just in front of Bodyguard 3. Her arms are straight upwards, pointing the gun at his head, which is looking down at her. He is pointing his machine gun down at her. They are both frozen, just staring at each other. He pulls the trigger. CLICK. He pulls it again. CLICK. She smiles at him, and then pulls the trigger on her gun. CLICK. Her smile quickly disappears. She rolls out from under his just as he moves hit foot to kick her. She stands up, in fighting stance. Bodyguard 3 goes into a similar stance. Bodyguard lets loose. Throwing punches and kicking at her, but she’s matching him blow for blow. They keep going until one well placed punch hits Lauren across the face. She’s dazed for a second. Bodyguard 3 takes the chance, wrapping his thick arms around her neck, choking her. She chokes, trying to breath, but not succeeding. Lauren’s arms are flailing. She reaches for her boots. She grabs a hold of something and pulls it out. It’s a knife. She shoves her arms down hard. The knife digs deep about three inches into his leg. He screams in pain. He gives up on Lauren, and rolls onto the ground. He pulls the knife from his leg and runs at Lauren, with crazy in his eye. Suddenly, two shots are fired. He falls to the ground, dropping the knife.  He is bleeding from the stomach and the leg. Lauren kicks away the knife, and then looks at who fired the shots. Once again, it’s Paul. She nods to him, and then stands up.

Lauren
Thanks

Paul
Don’t mention it.

Lauren looks down at Bodyguard 3. He’s still breathing, but his face is covered in sweat. Paul walks over to them. He looks down at Bodyguard 3. Paul looks confused, like when he saw Bodyguard 2. Paul suddenly realizes who this is.

Cut to: Flashback – We see Bodyguard 3 firing off his Uzi’s.

Cut to: Coffee shop Exterior.

Paul looks in his hand at the gun.

Paul
I remember this guy. He shot at me. I don’t remember when or where, but I remember it.

Lauren
Do what you gotta do.

Bodyguard 3 looks shit scared. Paul aims the gun carefully, then fires off a shot. The shot whizzes past his head. Bodyguard 3 screams, and then realizes nothing happened. He sits up, and then looks up at Paul.

Paul
Just kidding.

Paul fires the gun five times, each bullet hitting Bodyguard 3 in the chest. Paul fires a sixth, which hits Bodyguard 3 right between the eyes. He slumps dead to the ground. In the distance, they hear sirens.

Lauren
Come on Paul. We gotta go.

Paul
Wait a minute. They’re cops. We’ll be safe with them.

Lauren
You forget about the two uniform cops who pulled gun on us.

Paul
You think clean cops would be dumb enough to have their sirens going?

Lauren
Maybe that’s what they want us to think. Go and grab their weapons. I’ll grab theirs and find us a new car.

Paul
What’s wrong with the one we have?

Lauren
Think about it, genius. They tracked us twice. They know what car we’re driving. Now go, before I leave you behind. 

Cut to: Road.

Lauren and Paul are cruising along the road in a different car.

Cut to: Car Interior.

Lauren
Thanks for saving my life back then.

Paul
You’re welcome. Now you owe me one.

Lauren
Don’t start this shit again.

Paul
No, think about it. I shot that guy who was choking you. That puts me one ahead.

Lauren
Oh yeah?

Paul
Yeah.

Lauren
You must have a short memory. If I remember correctly, I moved you out of the way of about a thousand bullets.

Paul
Oh yeah.

Lauren
Oh yeah. Now give up this owing shit. It’s getting on my nerves.

Paul
Sure. You mind if I put some music on?

Lauren
Go ahead.

Paul reaches forward and turns on the stereo. Classical music comes blasting out.

Paul
Whoa whoa whoa!

He turns the knobs until he finds a channel. Rock music fills the car. 

Lauren
I like this song. It’s kind of catchy.

Paul smiles.

Paul
Yeah. Catchy shit, ain’t it?

Lauren
Yeah.

Paul
I know. This is the new shit.

Cut to: Car Exterior.

We pan around the car, getting higher and higher as we go.

Cut to: Motel exterior.

We establish a shot of the place. It looks cheap. 

Cut to: Motel room Interior.

Paul opens the door and looks around. It’s pretty much empty. A bed and some chairs. There’s a kitchen as well. Paul walks into the room and drops on one of the chairs. Lauren comes in after him.

Lauren
Wow. Nice room. Kind of cheap, isn’t it?
Paul
Well, we need to keep a thing called a “low profile”.

Lauren
Shut up man. I’m going to get the stuff. 

Paul
Be quick.

Lauren
Oh, no shit Einstein.

She exits the room.

Cut to: Motel Room Exterior. 

Lauren walks up o the car and gets the keys out of her pocket. She opens the trunk, and then looks around the parking lot. It’s literally empty. She takes two of the automatic weapons out of the trunk. She walks briskly back into the room.

Cut to: Motel Room Interior.

Lauren drops the guns on the bed.

Lauren
Hide them under the mattress.

Paul
Sure.

Paul stands up and lifts up the mattress.

Cut to: Motel Room Interior – Later that day.

Lauren is pacing the room, thinking about what she should do. Paul has the TV on. He’s watching the news.

Paul
Holy Shit. Lauren!

Lauren
What?

Paul
We’re on the news.

Lauren walks over to the TV and turns it up.

Reporter
The twenty seven year old women Lauren Slater

Shows picture of her in uniform.

Reporter
And the sixteen year old boy Paul Oakes

Shows picture of him.

Reporter
Gunned down two police officers earlier this morning. When the police pursued, the two vigilantes sped off in their stolen car. They left a wreck that could only be described as horrifying. 

Helicopter shot of the freeway.

Reporter
Three 4WD’s were left engulfed in flames, and two innocent men Douglas Adams and his friend Joey Doyle were gunned down. And later on in the afternoon, they opened fire on a coffee shop further up the highway. 

Helicopter shot of the coffee shop.

Eighteen innocent people inside were gunned down. But that wasn’t enough for these maniacs. When they exited the shop, the tortured and killed five men in the parking lot. They then ditched a car and stole one of the innocent people’s cars, and then sped away. 

Back to reporter.

We’ll keep you updated. And in other news…

Lauren turns off the TV. Paul is stunned at what he saw.

Paul
That’s bullshit. Total bullshit.

Lauren
I know. I know. Now Fox is blaming the shit on us. 

Paul
How could he do that? I thought the only people that could announce that are cops.

Lauren
Fox has gotten a huge list of cops on his pay list. 

She pats her pockets, looking for something.

Paul
Lost something?

Lauren pats another pocket, and then stops. She reaches into her pocket and pulls out the phone. She wags her hand. She presses some numbers on the phone, and then holds it up to her ear. 

Shaun (O.S.)
Hello?

Lauren
Hello shithead. It’s me, Lauren.

Shaun (O.S.)
What the fuck is happening up there. I ask you to run transport. And what do you do. You get thirty something people killed in the process.

Lauren
That wasn’t my fault.

Shaun (O.S.)
Oh really. Well why don’t you amaze with some of your amazing cop work shit and tell me just who the fuck shot all those people at that shop?

Lauren
You been there?

Shaun (O.S.)
Yep. Got back to the station about five minutes ago.

Lauren
You saw the five men in the parking lot?

Shaun (O.S.)
Yeah.

Lauren
It was them.

Shaun (O.S.)
Oh really. And why, when they were discovered, were they not armed with anything other that one ugly face?

Lauren
Because I have their weapons. I’m properly armed now. Rather than that piece of shit six shooter you gave me. 

  Shaun (O.S.)
What weapons have you got?

Lauren
Five automatics, one shotgun and two handguns.

Shaun (O.S.)
Where’d the shotgun come from?

Lauren
Found it in their car.

Shaun (O.S.)
And the two handguns.

Lauren
I stashed ‘em in the car.

Shaun (O.S.)
What are you going to do?

Lauren
Sleep here the night, then take him upstate tomorrow. Get him up there. Something might jog his memory. By the way. One of the guys on the highway mentioned something about a tape.

Shaun (O.S.)
What kind of tape?

Lauren
A video tape. He said the reason that they’re after us is because they think we’re going for the tape. Did you find any tapes in his house?

Shaun (O.S.)
Nope. We found a video camera, a couple of normal tapes and DVD’s, but no video camera tapes. 

Lauren
Well, I can tell you one thing.

Shaun (O.S.)
What’s that?

Lauren
They sure are playing with him.

Shaun (O.S.)
How’s that?

Lauren
Both times, they sent somebody that was at the house.

Shaun (O.S.)
Hmm. That’s strange. You figure out why?

Lauren
Nope. But we must be close if they’re making two attempts in one day.

Shaun (O.S.)
Well, we can only hope they try again.

Lauren
Yeah, right. Listen, I gotta go. I’ll call you tomorrow.

Shaun (O.S.)
Good luck. Bye.

Lauren
See ya.

She hangs up the phone and drops it down on the table. 

Paul
Any luck?

Lauren
Nope. Just gave me a bunch of shit. Pretty much the usual.

Paul
Oh well. We’re doing alright so far. I bet somebody up there must like us.
 
Lauren
Must be me they like.
Paul
Yeah right. Have we got anything to eat? I’m starving.

Lauren
I’ll check.

Cut to: Interior Motel room – later that day.

Paul and Lauren are watching TV. Paul is channel surfing. He turns the TV off.

Paul
What do you wanna do?

Lauren
I dunno. We can’t risk leaving the room. If we stay away, we’ll be right.

Paul
You know. I can’t wait to find out what all this shit is about. This guy must want me pretty if he’s trying to kill me now. He could have done it in the hospital. But he’s choosing to do it now. Why?

Lauren
Because you’re with me.

Paul
What do you mean?

Lauren
About three months ago, I was in a good relationship. I was going to get married. My fiancé was great. The day before I got married, Me and my team took down one of his biggest operations. We seized something like 3 million of his money, plus a shitload of drugs. He finds out about it and gets pissed off. So he hires six fuckheads to come kill me and my family. They shoot up the church, a heap of mine and his family.

Paul
And him?

Lauren
He took three in the chest, just before I could shoot their last man. He took those bullets trying to save me. Well, himself as well, but I was part of that deal as well. After that, I got “put on holiday”. I was sitting around for three months, drinking and practicing for the day I would be able to walk up to that man, put a gun to his head, and let him watch me pull the trigger. And this tape, whatever the hell it is, is going to help me do that.

Paul
But busting him ain’t going to help you do that.
Lauren
Who says he’s going to come peacefully?

Paul
Good point. But we have to survive first.

Lauren
I know.

Paul
You know, I’m going to hate watching my family die again tomorrow.

Lauren
Why do you think you made the tape for.

Paul
I have absolutely no idea. But I’m sure glad I did.

Lauren stands up from her seat.

Lauren
We need to get some sleep. We got a big day tomorrow.

Paul
Sure thing. I’ll take the couch. You have the bed.

Lauren
Sure thing.

Cut to: Early the next morning.

Subtitle:
3 AM

Lauren is lying on the bed with her eyes open. She hears what sounds like 3 cars pulling up outside. She gets up from the bed and walks over to the window. She moves the curtain a little with her hand to see out. There are 3 4WD’s parked outside. Men are getting out of the car, armed with machine guns and shotguns. 

Lauren
Shit!

Lauren walks briskly over to the couch and shakes Paul awake. He’s a bit groggy for a second, then…

Paul
Yeah?

Lauren
They’re outside.

Paul
What?

Lauren
There’s like a whole platoon of assholes out there armed to the teeth.

Paul
What can we do?

Lauren
These walls are paper thin. Once they start shooting, we crash through as far as we can go. We sneak out, and take the pricks down.

Paul
You’re crazy.

Lauren
Thank you. Get the guns.

Lauren walks back over to the window and peaks outside. Paul walks over to the bed and lifts up the mattress, then heaves it away. He grabs four of the machine guns. Lauren pulls away from the window and walks over to Paul. Paul hands her two of the machine guns. He keeps two for himself.

Paul
What can we do with the fifth?

Lauren
Leave it. Lets move. It’s showtime.

They walk over to the wall and stand about a meter away from it. About ten seconds later, a cascade of bullets come flying through the room. They tear up the bed, the couch, everything.

Lauren
Now!

They both run and jump through the wall. They crash through. They keep running and crashing through walls. After three walls, they stop. Lauren looks back in the room they were staying in. The bullets stop.
Lauren
Let’s go.

Lauren walks over to the door, rears her foot up, and kicks the door outwards. The door goes flying. Lauren runs out side wards, firing off both machine guns. Bullets tear up the parking lot, hitting three men in their travels. She rolls and runs back, and then dives behind the ice box. She peaks out and has a look how many goons there are.

Paul
How many?

Lauren
Twelve I can see. Be careful.

Paul
Always.

Paul puts his head, so he can see with one eye. He sees one of the guys close to him is reloading his gun. Paul leans out and aims his weapon. He fires it, letting loose five bullets. They hit the guy in the chest, sending him to the ground. Lauren ducks out and fires away. She knocks three guys down. Lauren then ducks back behind the ice box.

Lauren
Check the room for something we can use.

Paul
Gotcha.

Paul ducks into the room to look for something. What he doesn’t see is one of the goons sneaking through the holes in the walls. Paul turns around and sees the man coming through the hole in that room’s wall. Paul brings the gun in his left hand up and sprays. The bullets hit the in the head and the chest. The man is thrown back into the room. Paul turns and spots a box of matches. He looks around and spots an unopened bottle of rum. Paul walks over and grabs them both. He then walks back to the hole, where Lauren is firing away.

Paul
How many left?

Lauren
Six. Whatdya find?

Paul
A bottle of rum and matches. Are you thinking what I’m thinking?

Lauren
Oh god, I hope so. 

Paul
Ready?

Lauren
Yeah. Go.

Paul leans out and throws the bottle into the air. Once it’s above the goon’s heads, Lauren takes aim and fires. One bullet shatters the glass. The alcohol showers over them. Paul grabs a match, and lights it. One it’s flaring, he puts it back in the box. The other matches start to light. Paul leans out and hurls it through the air. 

We follow the match box fly through the air – slow mo

The matches lands down on one of the guys covered in the rum. The rum lights up. So does the man. He runs around, trying to put himself out. He grabs other guys, setting them on fire as well. About ten seconds, after the man was lit up, five guys are running around on fire, and then stumbling to the ground, dead. Lauren peaks out at who is left. There is one guy, who can do nothing but watch the chaos. 

Lauren
Hey!

The man turns to look at her. Lauren shoots him right between the eyes. He falls down, dead. Lauren then stands up from behind the ice box and strolls over to where they were. Lauren looks around at the bodies. Paul comes out of the room and is walking around with her. Paul is walking around, when something pulls on his leg. Paul falls to the ground, smashing his watch. Paul stands back up and looks at what grabbed him. It’s one of the men. He is alive. Barely, but alive. Paul reaches into his jacket. He pulls out a handgun, and drops his arm. 

Paul
God forgive me.

He fires three times. All the bullets hit the man in the chest. He is now dead. He looks over at Lauren.

Lauren
How long until dawn?

Paul looks at his watch, but it’s broken from the fall.

Paul
Dunno. It’s broken.
Lauren
Let’s go. The cops will clean this up.

Lauren steps over the bodies looking down at them. She stops over one man. She kneels down, and takes the pair of Uzi’s he’s holding. She walks over to the car they are in and opens the door. She throws the Uzi’s in, and then climbs in. Paul isn’t far behind her.

Cut to: Car Exterior

We pan above the car, doing an aerial shot. We see the sun has started to come up. 

Cut to: Car Interior

Lauren is driving. Paul is fiddling with the watch.

Paul
Where are we going?

Lauren
I don’t know. We’ll figure that out when we get there. 

Paul gets a hold of the watch front. He pulls it off, breaking it off. He winds down his window, and then disposes of it out the window. He looks down at the watch. Sitting inside, is the key.

Paul
Lauren.

Lauren
What?

Paul grabs the key, and shows it to her. She takes it, and studies it closely.

Lauren
This here is a locker key. Number fifteen. But where is the locker.

Paul
Where was the last populated place I was?

Lauren
The train station.

Paul
Is that where we’re going?

Lauren
That’s where we’re going.

Cut to: Car Exterior

We have another aerial shot of the car driving along the road.

Cut to: Train station exterior.

We establish a beginner shot.

Cut to: Train station Interior.

We see Paul and Lauren walking side by side through the train station. They are both looking around the station. Paul spots the lockers. He points at them.

Paul
Over there.

They turn towards the lockers.

Cut to: Train station lockers.

Lauren sticks the key in the slot. She turns it, and then opens the door. Inside, is the tape. She reaches in and grabs it. She brings it out, and shows it to Paul.

Lauren
Bingo. Let’s go see what’s on this tape. 

Cut to: Shopping Mall Exterior

We see their car pull up in the parking lot.

Cut to: Car interior

Lauren changes the gear into park. She opens the door, and then looks over at Paul. She shuts the door, and sits back in her seat. She hands him a handgun.

Lauren
Take this. If anybody sneaks up on the car, put two in their brains. Got it?

Paul
Yeah.

Slight pause.

Lauren
I’ll be right back.

Paul
Sure.

She opens the door, and gets out. She shuts the door behind her. 

Cut to: Mall interior.

Lauren is walking through the mall, looking around at the shops. She sees a raffle going on for two motorbikes.

Lauren
That is a nice ride.

She spots an electronics shop. She walks in.

Cut to: Electronics shop.

Lauren walks into the shop and up to the counter.

Man behind counter
Hello. Can I help you?

Lauren
Yeah. I need to see what’s on this tape.

Man behind counter
May I ask why?

Lauren
No.

Man behind counter
I’m sorry. You must buy a video camera before you can view that tape.

Lauren reaches into her pocket, and pulls out a badge.

Lauren
Now can I?

Man behind counter
Ahh, yes. Of course. Any one you fancy.

Lauren
Thank you.

Lauren walks away from the counter down into the shop. She stops at a big screen TV. She opens the tape slot in the video camera, pops the tape in, and presses rewind. After a few seconds, she presses stop, and then play. We watch the scene on the video. The shooting etc. The man with his back to the camera starts to turn around, when…

A bullet shatters the TV. Lauren spins around, grabbing her gun and looking where the bullet came from. We see a man standing there, holding a smoking gun. We see him go for the trigger again. Lauren whips her gun out and shoots him twice in the chest. He falls to the ground, dead.

Cut to: Parking lot.

Paul is sitting in the car, listening to the radio. He spots something in the mirror on the door. He grabs the gun and points it towards the door window. A man appears at the window, wearing sunglasses and holding a gun. It’s Bodyguard 1. Paul shoots him in the head. He goes flying into the car next to it. Paul looks out his window, and spots men converging around the car. He opens his door, and throws the gun out. He steps out, his hands outstretched in the air. Three men dressed entirely in black come up behind him and grab him roughly. They drag him away.

Cut to: Mall

Lauren peaks out the frame. She spots men running and hiding behind various things in the mall. Lauren aims her gun and fires. She hits a man hiding behind a plant, another behind a sign. She runs out of the shop, just as one of the men fires a machine gun. The bullets tear up the floor behind her. The rolls along the ground, and stops behind one of the bikes. People are running all over the place. Lauren looks up at the bike. It has the key in the ignition. She peaks out, and sees the man reloading his gun. Lauren stands up, firing. Bullets hit him up the body, sending him to the ground. Lauren grabs the Uzi from the back of her trousers, and jumps on the bike. She starts it up, just as more men run into her view. 

Lauren
Just like I practiced.

She takes off towards one of the men. Se brings his gun up level. Lauren pulls back, pulling the bike into a wheelie. She stays that way until she comes close enough to the man. She aims with the Uzi, and fires. Bullets tear up the floor, and chunk into the man. He falls to the ground. A man jumps out from behind a sign. Lauren pulls the brake, brings the ass end of the bike up behind her, and swings around. The back wheel hits the man across the face. He falls to the ground, unconscious. She revves the bike, and takes off towards the escalators. Two men jump out behind her and fire. A bullet hits the back light. 

Lauren
Oh fuck this.

She spins her body around, while keeping the bike going in the direction. She fires the Uzi, killing both men. She turns and puts both hands back on the handlebars. She goes riding up the escalator. She keeps going. When she reaches the top, she pulls back, getting air off the top of the escalator. Waiting there is a man armed with a shotgun. As she flies through the air, she fires at him. The bullets hit him along the chest. He fires off the shotgun, bursting the back wheel. Lauren hears this happen. As the bike gets closer to the ground, she pushes off. The bike crashes along the ground, and hitting a goon in the legs, sending him forward onto the bike. Lauren lands on the ground with ease. She spots the man standing back up. She runs as fast as she can towards him. He grabs a hold of his hand gun, bringing it up, just as Lauren kicks his hand. This sends the gun off into another direction. Lauren punches the man in the face. He falls back, dazed. She stands over him.

Lauren
Let me guess. Seth Fox sent you.

Man
Yeah.

Lauren
What about the kid?

Man
They got him. They’re taking him back to the building.

Lauren
And where is that?

Man
I can’t tell you.

Lauren grabs his head with her right hand. With her left, she revves the bike, sending the wheels turning. She pushes his face closer and closer towards the wheel. He is screaming.

Man
OK. OK. I have an address in my pocket. I’ll get it for you.

He reaches into his jacket. Lauren hears a noise. She turns and looks to where it came from, just as the man brings out another handgun. He points it straight up at her. She turns back suddenly. She grabs his arm with both ands, and forces the gun so it’s pointing at his gut.

Lauren
Say hi to your friends for me.

She squeezes his finger, which forces him to pull the trigger. The bullet explodes out his back. He is wheezing for air. A few seconds later, he’s dead. Lauren drops the gun and goes searching. She reaches into his jeans pocket. She feels a piece of paper. She grabs it, and pulls it put. She looks at it. On the piece of paper, is an address. She scrunches the paper, and then takes off.

Cut to: Hopkins home

We see Hopkins sitting on a chair, eating chips and watching TV. His phone rings. He picks it up.

Hopkins
Hello?

Lauren
Hopkins?

Hopkins
Lauren?

Lauren
Yeah.

Hopkins
Shit. What are you doing calling me?

Lauren
I don’t have anybody else to call. You heard I was hauling that kid upstate, right?

Hopkins
Yeah.

Lauren
And you saw the report on TV, right?

Hopkins
Yeah. The entire station is out looking for you. They say you’ve killed the kid, and gone completely psycho.

Lauren
That’s bullshit. We were driving along, and out of nowhere comes a whole army of assholes. We’ve been hit four times. Fox has the kid. He’s holding him in the KKXV building.
Hopkins
What do you want me to do?

Lauren
Call in some reinforcements. People we can trust. Don’t forget about the rats.

Hopkins
What about Shaun?

Lauren
I tried calling him, but his phone must be turned off or something.

Hopkins
When do you want us to be there?

Lauren
Next hour.

Hopkins
Done.

Cut to: KKXV Building exterior

We establish a shot.

Cut to: KKXV Building interior

We see Seth standing at the desk. Paul is sitting in a chair on the opposite side of the desk. His arms are tied down to the chairs arms.

Seth
You know. I’ve been looking for you. And it was just brilliant that you were paired with the biggest pain in my ass. Any time now, she’ll be here. And when she does, I can take care of you.

Paul
Why don’t you kill me now?

Seth
Because I want her to watch. This’ll be the second time I’ve been responsible for somebody’s death that she could have stopped.

Paul
You killed my entire family. 

Seth
Well, I’m doing you a favor.

Paul
How?

Seth
I’ll be reuniting you with them in about an hour.

Paul
Why did you kill them?

Seth
Why do you care?

Paul
I have a right to know.

Seth
Fair enough. Your father was taking care of drugs for us. We found out he was stealing from us. We had to take care of him.

Paul
And my mother and sister?

Seth
That wasn’t me. My supporter took care of them.

Paul
And who’s that?

Seth
You’ll find out soon. You might even know him.

Cut to: KKXV Building Exterior

We see a car parked on the other side of the street. A car pulls up behind it, and Hopkins gets out. He walks over to the car, and gets in. Sitting on the drivers side, is Lauren.

Hopkins
Nice to see you again.

Lauren
Thanks. Where’s the help?

Hopkins
I didn’t know who we could trust. I don’t even know how you could trust me.

Lauren
I don’t have a choice. Take a look inside.

Wee look through the glass wall. There is a receptionist desk, but a shitload of guys standing around. We get the feeling they are all carrying weapons.

Hopkins
Entrance looks tight.

Lauren
I know. Once we’re in, it’ll be easy.

Hopkins
How do you know the kids in there?

Lauren
He knows I’m coming. He wants me to watch him kill the kid. But he’s not expecting the two of us. 

Hopkins
Are we going in now?

Lauren
Yeah. I got an idea.

Cut to: KKXV Building interior.

We start off in the buildings bottom floor. All the men are walking around, talking to each other. Just then, the car Hopkins was driving crashes through the glass. The glass flies along the floor and the air. All the men whip out weapons and runs over to the car. With weapons ready to fie, they run over to the driver’s door and look inside. Nothing. They check the back. Nobody. The men surround the car. Just then, the trunk flies open. Sitting in their, armed with a pair of Uzi’s, is Lauren.

Lauren
Hi.

She opens fire, hitting all the men in view. They fly back from the force. She climbs out of the trunk. As she’s half out, two men run around the car and take aim. Suddenly, we hear two shotgun shots. The men’s chests explode outwards and they fly into the car’s back door. Standing at the entrance, is Hopkins. Lauren jumps out of the trunk, and takes aim. She scans the room for anybody left. She sees the receptionist hiding behind her desk. We also see that she’s taken a bullet in the leg. Lauren walks over to her. Lauren stands over her. Lauren points one of the Uzi’s at her head. 

Lauren
Tell me your name.

Rachael
It’s Rachael.

Lauren
I’m going to ask you two questions Rachael. The first is, do you want to live through this?

Rachael
Yes.

Lauren
Good. Then you don’t want to answer the second question wrongly.

Rachael
Which is?

Lauren
Which floor is Seth Fox on?

Rachael
Fifteenth.

Lauren
Are you lying to me?

Rachael
No

Lauren
Good. Now get out of here, before you get fired. 

Rachael runs out of the building, past Hopkins.

Lauren
Good stuff.

Hopkins
What am I doing?

Lauren
There are two stairways. I’ll take the one which opens up in the offices. In six minutes, take the other set up. They lead up directly to Fox’s office.

Hopkins
You need some kind of distraction.

Lauren
I know.

She looks over at the elevator.

Cut to: Fifteenth floor.

There are nine guys sitting around, talking and holding automatic weapons. The elevator starts moving and making noises. All the men stand up when they hear it. The walk over to the elevator and hold their weapons ready. The elevator dings, and then the doors open. The men open fire on the elevator. The bullet hit the opposite wall. After a few seconds, they realize nobody is in there. They all look over at one man. He points at one of the men, and then points in the elevator. The man he pointed to walks into the elevator. He looks at all the walls, down at the floor, and then up at the roof. He shrugs his shoulders.

Man in elevator
There’s nobody here.

Just then, the door behind then burst open. In runs Lauren, armed with two handguns. She fires off bullets, killing six men as she runs in through the door. The other three bring their guns up level and fire. Lauren does a side flip and fires again. Another man hits the floor. She ducks down behind a desk. The men keep firing, until both their guns go click click. They slide the magazines out of the guns. Lauren hears the clips hit the floor. She runs out from behind the desk. She runs up in front of one of the men, and kicks him in the side. He spins around. Lauren grabs him around the neck, and fires the gun in her left hand at the other man. He hits the floor. Lauren then puts the barrel to the other man’s back and fires a lone bullet. It bursts out his chest, killing him instantly. Lauren lets him go and he slumps to the floor. Lauren slides the clips out of the guns. She jams new ones in, and then slides back the hammers. She hears the bullets enter the pipe, and then she walks over to double doors. She kicks them in and enters the room, guns outdrawn. She sees Paul strapped to the chair, Fox sitting at his desk, and three men armed with shotguns. They are all pointed at Lauren. She also sees Hopkins sitting on the couch, holding a glass.

Fox
Welcome to my building Mrs Slater. Or should I call you Ms Slater. Now. Drop your guns on the floor now or these fine gentlemen will blow you in half.

Lauren drops her guns to her sides. 

Fox
Thank you.

Lauren
What is he…?

Fox
Doing here?

Lauren
Yeah.

Hopkins
You see Lauren. I’ve been in his pocket a few days after the seizure at the drug deal. I’m actually doing pretty well for myself.

Fox
It’s beautiful. The only person you call for backup, and he’s crooked. It was so clear. 

Hopkins
You gotta love it.

Fox
But I’m afraid you’re getting a bit too expensive.

He waves at one of the men with the shotguns. He points his gun at Hopkins. Hopkins smile disappears.

Fox
Seeya later Hopkins.

The man shoots Hopkins in the chest. The blast sends the chair onto its back. Hopkins’ chest explodes. He screams, and dies.

Fox
I enjoyed that. And guess what. I’ve got my friend in the other room. My first and best crooked pig. He’s the main person responsible for your husband’s death. You want to talk to him? I’m afraid you might not be happy at his identity.

He presses a button on his phone. 

Fox
Can you send our friend in here please?

A few seconds later, a door to the side opens. In walks a huge guy. He steps aside. Standing directly behind him is… Shaun Banks.

Shaun
Hiya Lauren.

Lauren
You fucking son of a bitch!

Shaun
Calm down Lauren. You have a horrible temper.

Lauren
How could you do this?

Shaun
Oh, it’s simple. I got a little number of money. I met Fox here. I get more money. Is that simple enough for you?

Lauren
Why?

Shaun
You were a pain in both our asses. I organized the hit to take place on your wedding day. Why do you think I wasn’t there?

Lauren
So they’re all dead because of you.

Shaun
Well, me and Seth.

Fox
Yeah. Don’t forget that plot point.

Shaun
I was there that day, Paul. I was the man who killed your family. And I’m about to finish the family off. Not myself of course. But I‘m going to be responsible for it.

We see Lauren thinking.

Cut to: Video of shooting.

We see the man with his back towards us turn. We only see the side of his face. But we can now tell its Shaun.

Cut to: The office

Shaun
Now. I have to go. I’ll call back here when I’m at my car in the basement and I’ll see how things went. Cool?

Fox
Yeah. Cool man.

Shaun
See ya later.

Fox
Bye.

Shaun
Bye Lauren. Now, when you get to where you’re going, I want you to say hi to Mark for me. And you Paul. I want you to tell your father that’s what he gets for stealing from crime lords. Bye Bye.

He waves his hand, and then walks out of the door on the opposite side to where he came in. 

Fox
Now I only have two problems left. And they are both in this office. And I’m also about to fix them in about thirty seconds. 

Fox opens a drawer and pulls out an automatic handgun.

Fox
Now, do you have anything to say?

Paul shakes his head.

Fox
And you Lauren?

Lauren
Yeah. Two things. One. I knew Hopkins was crooked since the day you bought him. And two. I didn’t just call him.

Fox
What do you mean?

Just then, the door Shaun came through bursts open. Standing there is the huge man who walked Shaun in. But behind him, with a gun jammed in the big mans ear, is Baldwin.
Baldwin
Knock knock motherfuckers.

Just then, the first man swings around and shoots at them. The blast catches the big man in the chest. Baldwin fires, hitting him twice. He fires five more shots, killing the other man where he stands. Lauren sees Fox turning to shoot him. Lauren flips her guns up with her foot. She catches it in her hands. She turns her guns to the third man. She fires three shots at the man. One catches in between the eyes. He screams and fires the gun before he dies. The blast hits a few feet left of Lauren. Fox shoots his gun, letting a burst of bullets loose in Baldwin’s direction. The blast hits him in the stomach and the chest. He flies back through the door he came through. Fox turns and fires on Lauren.

Lauren dives right, extending her arms and firing her guns – slow motion. 

Two bullets hit Fox. One in the side of his gut, the other in the shoulder – slow motion. 

He stops firing and falls back into his chair – slow motion.

Lauren hits the ground with smoking guns. She stands upright and looks around the room, and stops on Fox. She sees his been hit. She walks over to Paul and whips out a knife. She slices the tape holding him to the chair. He stands up and looks at Fox. Fox can do nothing but stare at the two. Lauren hands him one of her guns. He looks at her puzzled. She points her gun at him. 

Paul
Oh. I see.

The two walk over so they are standing directly in front of him. They take aim, and fire away. Bullets riddle his body, making it jump like its being electrocuted. They stop, and realize the phone is ringing.

Lauren
Don’t answer it. We’ll surprise him. Let’s go.

They take off.

Cut to: KKXV Basement.

Shaun is standing next to his car, phone to his ear. He is tapping his foot, impatiently. He looks around the parking lot, and spots Lauren and Paul sneaking around behind cars.

Shaun
Shit.

He drops the phone. It hits the ground with a clatter – slow motion.

He jumps into his car and guns the engine. Lauren and Paul stand out from their hiding spot. Shaun starts the car, and drives off. Lauren and Paul aim their guns at the fleeing car and fire. Bullets bounce off the trunk and smash the brake lights, but not one hits Shaun. He turns left, and speeds off down the street. Lauren looks around for something. She spots a convertible car. The license plate says Fox 197. Lauren runs over to the car and looks in the ignition. The keys are dangling there. She jumps in the car and guns the engine. Paul gets in next to her. She speeds up the ramp, gaining air as she goes. Once she hits the ground, she swerves left. She spots Shaun speeding away. Lauren slams her foot down on the accelerator, speeding up close behind him. She slams into the back of his car. He is thrown forward. He turns and looks at what hit him. Lauren waves her hand at him. He grabs something from the passenger seat and swings his arm behind him. It’s a gun. He fires off shots. Lauren and Shaun keep swerving, dodging bullets. One hits Paul in the shoulder. Lauren snips Shaun’s bumper, sending him side wards and then into a roll. His car smashes through a chain fence, and rolls along the empty space. It comes to a stop. Lauren spins the car to a stop. The two watch what happens. Shaun climbs out, armed with a sawn off shotgun. He runs along the lot. Lauren drives slowly after him. Finally, he collapses to the ground. Lauren pulls the car to a stop, and climbs out. Paul does the same. They walk up to him, guns drawn ready to shoot if he gives them any trouble. They stop when they are standing about five feet away from them.

Paul
Hey scumbag.

Shaun looks up at them.

Paul
I bet you weren’t expecting your business to go like this, huh bitch?

Lauren leans down and picks up the sawn off shotgun.

Lauren
What are you doing with this?

Shaun
It is pretty cool.

Lauren
Yeah, I suppose it is. Where did you get something like this?

Shaun murmurs something. We can’t hear him, so Lauren steps closer to him. 

Lauren
What?

Shaun stands up on his knees and drives a knife straight through Laurens leg. She screams, and falls to the ground, holding it. Shaun brings the knife up high and goes to stab her when we hear a shot fired. The bullet exploded out of Shaun’s stomach. He drops the knife, and puts his hand to the wound. He falls backwards, away from Lauren. Lauren stands up shaky and looks who fired. Paul stands there, holding a smoking gun.

Paul
Is he dead?

Lauren
Pretty much.

Paul
Can we go?

Lauren
Yeah.

The two walk away. We hear a shot fired, and Lauren jerk around. She’s been shot in the shoulder. Shaun is sitting upright, pointing the gun. As Lauren dives round, he fires repeatedly. They all miss. Lauren fires off the sawn off shotgun. The blast hits Shaun in the chest. He sits there for a second, and then slumps to the ground, dead. Lauren drops the shotgun, and supports herself on Paul’s shoulder. They walk away from him, just as police cars pull up to the scene. 

Paul
Now we’re even.

The camera pulls up doing an aerial shot of the scene.

Cut to black.

Run Credits.